Valentines Warriors
You reviewers shall PAY for not saying what the figure on the hill may be... perhaps you did not see it but it was the bit in italics, the first 7 words.
Chapter 8
Smartie sneaked round the edge of the hollow, Roco was doing the same, on the opposite side though. They had a plan. Smartie went up to Daisy, swiftly.
"Hi!" She exclaimed cheerfully.
"Hi," The old kittypet replied.
"Just wondering, anyone in the clan... you know... like?" She asked quietly. Daisy ducked her head in shame.
"Ummm, there is actually..." In a flash, Smartie was on it.
"Who? Tell me!" She was always the first to get the ultimate gossip. Daisy looked round, suspiciously.
"I won't tell you straight but he has amber eyes..." She smiles mysteriously.
Meanwhile...
Roco strode up to Birchfall, a mischievous look on his face.
"Hey Birchfall, how you doing?" He asked casually.
"Fine...yeah," He replied, not really concentrating. Roco face the way Birchfall was looking. Right in the path of many she-cats.
"Not interested in any she-cats are you?" He hinted.
"Good, yes. And you... WHAT? No. No, nopes, nuh uh, nooo wayyyy, not at ALL..." He burbled.
"Umm, Birchfall, are you ok?" Asked Roco, genuinely concerned as his friend was still going on, saying many negative statements.
"Noo waayy hooo seeee, nada, zip no."
"Ummm, Birchfall?"
"umm, let me think... NO, noo, how could you think that"
"BIRCHFALL!" He shouted so loudly that he actually stopped him.
"Yes? What?" The tom sat up quickly.
"Who is it?" Roco asked.
"Who is who, what are you talking about, I have no idea, I think you have gone weird, do you think he has? I think he has..."
"Oh my Starclan!" Roco sighed and walked off with Birchfall still waffling.
Meanwhile...
Smartie was walking round camp, staring into the eyes of the toms as secretly as she could. She then formed a mental table of all of the toms in the camp.
Thornclaw-Has no mate-Amber eyes
Spiderlegs-Has no mate-Amber eyes
Dustpelt -Has a mate- Amber eyes
Cloudtail- Has a mate- Blue eyes
Ashfur- Has no mate- Dark Blue eyes
Birchfall- Has no mate- (did not look. He was too busy talking to himself)
Brackenfur-Has a mate- Amber eyes
Firestar-Has a mate-Green eyes
After looking at all of this, Smartie decided that this experiment did not help at all as most of the toms had amber eyes... at least it shortened her choices to Thornclaw, Spiderleg and maybe Birchfall. She went up to Spiderleg and asked him openly.
"Is there a she-cat in the clan you like?" She asked.
"Yeah... she is standing in front of me." He flirted. Smartie was not having any of this. She quickly moved and did a front paw blow on his cheek.
"What did I say?" He complained. "I was talking about her over there. He nodded behind Smartie. She turned around and saw Daisy, smiling straight at him. BINGO. She had managed to get a couple together. Gradually the sun began to go down so she retreated to her nest.
She woke up in a sunny field. The twoleg place was not far away and neither was the warrior camp. She felt roughly in the middle of everything. She became aware of someone behind her so she turned around and saw... a PINK cat. Neither she nor tom. White wings stretched out behind... it, and it was possible that transparent hearts floated around yet it was an optical illusion... wasn't it.
"Welcome," a voice called. Or was it a voice. Where was it even from, the strange cat had not spoken, hadn't it.
~~~~~~~MEANWHILE~~~~~~~ (OR WAS IT?) (YES, I THINK IT WAS MEANWHILE BUT IT SHOULD BE A SHORT TIME BEFORE... OR WAS IT?)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (OH NEVER MIND!)~~~~~~~~
Pickles was having a well deserved rest in the nursery. Mousekit, Lightkit, Tigerkit and Moonkit were sleeping quietly, undisturbed. She had just woken up from a nap and was daydreaming peacefully. She was not prepared for the dangers to come. A shadow fell on the sleepy five. She looked up, alarmed.
"What are YOU doing here?"
Well, none of you said so it is going to be someone threatening. I have one idea for a cat...
Thanks for giving your ideas for Moonkit's name. I am going with 'Rock', thanks PieInYaFace. But the best review this chapter was Patchkit. Thank you SOO much and no I have loads to work on :D :D :D :D :D! Oh, and by the way, Moonkit is a tom. The four kits are now up on the favourite cats board.
Patchkit: LOADS of ideas, this is set before The Sight so she is not leader yet. And you were the only person to say about writing a new story :D
LightningstormZero: Yes...
PieInYaFace: Thanks for those suggestions.
LightvsDark99: I think everyone is glad she is ok.
Cloverdapple: Putting Pickle in front does not cut it. -1 point yet again.
Chene: Hi, thanks for your first review. And please put your favourite cat :D
Scores:
Pickles:- 35
Roco:- 1.25
Spud:- 1.25
Smartie:- 1.25
Moonkit:- 0
Tigerkit:- 0
Lightkit:- 0
Mouekit:- 0
Patchkit:- 10
0oSnowlighto0:- 7
Cloverdapple:- 3
Featherstorm7:- 5
LightningstormZero:- 7
PieInYaFace:- 6
LightvsDark99:- 2
Chene:- 1
