DGM Fanfiction Authors:
It has come to my immediate attention on the...stories you have written so far. First, I'm not into love. I am forbidden to have any relationships, let alone with men.
Allen Walker, if you happen to chance on reading this, did you seriously consider me as a "mom"? I am simply your observer. It is my job to watch over you.
Please refrain yourself calling me "Lvellie's bitch" or "Lvellie's dog" in your writings. I am a human being who is now seeing the truth with open eyes. I admit that I am devoted to Inspector Lvellie, but I do have a will on my own. I just happen to enjoy making and eating pastries. Have you tried the Inspector's pastries yet? His macaroons are truly delicious.
Ahem. Going off topic here. But I am not in an affair with anyone, let alone Walker. I am doing my duty to aid the 14th in his cause and hope Allen Walker will also pull through this mess.
I have also noticed your extensive usage of repetitive phrases. From what I recorded, there have been:
- 9,286 "Yu-chan"
- 7,291 "stormy-grey eyes"
- 8,438 "Moyashi"
- 4,682 "Baka Usagi"
- 9,694 "Bakanda"
- 3,211 mentions of cuddling/snuggling
- 2,624 "navy blue eyes"
- 1,642 "emerald green eye"
- 2,720 "fiery hair"
- 3,267 "long, silky hair"
- 6,947 "white, soft hair"
...And much, much more that I don't want to delve into due to the fact there are way too many or it came to the part where it is considered as inappropriate. I believe that if you want to improve your...writings, you should at least be a bit more creative in the words you use.
Now, your explicit content has blinded me for any more mentions. Thank you for your time in reading this, and I bid you all a good day.
Howard Link