heyyyy guys! sorry to start off on a not so good note, but i would like to reply to a flame reviewer, Feng Yue.

First of all, some author's notes i have to put there cause if i didnt(as in putting it in the beginging) it would give away whats in my chapter. Second, its a STORY! im sorry i did not get everything right. and another thing, its MY story, so if i made her a unicorn that farts rainbows it doesnt matter. and btw, how would it look if i made Sarah look the EXACT same as Nessie being that she is MY oc?

and to those who are confused about that too, I have an explanation. Like I said Sarah is more vampire than human, unlike Renesmee who was a perfect mixture. So since Sarah has the mind of a 15 or 16 year old, she is able to control herself enough to not hurt Bella. alright anywho sorry again my faithful readers

Shout out: Derick Black for leaving an amazingly sweet review and some helpful criticism

Story Suggestion: Uncertainty by gempire! love love love this story!

Sarah POV

Our birthday was amazing! I loved all my gifts. Especially my necklace from Seth. Nessie got a bracelet with three charms but, I had two charms and a ring. Seth told me that the honey bee was because of our song, Honey Bee by Blake Shelton. The ring was Quileute for 'My beautiful Sarah'. Lastly, the wolf was because I liked those colors and wolves are my favorite animals.

"Sarah, it's time for breakfast." calls Mama. Ugh. I hate breakfast. Well, I hate all human meals but, I especially hate breakfast(since Seth is banned due to the fact he eats too much).

"Sarah, we're hunting tomorrow. Just please try it?" asked my dad. Grrrr.

"Down, girl." my sister said walking into my room.

"Come on, Nessie." I say to my si-

"Anybody home?" calls out my uncle Emmett, breaking me from my thoughts.

"Emmett..." I hear my dad growl. I don't have to have my dad's power to know what he's thinking.

"Uncle Emmett, will you take me hunting?"

"Of course, Sary." again, grrrrr. I hate when he calls me that. Fortunetely, I have a counter attack.

"Well, Emmy, what shall we be hunting?" I counter with a smug smile on my face. Suddenly, Uncle Emmett's smirk disappeared.

"Woah, I did not agree with you going hunting yet." interrupted my mom.

"Come on, Mom. Please? You know I hate human food." Can you ask Mom if I can come too? thought my sister, taking a hold of my hand.

"Can Nessie come too? She hasn't hunted in a while. I can barely feel her power." I plead. I heard Daddy giggle from across the room. He actually knows what's going on.

"Come on, Bells. Let me take the girls. I'll even get Jacob and Seth to come with me." oh, Unlce Emmett, I love you so much more.

"I don't know, Emmett. What if you find other vampires who want to kill the girls or something?"

"But Bella, if the girls stay here you and Edward have to wait for happy time." OMG.

"EMMETT!"

"Well?" please, please, please.

"Fine." yes!

"Hello, Cullens." announce Seth and Jake as they walk in.

"Come on, boys. Time for hunting."

Don't worry guys. I am posting the hunting trip. i would like to hear your opinion. If someone's singer has a twin, does that mean that they are both equally appealing? and no im not giving anything away im just mildly curious. let me know!