Chapter two. Some of the dialogue in the compartment is from the books (which I don't own the rights to only the book) but my friend was borrowing the book( I'm trying to get her into Harry Potter), so it's from memory so it's not word for word. Read and review please.
As Sirius looked for a compartment he was hoping to find the boy he'd seen on the platform. He seemed a nice guy. Sirius hoped he was a first year too. Sirius found him in the corner of a compartment with a red-haired girl and a greasy-haired hook-nosed boy talking together, not really including the boy with glasses.
"Mind if I sit here?"
"No not at all, I'm James Potter." The boy said.
"Sirius" Said Sirius not offering a surname. He was rather embarrassed about being a Black. The red-haired girl seemed to be sobbing quietly.
"This is it, we're off to Hogwarts. You better be in Slytherin." The other boy said.
" Who wants to be in Slytherin. I think I'd leave if I was put in Slytherin. Wouldn't you." James said to Sirius
"All my family have been in Slytherin." Sirius said glumly.
"Blimey, I thought you seemed okay."
"Maybe I'll break the tradition. Where you going if you've got the choice?"
"Gryffindor, where dwell the brave at heart." The greasy-haired boy snorted.
"Well if you'd rather be brawny than brainy."
"Where you going seeing as you're neither" Sirius sent. The red-haired girl glared at them.
"Come on Severus let's go."
"See ya Snivellus." James and Sirius called. James continued staring at the door after they had gone.
"I'm going to marry her." He said dreamily.
"You don't even know her name." Sirius pointed out.
"I hope she's in Gryffindor." Sirius sighed, he hoped James wasn't going to go on about the girl all train journey.
"That reminds me" James said suddenly. He showed Sirius the package. "I don't know whats in it, my dad said it'll keep me out of trouble."
"Cool, open it" Sirius said eagerly. James ripped it open and stared as a silvery cloak fell to the ground. The boys gaped at it.
"So cool." Sirius whispered.
"An invisibility cloak" James said awestruck.
"Just think of all the pranks we can pull without getting caught"
"This year is going to be awesome." The compartment door opened, James quickly stuffed the cloak into his pocket. Lucius Malfoy stood in the door with Narcissa and Bellatrix Black, Rodolphus Lestrange and a few other Slytherins.
"There's no other compartments free on the train. So you need to leave so we have someone to sit." Lucius sneered.
"Sorry the compartments full" James smirked. Bellatrix laughed.
"Does the ickle first year want to fight sixth and seventh year Slytherins."
"No the "ickle first year" wants you to leave him alone"
"Come on James, let's just find another compartment." Said Sirius knowing the consequences of fighting with Bellatrix.
"Bye bye ickle first years." Said Bellatrix as Sirius and James left. Sirius was relieved that Bellatrix hadn't noticed him. Too busy with looking good in front of Rodolphus, he thought.
The boys looked for another compartment of first years to sit with.
What do you think. The ending isn't very good, sorry Review please. If you favourite, review please.