Okay, so I have been thinking, and is people have said, I have make the Naruto in this story too much OC, and I am very sorry about that.

That's why I decided to do a rewrite. It'll still be the same in some way, just a different origin for Naruto.

I now realize, and had pointed out to me, that I basically made an OC named Naruto instead of the real Naruto. I will change that.

So I will post the remake in a new story, keeping the original where it is. So you can tell me if it is better than the old version.

I will work on it during next week and might post it.