The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe Updated!
Narnia
Lucy stepped into a snowy forest so thick with trees that she could hardly see ahead of her. She looked back and could see the dressing room door. Should I venture further? She wondered. Finally she decided to go for it. She stepped further into the forest and found a streetlamp. Suddenly she heard a noise. Around the corner came a creature she had never seen before. They both screamed and Lucy ducked behind the streetlamp. Then she stepped out and picked up the parcels he had been carrying. (For he had dropped them)
"What are you?" She asked in her innocent voice.
"I'm a faun. What about you? Are not you a bladeless dwarf?" He asked.
"I'm not a dwarf! I'm a girl."
"What are you doing here in Narnia?" He asked surprised.
"Well I was going to change in the dressing room at the mall, and I just found myself here. Narnia? What's that?" She replied.
"Well right now you're in it. This is the country Narnia. My name is Tumnus."
"Pleased to meet you Mr. Tumnus, I'm Lucy Pevensie.' She said holding out her hand in a fist. He looked at her questioningly. 'Oh, you punch it."
"Why?" He asked.
"I don't know! People do it when they hang out together." She replied.
"Lucy Pevensie, from the shining city of dressing room, in the wonders' land of mall, how would it be if you came and had Starbucks with me?" He asked.
"I don't know. I really should be getting back."
"Oh but it's just around the corner, and there will be roaring fire, and cake and Starbucks and perhaps we will even have some chocolate." He said.
"Well I guess I could come for a little bit… if you have chocolate." She answered.
So they went to Mr. Tumnus' house. Lucy was enjoying her Starbucks when Mr. Tumnus said, "I'm such a terrible faun!"
"You're the nicest faun I've ever met." Lucy said.
"No no I'm not. I'm kidnapping you for the White Witch. She the one who makes it always winter. She gave orders that if we ever found a human in the forest we were supposed to catch it and turn it over to her." He answered.
"Oh, Mr. Tumnus you wouldn't."
"Alright come on. She may already know you are here.' Mr. Tumnus said dragging Lucy though the woods. They got back to the streetlamp and he said, 'Can you find your way back from here?"
"I think so.' She said and Mr. Tumnus started to cry. 'Hey, don't cry." She said handing him her tissue box from her purse.
He stopped crying and gave the box back to her. "Keep it." She replied.
Then they separated and she found the dressing room door and burst into the store.
"I'm back! I'm alright!" She yelled running over to Peter, Susan, and Edmund. They all looked at her puzzled.
"You just went into the dressing room." Susan said.
"Weren't you wondering where I was?" Lucy asked.
"We knew you were there." Edmund said annoyed.
"I've been gone for hours." Lucy replied.
They went and looked into the dressing room, but it wasn't there anymore and they didn't believe her, and they all went back to shopping.
"Is everything alright?" The store manager asked walking up to them.
"Yes. Our sister thought she found a magical land in the dressing room." Peter replied.
"Ok. Well call me if you need something. My name is Digory." He said looking puzzled turning back to the counter.
Later Edmund was going to try on an outfit, but he didn't know that Lucy had already gone in there. (The dressing room had changed once more into the forest) He walked in and found himself in the wood.