Nadie: So when I check my reviews I see not 6, not 7, BUT 11! So Than-thank you! I luv you! ~is all teary eyed~

Ninja: Nadie, you're such a toaster waffle~

Nadie: Ninja, you're such a hamster~

Zatsune Miku: And why won't I be in this story?

Rin: Because you have anger issues and everyone knows it~

Zatsune: I DO NOT HAVE ANGER ISSUES!

Len: ~walks over to Zatsune and taps her on the shoulder~

Zatsune: WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT NOW!

Rin: see, anger issues.

Morumotto-chi: Sannkyuu~! I agree completely~! ~free cookies~

Ultimate Lollipop Ninjaa: But it's so fun to abuse the little '~' mark~! ~~~~! It's the only thing that shows up on screen~! SANNKYUU~! (SCREW THE SPELLING~!) ~free cookies~

Sasha Nekone: I BLAME NINJA! (Ninja: I BLAME NADIE!) ~free cookies~

Jayfeather: what am I doing here… oh well. Nadie doesn't own anything except the plot that is slowly but surely slipping through her evil clutches~

Nadie: EEEEEEEEEEVILLL~! ~runs around in circles~

Jayfeather: ~facepaw~

Dreaming of Freedom: (the REAL) Ch. 5 Sunset~

Rin POV

"Come on we're almost there." I ran up the stairs that led to the roof, taking three steps at a time to get to the top faster.

"Rin you've been saying that for the past ten minutes!" Len complained. I turned around and raised an eyebrow at him.

"Really."

"Yeah."

"Well this time I'm telling the truth."

"Mmhm. Yeah. Sure."

I rolled my eyes at him and came to a halt in front of the old wooden door. I quickly turned the doorknob and slammed the door open then grabbed Len and pulled him out onto the roof.

" I told you we're here!" I grinned. Len didn't seem to notice.

"Uhh.. Len? Hello?" The lights are on but nobody's home? I pinpointed the direction he was looking and saw nothing but the sun slowly sinking into the sea.

" Can you see that?" Len said, pointing at a cherry looking cloud.

"Yeah. A cloud. Woo hoo."

" No I meant that." He said. He Grabbed my arm and pointed to a little speck beneath the cloud with it.

"Yeah, It's… a bird."

"A bird…"

"Uhhh… yeah. You know the things that fly around and make a huge racket in the morning."

" I know it's just… how could something so small be so… lucky."

"Lucky? How So?"

"It's free. It can do whatever it wants. no one's there to tell it what to do, so why not?"

"Huh?"

"Nevermind, you wouldn't understand." He mumbled, sitting down to watch the bird move swiftly across the sky. I sat down beside him.

"Ever thought that it might not be so lucky?"

"no… what could be wrong when you could do whatever, whenever?"

"Someone could come along and shoot you."

"Thanks for the mental images, Rin."

"No Problemo."

We sat in silence until the sun had almost dipped fully behind the ocean.

"I better get to work." Len muttered.

"Same here-err.. I mean, I need to go to bed." I added before taking off down the stairs.

Rinto POV

"Little RinRin HAS A CRUSH~!" I sang as Rin hammered down the stairs.

"Shut up shota." Rin muttered loudly enough for me to hear.

"Me? Shota? Heck I'd be willing to bet Len is more of a shota than I am." I smirked. Rin blushed a deep red.

"I AM NEVER EVER NEVER GOING TO LOVE A BOY AGAIN BECAUSE IN THE END MY FATHER'LL FIND OUT- NOW SHUT THE HELL UP AND LEAVE ME ALONE!" She yelled, slamming the door to her bedroom. Shrugging I went back inside my room and turned on the X-Box 360 set up to my 36" flat screen TV.

"What the heck was that all about?" I saw Len poke his head in the door.

"Oh nothing big. Rin just flipped, that's all. " I shrugged again and went to the game menu on the X-box. Len looked at me for a few seconds before shutting the door.

" Oh I forgot to ask did you want a snack?" Len poked his head back in.

"Ehh.. Nah, I'm fine."

"Okay sir- I mean… Rinto."

Rin POV

Damn Rinto. Tears streaked down my cheeks as I flopped down onto my bed and buried my face into my pillow for comfort. Damn Rinto, Damn Father, Damn… Ren. I cried harder when I thought of the boy that had changed my life. He was kind, sweet… and I fell for him. He loved me, I loved him, and it was perfect until father… father found out only a few days ago that he and I were… were Together… so he killed him. No he didn't kill him, I thought bitterly. He murdered him. And it was all my fault. My pillow was now soaked with tears and they didn't stop flowing for a good, what felt like, hour or two until someone opened the door to my room.

"Hey Rin do you want something to eat?" I heard Miku ask. I shook my head, afraid to speak incase my voice cracked.

"are you okay?"

"No, Miku, I am not okay." I hiccupped. I heard Miku walk over and sit on the edge of my bed.

"Care to share?"

Ninja: Nadie, before you post a chapter, at least try to make sure it is at least 1000 words or more!

Nadie: I WAS SO CLOSE~! I HAD 977 WORDS NOT COUNTING PAGE BREAKS! 977!

Len and Rin: Ninja has a point.

Rin: JINX~!

Len: dammit. ~reluctantly hands over five dollars~

Nadie: REVIEW PEOPLE OR I WILL HAVE TO BORE YOU WITH EXCEEDINGLY LONG AUTHORS NOTES!