Ok for what Sesshomaru did to rin in the past I might explain that in later chapters, and about my bed grammar, I was born in unites stated but I moved to Dominican rep. like 10 years ago when I was 6 so I'm not really that good in writing in English I'm better reading and talking, so tell me if I should just rite in Spanish my future stories. Witch I'm better at writing. if you guys want I will start this again but it will take a while for me to do it correctly in English (like two weeks), I might ask help from my cousin or someone , but if you want me to continue tell me.
Thank you icegirljenni for helping me, I'm going to fix the chapters as soon as I can.