Here's some replies to all of the reviews I got. Thanks!

Chapter 1

rizzo1: Thanks for your review.

striker20: Thanks for your review and I think I'm gonna make Emma 12.

Bobbyboots: Thanks for your review and yes it is very sad what some people go through.

MeoW03: Yay! My story got a 'wow' and an 'excellent'!

Anya's Girl: Thanks for your review and yes I know I rushed it a little.

Emily: I like dramatic too. Thanks for your review. (hey! That rhymed!)

danam901: I'm a big fan of ER too and Emma's gonna be 12 in this story.

Megan: That's exactly what my Language Arts teacher says. LOL. Well I'm not very good at describing things so anyone wanna help me?

Chapter 2

Bobbyboots: Yes I know it was a little rushed but thanks for your review.

Carter+AbbyCarby : Thanks for your review.

Concrete Angel: Thanks for your review

striker20: Yeah her decision was pretty idiotic but the way I had written that scene before was even more idiotic.

Dreamer/C/A: YAY! I'm actually capable of writing a story that people like! I like suspenseful! LOL


A/N: Okay. The only reason why I'm writing this chapter now is because :cough: like everyone at my school is sick and my friend gave me strep so I have Howie to thank for that. :ACHOO: Excuse me. Now on with the show! Or story. Or whatever.

Disclaimer: I don't own ER or any of its characters. (WAAAAAAAA!)


Chapter 3: Finding Them

"Hey Luka," Susan started, "Where are we going anyway?"

"It's a surprise!" Carter answered for Luka.

"Oh great," Susan said sarcastically.

"What?" Carter asked, "Why are my surprises always bad?"

"Well…" Susan said.

"Well what?" he asked.

"Never mind," she replied as she rolled her eyes.

Suddenly Luka stopped. Susan ran into Carter, who ran into Luka.

"Luka?" Carter asked, "You okay?"

"No," he replied, his accent heavier than usual, "Just listen."

Both Carter and Susan stopped and listened very carefully.

"Stop it! Just stop!" they could hear someone screaming.

"C'mon! Let's go!" Susan called after the two men as she started running up the stairs towards Abby's apartment.

Once they reached her apartment, they stopped to listen again.

"Emma! Stay awake!" the heard Abby scream.

"Abby!" Luka yelled.

"Luka?" they heard a faint voice call from the other side of the door.

"That's Emma," Susan said quickly.

"Emma?" Carter took over, "Emma, Its Carter. Luka and Susan are here too.

"Help!" she tried to scream.

"Shut up!" Richard yelled as he kicked her.

"What the hell!" she yelled regaining her strength a bit.

"Abby!" Luka yelled through Richard and Emma's 'fight', "Abby just hold in there. We're trying to get the door open."

"Damn!" Carter yelled, "I still can't get it open."

"Emma!" Abby screamed, "Go…lock yourself in…in the bathroom!"

"You shut up too!" Richard said grabbing Abby's head and forcefully slamming it into the floor.

They all heard Abby scream.

"MOM!" Emma yelled.

"WOULD YOU ALL JUST SHUT UP!" Richard yelled so loud that it didn't even seem humanly possible.

"Okay. Now I'm totally freaked out," Emma said backing into the corner of the, now trashed, living room.

Richard started moving in closer to Emma. Making her back up into the wall and hitting the back of her head on a loose nail in the wall.

"Damn," she said not yelling as loudly as before, "Stupid picture frame."

"Okay," Luka said to Carter, "Uh, on the count of three run into the door."

"Are you crazy?" Susan asked, "You guys could really get hurt."

"Well right now, it sounds like Abby and Emma are hurt," Luka said heroically.

"Okay," Carter interrupted, "One…two…three!"

They ran into the door and it burst right open.

"Shit!" Richard yelled.

"All right Susan!" Emma cheered.


A/N: Okay. I know that was a little rushed too and once again I didn't put in a lot of detail but I'm not good at that kind of stuff. Well R/R anyway. Thanks! Chela