Hey everyone! Okay, so here is the first chapter of my second story. If you are interested I have pictures of how my OC looks on my homepage. Now, before I start my story, I just wanted to comment about the whole Mary-Sue thing. I didn't exactly understand the term, so I decided to look it up. It seems that everyone has their one opinion on what a Mary-Sue is, but I got the basics down. I'm going to try my best to avoid it, but it will be hard. I only say this because of my OC's breed/race (whatever you want to call it). It will be explained later in the story, I promise! I did not make her perfect, she has many flaws. Although she has awesome powers, they are very limited and depending on her energy and mood depend on how powerful her power is (mind she is only a Class B demon). She is a wise person, only due to her age, but I doubt she would do well in most subjects in school. The only thing bad about her past is because of her former mate. So, my OC might be a Mary-Sue a little bit, but what female character isn't? So please let me know what you think and if there should be any changes and if you think my character is too Mary-Sue for you. I want to satisfy my readers. This is for pure entertainment, nothing too serious. However, I am trying my best to get the characters and storyline correctly. So please review and let me know your honest opinions (but please be nice about it ^.^ ). ENJOY!


Chapter 1 …

Koenma was sitting at his large desk, doing a couple of paper work, which was stacked dramatically. He was so caught up with his work that he didn't notice a dark silhouette standing across the room, hidden behind the shadows. The only thing that was visible was a pair of silver eyes glaring at the said prince. Koenma shuddered; having the feeling he was being watched. He scanned the room to see who it was that was watching him and caught the pair if eyes glowing through the shadows. Koenma nervously cleared his throat and loosened his collar, "I trust you've made your decision?"

The pair of eyes continued to stare coldly, "I have." The voice answered, shocking Koenma. Yes, he did know the voice had belonged to a female; however, that is not what shocked him. It was the silky tenderness of the voice. Her voice almost put him into a trance, which was easy for her to do, considering of what she was.

Koenma quickly collected himself, "And what is your choice?"

There was a moderate pause before the beautiful voice spoke again, "I will help you as long as I get my end of the deal."

Koenma closed his eyes and furrowed his eyebrows, "Freedom? Is that all you wish for?"

"Yes," the voice said. "I am growing rather old and wish to move on peacefully."

Koenma looked at the dark figure quizzically, "Well, if that is what you wish, then it is granted." He then pressed a small red button on his desk and waited a few seconds. A large blue ogre with blonde hair ran into the room.

"Yes Koenma, sir?"

"George, will you please remove the shackles of our former prisoner?"

"Yes, of course, sir," George said happily as he walked up to the prisoner.

Her elegant hands slowly lifted up into the light, fully exposing her smooth milky skin. George gulped, looking at her beautiful skin. He hesitantly unlocked her shackles. He was stunned by how her scent alone caused him to stop breathing. Amused by the weakness of the ogre, she giggled musically to herself as she disappeared deep into the shadows.


"A fifth fighter, huh?" Yusuke questioned with a bit of amusement in his voice.

"Yes, Koenma said your additional fighter will be a great help for the team," Botan replied cheerfully.

"Really," Yusuke said smirking. "Well, where is this new member of our team?"

Botan looked around the dark forest, "Koenma said our fighter would meet us exactly ten miles from the boat. I wonder what is taking so long."

There was a flash of black in front of the two, causing Yusuke to narrow his eyes. He noticed the fighter was wearing a black cloak, almost similar to Hiei's, a black hood and cloth mask. Yusuke smirked to himself, "Well, look who decided to join the party."

The masked fighter only glared in reply and continued to walk towards the boat. Botan laughed nervously, "What a charmer, he he."

Yusuke smiled and followed, "You're not the talkative type, are ya?"


"Urameshi still hasn't shown up yet. What could that dummy be doing now?" Kuwabara said, folding his arms while glaring at the demons in front of them.

"Hopefully finding us a fifth fighter," Kurama stated.

"Why don't you worry about yourself Kuwabara? Have you even gotten better since our last fight?" Hiei said glaring at Kuwabara.

Kuwabara shook with anger and balled his hand into a fist, "You'll see for yourself, shrimp boy!" He then smirked to himself. 'If we win the competition, I'm going to get super famous, yeah! That way Yukina and I get to be together forever.'

"Hn," Hiei replied, closing his eyes.

"The ship is here matey's," a stubby pirate said as he entered the clearing of the dark forest. He wore a tall fluffy hat, an eye patch and a pipe poking out of his beard covered mouth. "Now, let's try to get on board without any violence."

Kuwabara grew nervous, letting his face fall. "Hey wait a minute sir, aren't you going to see if we have stragglers?"

The pirate found Kuwabara amusing. "Then we will have to put a mark on their heads and send a hit man. That's the rules of the tournament."

"Now, now that's not necessary," Yusuke stated as he walked into the clearing, accompanied by the mysterious masked fighter. "Sorry to keep you wait guys."

Kuwabara was relieved by the image of the smiling Yusuke. "You nearly gave me a heart attack, Urameshi!"

The masked fighter watched the group curiously as they converse with one another. Hiei walked to Yusuke calmly with a slight smirk on his face, "Yusuke."

"Huh?" Yusuke looked down at the fire demon quizzically.

Hiei only smirked before attacking Yusuke with such speed.

Kuwabara was trying to depict every move they were making. "Those guys are fast; I can barely keep up with my eyes."

Hiei went for his last attack and aimed his sword toward Yusuke's head. Yusuke dodged and caught the edge with his two fingers. Yusuke smirked at the demon. "Damn, Hiei, is this how you say hello to people now?"

Hiei returned the smirk, "hn, I don't know where you've been all this time, but it seems you improved your skills a little bit."

Kuwabara was shocked and let his mouth drop. "Improved a little bit? Oh man, I'd say he improved a lot a bit!"

"Don't get discouraged," Kurama smiled reassuringly. "The fact that you could follow their moves shows that you have been improved as well."

"So, Yusuke," Hiei turned his head to the masked fighter. " I assume the vermin over there is going to be the new member of our team?"

Kuwabara walked over to the masked fighter. "Huh? You mean this guy over here? He's even creepier than Hiei! Huh, what's wrong with his face? He looks like a mummy or something."

Yusuke grinned at the group. "Trust me that one is going to be a lot of help to us."

Kuwabara was skeptical, "I don't know, he gives me the heebee jeebees."

"Forget him, Yusuke and I are all that we require," Hiei dictated.

The pirate grew impatient, "Enough pesky distractions, all head on board!"


"Shoot, nothing but ugly monsters. I thought cruises were supposed to have pretty girls," Kuwabara complained.

The masked fighter could not resist a soft hiss at the orange haired human.

"I sure hope the island isn't as boring as this," Hiei sneered.

Kurama smirked at Hiei and Kuwabara's comments, "We are not on vacation, you know."

"I know, but couldn't they just give us a place to eat?" Kuwabara complained.

"Alright matey's," the Pirate announced on the top of the Captains quarters. "Turn your eyes to the captain's deck. It's going to be quite some time before we make our way to the harbor, so we're going to have some entertainment to keep you from getting rowdy."

"OOH! I knew it was some dinner and dancing!" Kuwabara stated excitedly.

The pirate explained to everyone that there will be a small tournament to determine which team will go to the next level. Kuwabara was confused by the pirate's statement, "Say what?"

"A planarity for the competition," Hiei answered.

"Now that we can't go anywhere," Kurama noted.

The boat suddenly began to shake, causing everyone to stir in confusion.

"Earthquake!" Kuwabara cried.

Hiei glared at Kuwabara's idiocy, "Fool, there can't be any earthquakes on the water!"

Kurama pointed to the other side of the ship, "Look!"

The middle of the deck split slowly in half, creating a squared hole in the middle. A rather large circular platform rose from the hole causing everyone to mutter in response.

"Whoa, that thing's huge!" Kuwabara sputtered.

The Pirate chuckled lightly, "She's a real beauty, I'd say. Now, I'll tell it to ya straight, fifteen teams have already been chosen for the dark tournament. They're awaitin' your arrival. That means I have all of you on me ship, only one team will meet with dry land."

"Hold on," Kuwabara interrupted. "I thought we were the special guests."

"This is the way they operate," Hiei replied calmly.

The pirate continued, "All teams pick out your strongest men and bring into the enormous port side."

Kuwabara confidently cracked his knuckles while grinning. "So, one big beat down, huh? Guess I'll have to show them the brand new Kuwabara super attack."

The masked fighter closed her eyes in deep thought, 'It won't be long before this tournament is over and I will see you once again, Kuronue.' Her thoughts were interrupted by Kuwabara's yelling.

"Hey, wake up Urameshi! I said it's a group leader's responsibility!" Kuwabara grabbed Yusuke by the collar and shook him but he did not respond.

Kuwabara shook him harder, "Why do I feel like I'm screaming at myself?"

"Stop," Kurama demanded. Kuwabara obeyed and looked at him. "The training Yusuke went through was apparently immense. You must give him time to recuperate."

Kuwabara got up and stood in front of Kurama, "Then who is going to fight all these monsters?"

The masked fighter grinned to herself, 'It's time to enjoy myself again.' She maneuvered herself to the platform with her arm crossed the whole time.

"It seems we have a volunteer," Hiei smirked. "Good, I am curious to see what he could do."

"Are you serious?" Kuwabara argued. "Why, don't know jack squat about that guy. What if he loses and we get booted out of the tournament?"

Hiei smirked to himself, "If that happens, all we would have to do is kill every on the boat before we reach the island. We'll say we're on the right team and no one will complain."

Kuwabara's eye twitched, "You didn't have too many friends growing up did you?"

"ATTACK!" the Pirate ordered.

The masked fighter stood at one end, glaring at her weak opponents. The demons didn't think twice before running after her to attack. With her eyes closed she focused on concentrating on her inner self. The demons were getting closer before her hands began to glow with a dark purple matter. She opened her now purple glowing eyes and she put her hands together to release the matter at the demons, leaving nothing left but cinders of their fried bodies. The masked fighter let her energy tame as she became back to normal.

Kuwabara shuddered, "Holy crap. He got everyone up there in one blow."

Kurama chuckled lightly, "I guess that explains why Yusuke could sleep so peacefully on a boat full of demons."

"I'm sorry to say that the sixteenth team has to be a human one. Yusuke Urameshi's team!" the pirate ruefully announced.


Okay, let me know what you think everyone! It is the first chapter, but I promise the next chapter will be more about my OC. I kinda want to make this story like it's a part of the series, however, I will make it a little more about my OC and Kurama I promise. Please review and don't be toooo mean, but I'm all ears - er - eyes... I guess..