Yola!

Sorry this wasn't published sooner but I accidently lost the reasons me and Takeo were working on... Oops. Now, I haven't seen Takeo since school ended so I did this all by myself! It's thanks to my recent viewers who got me going again. I wrote this all today so it's a little raw.

Enjoy!

51.) Stephanie gets all pissy and then suddenly refuses to finish Midnight Sun; okay we understand how frustrating that is. But did she really have to write a whole other part of the series when fans are waiting for the one she was already writing? Now, the Second Life of Bree Tanner, kudos to Stephanie on that part (though I have yet to read it) because it's always fun to see different, less relevant parts of the series. But she could've finished what Twilight fans actually wanted finished! She needs to know how to satisfy both herself and her readers in her writing.

52.) Like I said on reason 17, Naruto people can do so much more! Look at Pein; he can do creepy things like bringing the dead back to life! Now that is a true vampire! Way more cool and vampire like than touching a person and then BAM! You know all their thoughts. (Kudos to blackheart144 for giving us this idea!)

53.) Okay, it's one thing to spy on someone or guard them so you have to invade on people's time but read thoughts or being able to touch someone and know their every thought is major invasion of privacy! Heck, seeing visions of someone's future is invading their privacy! No one appreciates or wants that.

54.) Again, bringing up a previous reason (#24) since there are no couples (N) and you can freely put whoever you want together, you can please more people in your writing which should cause less flames (one would think). That's always appreciated.

55.) OH, I ALMOST FORGOT… PORN!

56.) BELLA IS A MARY SUE! She makes everyone act out of character! Plus, why does every single guy have to like her? I mean seriously.

57.) Who names there kid Renesmee? Making up your own name is cool but this looks like a fan couple. ReneexEsme? Awkward…

58.) It is also kind of disturbing having the guy that was in love with your mother fall in love with you.

59.) One of the only stories worse than Twilight is My Immortal. Yes, that my Immortal. Do you think I can submit Twilight to the Tara Gilsbie awards? (EDIT 12/23/10: My Life With Ron Weasley (even worse than My Immortal) is also worse, heck it's the worst!)

60.) While Twilight has the potential to be suspenseful, it goes off track, making you continuously forgetting that you're supposed to be worrying. Naruto has viewers constantly on the edge of their seats, painstakingly waiting for the next chapter to update, the next book to come out, and the nest episode to be released.

61.) Naruto stays on situations allowing them to build and fit in better within the story line and world.

62.) While I don't really mind, Twilight is based so much more off of the real world then someone's imagination and own creativity. Naruto is a completely new world, while many things from the real world influence it, the creator obviously took more time to work with his world and work to make everything fit.

63.) Stephanie Meyer reminds me of some second rate fan fiction writer. Mostly considering Breaking Dawn, now its one thing for the main character to get pregnant, it another to do it like Stephanie. It's okay that she didn't build up on it but it's another for her to not work on it so you can understand it. I was extremely confused about several things concerning it, like why did Renesmee grow so fast if vampires are completely frozen in time? Why would you have to regurgitate your food if the venom seems so potent that it pretty much takes out your whole body, transforming it and stopping it all? Wouldn't sperm also be frozen if all bodily functions are frozen? She just made it happen out of wishful thinking.

64.) Bella has little personality while the Naruto characters have loads.

65.) Sakura and Bella both act majorly fan-girlish to the ones they "love". Now Bella continuously acts this way and breaks down when Edward leaves. When he comes back everything goes back to normal. Sakura breaks down when Sasuke leaves but learns from it and grows though she still cares about him. When he and Team Seven encounter each other again they all have grown and they know nothing can ever be the same. (Character Development, people!)

66.) You can't have a completely happy ending like in Breaking Dawn; you've got to be realistic! When you do have some sort of happy ending, you've got to work for it. The Twilight characters do nothing! The most they've suffered while trying to get their happy ending is going beyond extreme during a break-up. The Naruto characters have had people die, fought in many scarring battles, and had horrible things done to them. They're the ones who truly deserve a happy ending.

67.) Again I am reminded of a Fan fiction writer who is still learning to develop stories well (concerning Meyer). We've all been there once- I'm still having issues trying not to make some of my writing cheesy, too convenient, and bad. But I also am not trying to pass off my writing as something worth seriously publishing yet.

68.) How can you not like the 80's? Edward has serious issues.

69.) You'd think that Bella would be more concerned or at least have her daughter as a higher priority than sex seems to be in her mind.

70.) Was it really necessary for Bella to have Edward deflower her before she got turned? If she really knew what she was getting herself into she would probably have preferred to deflower Edward after vampirism.

71.) I find it difficult to believe that Edward stayed a virgin all this time and didn't at least date girls. I mean gentlemen schmentlemen, have you read the Luxe? Now that has lots of scandal and playboys before 1918. No one is that prudish, even Edward.

72.) Twilight people sparkle. That's enough of a reason to stay away. Only faeries and Gai/Lee are aloud to sparkle.

73.) And as someone pointed out, the girls are hot in Naruto too. I'm a girl and I can admit that.

74.) Porn…

75.) It is really sad when you have to look to fan fiction to get good stories.

75.5.) Hmmm, I didn't mention porn books as much but it's still important!