Valentines Warriors
Sorry guys, I failed on this one
Chapter 7
"Four kits!" Cried Spud. He had chased the other warriors out of the den to give room and was now viewing the birth.
One kit had a giner/yellowish pelt, one had long brown fur, the third had a blue/grey pelt and the forth was bright orange with jet black stripes. "What should we name them?"
"Well, it decided on whether they are staying in the clans..." Explained Spud. "Shall they?"
"Let's give them two names," Pickles decided "The pale ginger should be called Lightkit or Lemon and the dark tom should obviously be Tigerkit or Tigger. You can chose the other names if you like Chose Pickle. Spud thought a moment before answering.
"The long furred she-cat could be Mousekit or Muffin and the other tom... Moonkit... or..." The two kittypets looked at each other. Neither could think of a suitable name for the grey kit. They would just wait before coming across it like Squirrelflight falling down the camp hollow in Starlight.
But someone was watching from the hill, someone who would predict a short chapter because Obzezzed has COMPLETELY run out of idea. SAVE ME FROM THE WRITERS BLOCK PLEASE!
Hmmm, that was... interesting. Please PLEASE say your ideas or I might have to be boring and go with a dark forest person and none of you want that... also, can you give me any ideas for Moonkit's kittypet name and whether I should make a new story after finishing it, about those four kits because I have ideas for a destiny of theirs but I don't want it on a valentines story because that will ruin the atmosphere. I have explained to you why this was a short chapter and I will TRY to make up for it.
Patchkit: Thanks for those three kits, you are obviously used to 'make a cat' fics. The most USEFUL review I have had.
LightvsDark99: Yes, I agree, very poor Pickle.
Featherstorm: You were the only one who said what was happening. No, she will be fine and not in a state of shock. Thanks for Moonkit but I have changed details if that is ok and she may be having a special future if I make another one...
Cloverdapple: Sorry but you do not put very good reviews, 'continue please' will not do from now on sorry because I am going to continue until I get this thing finished, however long it takes.
Scores:
Pickles:- 30
Roco:- 1
Spud:- 1
Smartie:- 1
Patchkit:- 8
0oSnowlighto0:- 7
Cloverdapple:- 4
Featherstorm7:- 5
LightningstormZero:- 6
PieInYaFace:- 5
LightvsDark99:- 1