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can be my beta reader on weekends that's when I normally type in the morning. ENJOY
(I recommend to listen to "under pressure" and "bohemian rhapsody" both are by queen there really good songs and kinda fit with this story, nah I lie the first one doesn't really fit while the second one does) ENJOY
Jasper park
3rd person
"So" eve said "did you find him?" 'We searched all of jasper and we couldn't find him" hutch said "is that so?" eve asks "tsk tsk tsk I expected more from
you hutch" eve says disapprovingly "and im not forgetting about you to candu" eve says catching candu trying to slip away he just grins sheepishly
"yes m'am" he replies "go, now find that wolf I have an debt to repay.
Lilly's den
"Kodi" Lilly screams out "what are you doing here!" "what" he says grinning "I cant even say hi to my mate?" Lilly smiles back "not yet, you know its not
"Official"" she says putting emphasis on official "I still have to get my parents" Lilly catches herself and looks away "I mean parent, permission" Kodi can
tell that she's hurting "oh no Lilly don't think like that" he coos "he's probably fine" "yeah just like Humphrey" Lilly snaps at him and bursts into tears.
Flash Back
"I don't know if I'm ready for this" Lilly says "I feel like I'm letting Humphrey down" she says looking up into the sky "Lilly Humphreys probably fine" he
says warmly "he'll probably want you to do this, if it makes you feel better" Lilly turns to face him "your right it does Kodi" Lilly smiles at him
End of FlashBack
"how was I supposed to know that was going to happen!" Kodi says defensively Lilly turns towards him averting eye contact "your right, you didn't" Lilly
says feeling bad "I shouldn't of snapped at you like that" Kodi moves closer to her "I accept your apology" he says sympathetically and nuzzles Lilly
The Black Wolf's Den
"Why did I do that?" the wolf asked himself "I could of gotten my self killed" but then again the wolf thinks the little pups could of gotten killed as well.
"what should I do" he asked no one in particular
After what seemed like five minutes the wolf had made up his mind
Im going to protect jasper park until the day I die and with that the wolf just gritted his teeth pivoted his foot and walked to the entrance of jasper park
for his first night of guard duty
So how'd you like that? Tell me in a review and xXSHADOWWOLFXx can you tell me a bit more back story behind Kodi in like a pm or something
because I don't want to makes up stuff about your character, anyways as always check out my page and xXSHADOWWOLFXx's page thanks!