Hey everyone. Okay, so this is my first YYH fanfic ever. So, please don't be too harsh, but constructive criticism is welcome. I just want everyone to know (I forgot to mention this in my other fanfic) that English is my second language, and I'm still trying to get the hang of English grammar. I would love to hear your opinions, of course. This is just the prologue so it will be short compared to the others chapters.
Prologue
Rain was pouring in the dark forest of Makai. A young demoness stood in front of a tall, dark figure. She was a very beautiful female nekomata (cat demon). She had very long, messy black hair, fury black cat ears and tail. Her long silver kimono with dark purple lavenders sparkled in the moonlight. She looked sadly at her bandit lover. Her eyes overflowed with tears as he bent down to kiss you tenderly. His long black hair tickled her cheek. When he parted the sweet kiss, she looked into his indigo eyes.
"Why must you go so quickly?" her voice was smooth as warm honey.
"Kurama is waiting for me, Saiyuri. I promise I will be back in a few days," he smiled admiringly. "Then, I will take you with me. We will never be apart again, my darling." He took his large hand to cup her delicate looking face. He moved his other hand to his chest and pulled out a long pendent with a red jewel. "I have always kept this with me. As long as I have this, my feelings for you will never change."
Hearing those sweet words, she smiled sadly to herself. "Kuronue, my love, please promise me something."
His eyes were soft, "Anything."
"Promise me you will return in two days."
He gingerly pulled her to his chest and rested his chin on her head, "I promise."
Indeed, it was a promise meant to be kept; little did they both know they were being watched. A plan was being created to part the two lovers. Tragedy was destined.
Sorry it was so short, but I didn't think it needed to be longer. Please review ^.^