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Last Time
"You'll like it i promise" I walked up to the door as everyone came up the driveway and knocked. The door opened "Hey mom"
"BELLA!?"
Bella's P.o.v
We pulled up in the moutians it looked like, up a driveway with stairs leading up to a two stories house very pretty. We got out of the car and Edward turned to me
"You'll like it i promise" i nodded and we walked up to the door as everyone else came. The front porch had about 4 rocking chairs and a swing. It was beautiful. Edward knocked on the door and when it opened he said "Hey mom"
"BELLA!?" Standing in front of me is a very shocked Esme who had dropped the pan she had in her hand. Her mouth was wide open. and so was mine. I didn't think they would bringing me to them THIS quick. "Oh my" She straightened herself and hugged me "They said you were dead." I hugged her back finally realizing what was going on
"I know" I caught myself saying "I didn't mean to cause pain on you guys. I just was one of you and you guys never came back so i left. I'm so sorry" I hugged her tighter.
"I have my other daughter back" Esme always said was like a daughter to her. We finally let go of our embrace "Come on in guys" We walked in. Edward put an arm around my waist and whispered
"You okay?" I nodded and smiled. I looked at the house. The living room looked quit cozy. Me and Edward sat on the couch next to Emmett and Rosalie Alice was on the floor with Jasper and Esme moved the love seat over to face us.
"How did this happend" That was the question on everyone's mind the whole time. I was about to answer that we should wait for Carlise but he came through the door.
"Hel-Bella?" He was very confused and i didn't need Jasper's power to know that.
"Hello Dear. How about you go wash up and Bella here will explain everything" Esme said. He nodded and walked off. about 1 minute later he was back in normal clothing
"So Bella care to explain" Rosalie asked. I sighed
"I need everyone to be in a circle. I never tried to do this so its going to take a lot." We sat down in a little circle "Hold each others hands for this to work" They nodded and the circle was join by hands "okay"
Flashback
I was walking into the forest tyring to find mine and Edwards meadow. I couldn't exactly remember where it was. Its been 5 months since he left. 5 months since his family left. I kept walking with the feeling i was lost. Then i saw our meadow but it didn't feel as beautiful as i did when i was here before. Its twice as beautiful when he with me. I walked around the meadow and stared to have the feeling someone was watching me
"Who ever it is come out" No answer "please" I was scared. My dad said never go into the forest alone.
"Well well well. Edward has left you. So sad." I looked behind me and saw no one "Behind you" the voice said and i turned around to see Victoria "Hello Bella. Miss me?" I was scared shitless
"Victoria?" She laughed
"Yes its me. So what happened to your 'love' he left you" She laughed "So sad! He killed mine!" she zoomed over to me "Mate for mate right?" She smiled
"Just kill me" I didn't want to live without Edward "please"
"Oh. No I'm not going to do that" I looked at her confused "I'm going to do what Edward was afraid to do. and you'll have to live with the pain of loosing him forever" she laughed then Bit me
"Ah!" Then i fell into darkness
Flash
I woke up three days later. My throat dry. I stared after the woods and found a buck. I went into attack mode and dug my teeth into it. The blood felt so good. After i was done i raced to my house. I remember Edward saying that I'm would attack my dad if i was a new born so i had to leave. Leave without saying good bye to him. Something i didn't want to do. I ran into my house
"Dad?" No answer. good. I walked over to the counter and wrote a note to my dad the read it out "Hey dad i thought i would catch you before i left but i didn't I'm heading for a road trip. I need to leave. I love you and don't worry about school. Just say i'm sick or something. I love you. Bella." I put the note on the T.V knowing he would see it and packed a few clothes. I drove to San Fransisco and pushed my truck off the bridge and ran to a payphone and dialed 911
"Hello?"
"Hi I'm on the Golden Gate bridge and i just saw someone go off the bridge in a truck. oh my god." i said trying to sound frantic
"We'll send some police please be calm" The lady said
"Okay thank you" i hung up and took off. at lease my dad would know that i loved him
End of flashback
(A/N: Reason for this being in here is because of the next part :D)
I got out of the and felt faint
"Bella?" I heard someone yelling my name i stared to fall backwards "Bella!"
Then it was black
(A/N: i WAS going to end it here but you guys are way to awesome so I'm continuing :D BE HAPPY!)
Edward's P.o.v
We just got out of the flashback when i stared to feel Bella swaying
"Bella?" no response she stared to fall back "Bella!" I grabbed her before she could hit the floor. I tried reading her mind but it was blank. "Whats going on?" I looked at my family who had stunned faces on
"Edward put her on the couch" I nodded at Esme's command and studded up with Bella in my arms. I placed her on the couch and mad her conferable.
"Carlise what happned?" Rosalie asked staring at Bella
"I can't think of anything unless she hasn't hunted in a while. We'll have to ask once she wakes up" I nodded agreeing with his theory. Bella stared to stir
"Bella?" Her body turned toward me and she oppend her eyes
"Edward?" I hugged her "What happened?" She asked hugging me back
"When was the last time you hunted" I asked pulling away from the hug
"About a week." I looked at Carlise. He was nodding
"I think what happened its you used so much energy trying to show all of us your thoughts and you haven't hunted in a while you blacked out."
"Its that possible" Bella asked. Carlise thought it over then nodded
"It can be possible as we just saw" Bella nodded "How about you and Edward go hunting?" I looked over at Bella and she nodded
"I think that would be ok" We stood up, saying our goodbyes and head out the door
"Its beautiful out here" Bella said. It was true. Esme fell in love with the place and the view so we bought it and its about forty-five minutes away from the school.
"Yeah. Esme fell in love with everything here." We head more into the mountains and hunted. We stared to walk back just talking
"So" I looked over at her "What have you been doing the whole time I was going" I looked down "What did you do?" I sighed
"Well I locked myself in the house the whole time. We did some traveling before heading up to Alaska and I avoid everyone. Alice was the only one who i would let talk to me. She came in one day and said she was fed up with me mopping that she went to go check on you. That's when we thought you were dead. No one spoke. No one was happy. Emmett didn't crack a joke for a long time, Alice didn't go shopping as much, Rosalie believe it or not stopped working on cars." She looked at me questioningly "She'd been planing on stealing your truck to fix it up" She laughed and told me to continued "Jasper was depressed cause of Alice, Esme and Carlise just were trying to keep us as a family" She nodded
"What about you?"
"Well at first i didn't take the news to well so i decided i was going to go to the Voitur"
"EDWARD!" I looked at her "I told you to NEVER do that. You promised me that you would have never do that!" I looked down
"I know. That's what Alice told me so i just locked myself in my room. No one bothered me for two years expect for Esme and Alice who were losing hope. Then I decide to go to Forks. I looked around your house I could smell your sent still lingering in a few things. I went to see if you ever found your presents" She laughed
"Yeah under the floorboards. Nice place until I was turned and picked up the scent" She smiled "So that's why you smelt stronger" I looked at her
"What?"
"I'm guessing a few months you after you left to see the place I had went their to see how everything was. That's how i found out Charile was dead. I ran back to the house saying it wasn't true. I was overweemed with your scent but i never realized that you guys would hear or care that i was dead and just said it was my mind playing tricks on me" I nodded
"I'm sorry" She stopped walking
"Don't" She stood up on her toes and kissed me. i put my hands on her waisted and she put hers around my neck bring me closer to her. We kissed for about an minute when she pulled away "We better go" I nodded
"Lets go"
"So continue from where you were" I sighed
"So after i left Forks I guess i had some closer and I was happier kinda feeling your scent. I thought Charlie had found everything on day think he was mad and tore up everything in your room. I never bothered thinking you were still alive. I went to your tombstone and cried. What surprised me was your friend Jacob came the same day" She looked up with me with confusions
"What he say?" He sighed
"He said that he missed you also but he's happy with the girl he found. He said that if you were still alive that you would have wanted me to be happy so that's what i did. I became more happier around my family and everyone. When we moved around his words kept playing in my head and i knew they were true. Everything went back semi-normal. Esme was happier, Emmett pulled a lots more pranks, Rosalie fixed up all the cars, Alice shopped more and Jasper was happier cause of Alice, and I just kept living with you in my heart" I looked down at her.
"I love you"
"I love you too" I bent down and kissed her
"Finally you arrived" Alice said when were walking up "We have a problem" I looked at her
"What happened" Alice sighed
"Jasper accidental bit a girl" Our eyes went wide "There's more"
"More?" She nodded
"Its Bella's great-niece" That was the second time we made a Vampire faint. Only Bella
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Didn't think THAT now did you? Haha huge twist. Everything would be explained later
If you are wondering why I used Jasper the reason will be in the next chapter :D
Pictures of the cabin will be up today or tommrow :D
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Quiz Question
Who was Bella talking to when she said
"Its ok, no one was going to bite me"
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What do you think Bella's niece's name be
A. Jessie(I know i love the name :D)
B. Samantha
C. Cathrine
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Disclaimer:
Em: This is Emmett Cullen to tell you that Love.It.Live.It has been aressted aprantly she said that she "owned" Twilight and so she was aressted for now on I'M WRITING THE STORIES :D and -- Hey give me the computer
Me: -Grabs computer- Sorry about -pushes Emmett away fromt he computer- EMMETT DOWN!
Em: NEVER!
Me: -sighs- ok this is going to be quick i owns NOTHING expt the plot. and Emmet will NOT! be writting my stories...thought that would be funny anywyas
Em: Please
Me: EMMETT STOP! Anywyas. point of this I OWN NOTHING bye!
Em: Party popper -Gets dragged away by Rosalie-
Me: HA!