Ramen And Romance – Chapter two.
I tied rly hard on this chap and made it double the size so I hope you like this 1 more. And I'm at uni doing Eng Lit, and my other strry gots good comments so this one can't be that bad, nd you shud proberly go read my other one aswell...
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Now that Naruto woz Hokage he 4got he had do loads of relly boring paper work which is boring and it made him yawn a lot, then Narto looked out of sum window and wondered what Hinata would be doing cause he misses her cause hes at work and its boring,lol. He yawned agains and decided that since no-1 woz looking maybe he could sneak back home and see her cause he really luvs her and he's wel bored, LOL.
He to himself as he jumped out of the window the way ninjas do cuz he woz a ninjk and I dats wel cool, and no-one saw him which was relly gd but then he was the hokage(LOL), and now he could go and see Hinta. He ran as fast as he cld and bumped into sum ppl on the way but it didn't matter to him and they couldn't boss him around anyway cuoz he woz HO(GKAGE lol!!!1!!!
Naruto stopped outsid the dor where he lived with Hinta cause they r togeher and noticed she was talking to sum1 and it was SASKAY!!! (OMG!!1!!!!!!) and it woz relly surprising cause everyone in the village though he was ded and now he was styaning right there and it was really shocking and naruto didn't know what he shoud do.
Naruto was going 2 go talk to him bu tthen he heard what saskay said and it made Naruto relly angry cuz he didn't like wot saskay sed. Saskay asked Hinata to be with him to make his clan cause they both had rlly gud bloodlines and wuld have strong children, Naruto was about 2 stop hiding and punch saskay in the face but then he heard Hinata's voice and it calmed him down cuz he luvs her.
She said sorry Saskay, but I love Nsruto now and we're happy togheter and I would nver hurt him lke that" and that made Naruto really happy so then he walked away without them noticing and it was like he was never even there cause no-1 saw him.
He smiled ans thought of a really wicked idea he'd surprise Hinata with that nite since Hinata had said something so nice he was realty happy and didn't even mind doing paperwork because he was thinking about the surprise he was going to give to her that night and it was gonna be relly relly gud, LOL!!1111!!!!
Woz than 1 better? I tried relly hard so plz be nice of say wot will mak it better. Thx
