Star-Chan: Hello my fellow readers! I AM SO SORRY I have not updated in, what a month? It's just that school has been really busy with this huge biology project and 2 other projects and finals this week. TT then after that the high school exit exams. The joy[I'm a 10th grader though So I'll try my best to type my story!
Let's do a little backtracking shall we?
It was a little after noon, Sasuke and Sakura had went looking from Ino, though got a text from her saying she was fine and both went home. Naruto and Hinata were out on a date, and so were Neji and Tenten. Shikamaru on the other hand had disappeared after his little "thing" with Temari at the coffee shop, and Ino is still no where to be found, but is safe or so she says.
Chapter 6: Perfect Date…until!
Naruto and Hinata were walking through the park on a bright and sunny afternoon. They both thought it was a good idea to get away from the house, and the stupid bet and just an afternoon of alone time.
"Hinata-chan, I promise you this is a day that you would never forget!" Naruto beamed a smile at Hinata who blushed and nodded.
"S-So, wh-what do you h-have pl-planed?" Hinata stuttered Naruto's face fell slightly but continued smiling.
"Hinata-chan, have you ever tried to stop your stuttering?" Naruto asked the younger Hyuuga who shook her head. It never occurred to her that she could, she has been stuttering since she was young, but it gets even worse when she gets so nervous around Naruto.
"Well I'm going to break your habit!"
Hinata stared blankly at Naruto wondering how on earth he can cure of her stuttering.
"Okay Hinata-chan, you have to speak without thinking about stuttering. Don't be nervous; just let yourself say whatever you want to say! It doesn't matter if you say something wrong, just laugh it off, that's what I do. Try it Hinata-chan, I believe in you."
Hinata blushed at Naruto's confidence in her. She looked at Naruto who smiled a smile filled with support. Hinata took a deep breath and cleared her mind of everything but what she wanted to say.
"S…So Naruto-kun…what do you have in mind?" Naruto smiled at Hinata who smiled back. Naruto pulled Hinata into his arms.
"I'm so proud of you, though you need a little more work, but slowly it would be easier and your stuttering will eventually stop! I believed in you Hinata-chan and I knew you wouldn't let me down!" Naruto pulled away and looked at the tomato red Hinata. He tucked a strand of dark blue with some trace of purple hair that was on Hinata's face behind her ear and stroked her face with his thumb.
"You're so beautiful Hinata-Chan." Hinata blushed a deeper shade of red and said thank you. Naruto stepped away from Hinata towards a garden of flowers. He looked through them quickly and plucked a pink one from the bunch.
"Naruto-kun, I-I don't think that was a good idea!" Hinata said to Naruto who was now standing in front of her. He took the pink flower and tucked it behind Hinata's ear.
"I didn't just pick it to be mean, I picked it for you."
Hinata's eyes widened and gave Naruto a sweet smile.
"Thank You Naruto-kun." She said to him. Naruto leaned in closer to Hinata who looked at him curiously and blushed at the little distance between her and Naruto.
"Hinata-chan, if I kiss you will you promise me not to faint?"
Hinata blushed deeper; her cheeks feel like it's a fire from the heat. She nodded quickly.
"Okay good, cause I really want to kiss you right now." Naruto said and placed his lips gently over Hinata's. She blushed a million shades of red, her pearl eyes were wide open, but she slowly started to close it to take in the full sensation of the sweet kiss. She felt Naruto wrap his arms around her pulling her closer to him, to deepen the kiss. Hinata ran her hand through Naruto's smooth hair and put her arms around his neck. They stayed like that for a while until both of them needed air. Naruto looked over at Hinata who was blushing a deep red she was fidgeting with her fingers and was afraid to look at Naruto, fearing seeing his cute face she would pass out for sure.
"Hinata-chan, are you okay?" Naruto asked the younger Hyuuga when she didn't say or do anything for the pass several minutes. She still didn't say anything. Naruto started to get nervous that she is hurt in anyway and started looking at her back, front, and side seeing if there is any sign that she was hurt.
"Oi, Hinata-chan, don't scare me, are you o-"Naruto didn't finish his sentence because Hinata was slowly falling towards the ground. Naruto gasped and caught her right before she hit the floor.
"I'm sorry Naruto-kun, I felt a little lightheaded just now."
Naruto put Hinata on his back and started walking through the park again. Hinata saw people stare and smile whispering "what a cute couple" and blushed.
"Naruto-ku-kun, pl-please let me down!"
"No way, and there you go with your stuttering again, don't be nervous Hinata-chan, it's not like I would drop you or anything. Besides I don't want you to feel 'lighted headed' and faint again!"
"It's just all these people…"
"SCREW THEM they can stare and be as jealous as they want to be! I'm not letting you down until I bring you to the place where I want to go!" Naruto stated loud enough for everyone to hear, and stare at them. Hinata looked away and blushed resting her head on his back. After a few more minutes of walking Naruto came to a stop and let Hinata down. Hinata looked around and saw…a playground.
"Naruto-kun, what are we doing here?" She questioned her boyfriend who grinned at her.
"To play of course, when was the last time we did something like this Hinata-chan?"
Hinata had to admit that they haven't been to a playground in far too long. Looking at the swings and slides brought back smile-worthy memories from there younger years. Naruto took Hinata's hand and ran towards the swings. He ushered Hinata to sit down, and she did.
"Naruto-kun, why don't you sit on the one next to me?"
Naruto shook his head. He walked behind Hinata and started pushing her watching her go higher and higher and heard her beautiful laughter. He decided Hinata has gone high enough and ran to the one next to hers like she told him to and started swinging.
"Bet I can go higher then you!" Naruto called out to Hinata who shook her head and swung higher. The two happy couple stayed on the swings for a bit longer and decided they had enough for one day. The moved on to the next fun there they see…slides!
"Hinata-chan hurry up, you're so slow!" Naruto laughed as they climbed there way to the highest part of the slide. Naruto got to the top and waited for Hinata. He made Hinata sit on the slide first and he sat right behind her holding on to her waist.
"Are you ready Hinata-chan? "
"Yes I am! Let's GO!" Hinata said pushing forward and so did Naruto. They slid around a curve and in circles and finally ended at the bottom, both laughing happily. They ran over to a little metal horse that has a bouncy spring at the bottom making them able to rock back and forth. Hinata sat in front holding on to the handle while Naruto was in back holding tightly to Hinata making sure he doesn't fall off.
"Naruto-kun, let's take a picture for memory!" Hinata said taking out her phone. Naruto leaned closer to Hinata to get into the picture.
"Ready…one, two, three!" Hinata clicked the take button and just when she did Naruto kissed Hinata on the cheek. Hinata and Naruto both looked at the picture and agreed it was perfect.
"Don't rock to far back Hinata-chan, I might fall off." Naruto said seeing that his butt was only half on the saddle of the horse. Hinata giggled and rocked a little bit harder just to scare Naruto.
"Oi, Hinata-chan, I'm not kidding…I'm going to-"Naruto said as he felt his hand let go of Hinata's waist hitting the floor. Hinata heard on thump and turned around to see Naruto on the ground rubbing the back of his head.
"Naruto-kun!" Hinata got off the horse and ran over to Naruto and help him up.
"Ow…I think there's a bump on my head." Naruto said rubbing the place of his head where it hit the floor.
"Sorry, I'm so sorry…I didn't mean to do it too hard!" Hinata said tears forming at the corner of her eyes and sliding down her cheeks. Naruto looked at Hinata and smiled. He wept away the tears.
"It's okay don't cry, I'll be fine, it was my fault for not holding on more tightly. I'm just going to go to the bathroom and get a cold paper towel to rub on it to see if it gets better okay? So just stay here and wait for me." Naruto said and hugged Hinata quickly before heading off to the bathroom. Hinata smiled at how understanding Naruto could be, even though it was clearly her fault that he is hurt, he still tries to make her feel better by saying it wasn't.
"Hello Hinata,"
Hinata turned around to see who was calling her name and her face grew angry and gave the girl a good death glare.
"Karin, what do you want?"
"Oh nothing, was just wondering how all of you guys are doing on my challenge." The red-head said.
"Everyone's doing fine for your information."
"Oh not from what I heard, I hear that our little Shikamaru and Ino got into a fight earlier today…what a pity."
"What are you talking about?" Hinata said not knowing that something happened to Ino and Shikamaru.'
"Yes I had something to do with Shikamaru going to met Temari behind Ino's back or something like that. Don't believe me? Go ahead and call your little pink haired friend and ask her."
"Just because they had a small argument doesn't mean we lose the bet, you said it yourself only if one couple breaks up then it's downfall for all the other ones."
"I know my own rules you annoying bitch," Karin yelled at Hinata who held back the urge to slap her. "I was just it pointing out. Say where is Naruto?"
"He went to the bathroom."
"Is that so, or maybe he's just calling Sakura."
"What are you talking about?" Hinata said looking at Karin who smirked.
"Oh you didn't know? Naruto use to adore our little cherry blossom, he was head over heels for her when she first transferred here a couple months ago, even though he was dating you."
Hinata laughed at how smart Karin thought she was.
"I know he use to think she was pretty, he even told me. But he loves me, not Sakura, they are like brother and sister, so don't try to toy with my feelings."
"Does he only love you, knowing Naruto he probably loves ramen more then you." Karin stated flatly she saw Naruto coming out of the bathroom.
"Well here he comes; I won't be the third wheel of a love you think is real." Karin said and walked away.
"Hinata-chan, I'm back!" Naruto said. Hinata and forced a smile on her face.
"How is your bump, is it okay?"
"Yup, I think it was a small bump no big deal. Hinata-chan, are you okay? You look a bit pale." Naruto said touching Hinata's forehead for a fever-check.
"Yes, I'm fine…probably just tired." Hinata lied. She hated lying to Naruto, but she didn't want him to worry about her, she didn't want him to know the truth. The last words that Karin said to her, actually got to her, even though it probably wasn't true.
"Hinata-chan, we should probably go get dinner and end the day." Naruto said seeing that the sun is starting to set, it was early evening. Hinata agreed and they walked hand in hand out of the park.
"It's going to be very special dinner to end this memorable day and to celebrate that you no longer stutter!" Naruto said smiling at Hinata who tried to smile back. Her mind was racing with questions. What happened with Ino and Shikamaru does Naruto really like Sakura, does he really love ramen more then he loved her? Hinata felt like her head was filling up, like air in a balloon before it pops. Hinata looked over at Naruto who was looking happy as ever. She tried to tell herself that Karin is trying to make her lose the bet so she can get Sasuke. Hinata was so into her thoughts that she didn't know that Naruto had stopped until he tugged on her hand to hold her back from walking pass the place where they were eating.
"Hinata-chan, I have coupons for an all you can eat night at Ichirahu Ramen isn't that awesome!" Naruto said running inside and saving both of them a seat. Hinata stood there, a fake smile plastered on her face, eye twitching.
She was a air-full ballon that was just about ready to blow.
Star-Chan: Okay, so now here's my latest chapter! Yes Karin finally made an appearance after, how many chapters? How did you like it? I tried making it all NaruHina on this one making it kind of fluffy-ish. The reason why I made them have a little childish date is because I think there love is so cute! So please tell me what you thought of it. The next chapter would be about Neji and Tenten's date. So review and again I will try to update as soon as possible!
btw, I wanted Hinata to stop stuttering because I was getting tired of typing her with little dashes in-between her words, sorry if it was too OOC for her not to stutter, though this whole story is kinda AU...
Reviewers Corner!
SakuraUchiha14: Ha-ha I wanted it to have that effected, messing with people's mind.
WaterBlossom1: Very nice reasons to support ShikaIno. Maybe I made Temari too much of a bitch in this one…I feel bad now ha-ha.
Tenshi-Chan008: Thanks for your vote :D
Rainbow-Muffin: That's true, or maybe there was no couple to begin with and we just started to pair people off, but hey there's got to be some romance in the anime right!
kiss.it-x: Don't worry, I would never ditch this story! It's just that I'm really busy with school lately, so it might take sometime getting the next chapter up. I think I have an idea how to make the ending so it's not rushed, that's for the advice!
xXxSakura-chanUchihaxXx: I think I need to put more about the bet in this story, I think it's slacking off and people might start to forget, don't you think so?
Nandomo: I think I made Temari a little too evil in this one…but thanks for the vote!
miyako-uchiha: Thank you for the vote!
pinkprincess0210: Yeah I wanted that last scene to have that kind of effect, and then POOF fluff ha-ha sorry if I scared you.
kerapal bubbles: Ha-ha your review made me laugh, getting a sugar rush, I have felt it before. Thank you for voting!
DragonBreath102: I have someone in mind planned out for her, just keep reading and see!
sasusaku-emo Thank you!
Paramore Rox Your Sox: Well I don't really know if it's going to be a ShikaTema, but the votes say they want ShikaIno, I feel really bad for not being able to make it a ShikaTema, I'm really sorry!
Cardboard: lol you're the like the 5th person to say that! But I'm glad it turned out the way I wanted it to turn out, I didn't think it would actually be successful!
Maru-chan89: Thanks for voting anyways!
SakuraRoxMySox: Yeah I think I made her a bit to as you would say it skanky…
Nightshadow Dweller: Well here is a NaruHina chapter all about them :D
0milica0: Yeah maybe I made him too big of a jackass…and Temari too big of a bitch…I feel kind of bad. Anyways thank you for reading and reviewing! I'll update when I'm less busy with school finals and exams,
shadow-dog18 I'm glad you liked it!
o0huggies0o: Thank You!
naruto.luv.llamas: Ah- one of my readers from my other story! Hello :D thank you for finding my story and continuing to read it.
