Valentines Warriors
Chapter 6
Jaykit woke up in the nursery. He pricked his ears and heard panic in the camp. He felt the alarm flashing from Leafpool's pelt. Something was wrong. Quiet as a mouse, he slipped out of the nursery and dashed to the warrior den without anyone noticing. Pickle was struggling and coughing loudly. Jaykit smelt the rank scent of blood. There and then, he was transported to Starclan's hunting grounds. He saw three cats standing out but behind them was many others.
"You must save Pickle!" One commanded. Without thinking, Jaykit read her mind. She was Snowy, a cat who taught the clans of Christmas. That means the other two must be Berry and Spotty. The cats behind started chorusing.
"Please let Pickle survive!" Piehead, shouted and then went onto a round of 'Pickle, Pickle' annoyingly.
"NO! LET PICKLE LIVE UNLIKE THE KITTYPETS YOU KILLED OFF!" Screeched Lightingstorm, and it finished with,
"Pickle is having kits. PICKLE MUST LIVE! IF SHE DIES, I'LL CRY! WAH!" Cried Patchkit.
Jaykit was stunned but these cats seemed to be talking to someone, someone important... But this was wasting time, without even thinking, he appeared in a different section of Starclan, but this time, only one cats was there.
"Pickle!" He called to the tortie!
"Oh, hey Jaykit! You enjoying yourself?"
"umm, yeah... Listen, Pickle, you need to get back!"
"Back where?" Pickles was confused.
"HOME, the camp, to your mate!" Pickles stepped back as she remembered.
"Your right," she whispered as she gradually faded, ears to claws. Jaykit gave a sigh of relief as the hunting grounds of Starclan disappeared too. He found himself outside a warrior den and managed to dart back to the nursery before he was seen.
Leafpool's hopes lifted as Pickle stopped panicking and bleeding. She stopped coughing and managed to let her kits out. She was safe now.
Please give a number of kits, their names, appearance, personality ect. That you want Pickle to have. If you do not then they will all have to die off which means Pickle would be in a state of shock, never to recover...
AGAIN! I SAY ! I get distracted and I am going to say that we have until march until this story will end...
Not going to mention your reviews because they were all basically the same so I put them in Starclan for you.
Scores:
Pickles:- 25.75
Roco:- 0.75
Spud:- 0.75
Smartie:- 0.75
Patchkit:- 6
0oSnowlighto0:- 7
Cloverdapple:- 5
Featherstorm7:- 7
LightningstormZero:- 6
PieInYaFace:- 5
Going to give you all two points because I am nice!
