Author's Note: Thank you, Writer Fever, for being the first one to review my fan fiction story!
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I'd always thought myself as a bad writer, but when I logged into my email account and saw how many people added my story to their Favorites, my heart nearly hopped out of my chest, I was so excited! I was literally screaming and dancing around with joy!
You know, when I say it that way, I think I sound kind of like a psycho. Do you think that,too?
I like reviews! Please, people, review my story! Please!
Also, I would like Creative Criticism as long as it's not way too harsh. I'm also trying to make my chapters longer (Uh, chapter 2 was kinda short).
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Okay, I'm gonna be quiet now.
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PS. Also, thanks (again) to Writer Fever for giving me so many OUTSTANDING ideas! You rock!
I was really planning to update on Thursday, but I'm updating right now because of Writer Fever!
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PS. I do not own Better Together from Disney Channel's Original Comedy, Austin and Ally.
And obviously, I do not own Austin and Ally, because if I did, that would mean I own the song, right?
"Ally! Ally!" I shouted after class the next day. Ally turned. "What?" she asked in a voice that sounded close to a growl. "So..." I said coolly, "are we still enemies, or what?" Ally shrugged and smiled. "If you want to be," she said, then turned and walked away.
I stood there in awe. ALLY DAWSON SMILED AT ME!
Because of what I had said the other night, I realized that I was truly in love with Ally. And I was dying to know if she felt the same way.
Suddenly I felt a squeeze on my right arm. "Austin!" my songwriter, Emmy Haichoz exclaimed. "Ye- what?" I said, turning to face the annoying redhead that unfortunately was my songwriter. "I wanna work on the new song!" she yelled at me. "O- okay?" I stammered. Emmy flashed me a flirty smile and skipped away.
I walked over to my dorm and saw Dez sitting on my bed. "Aah!" I screamed. Dez chuckled. "Whatcha screaming about?" he asked. "You scared me!" I said in reply. Dez said, "Well, I have a little surprise for you." He knocked on the bathroom door and Ally walked out. "Uh... Hi, Ally!" I said, not knowing what to say. "I know you hate Emmy," Dez said. "And I got little miss Ally right here to be your songwriter!" I looked at Dez in surprise. "But... How... Ally?" I stammered. Ally smiled a bit, teetering back and forth on her heels, and gave me a little wave. I bit my lip. "Uh... I thought you..." I trailed off. "Wanna start over?" she asked me. I nodded. Ally shook my hand. "Hi, my name is Allyson Dawson, but please call me Ally," she told me. "Nice to meet you, Ally," I replied. "My name's Austin Moon. Would you like to be my songwriter?" Ally rolled her eyes. "Erm... No," she said with a cough. "Dez!" I yelled. "I thought you said she was my new songwriter!" All jabbed me in the side. "Sike!" she exclaimed. I smiled. "So," Ally said. "Since we're, um, partners now, would you like to go work on a new song?" I nodded.I couldn't help but stare at Ally. I had seen her earlier today, but I couldn't stop thinking about how beautiful she looked. Before I knew it, we had walked into the large music room and were sitting on the piano bench.
"Okay, so I've had the greatest idea for a song," she told me. "Dez told me how much you hated that girl, Em whats-her-name, so I made this.". She started to play, her fingers dancing over the smooth white keys.
Sometimes I get in my own way.
I need someone to say, "HEY, what are you thinking?"
Your words, they're always just in time.
just like a perfect rhyme, like your not even tryin'!
Like pieces of a puzzle, without eachother we're in trouble, trouble.
HEY, I will always stay by your side forever, cause' we're better together
HEY there's no other way we'll make it through whatever ,cause' we're better together.
like the waves need the sand to crash on.
Like the sun needs the world to shine on.
You're the bright side of everyday.
Me without you just isn't the same!
HEY I will always stay by your side forever,cause' we're better together.
HEY there's no other way we'll make it through whatever, cause' we're better together!
When she finished the song, I started clapping. "How'd you think of that so fast?" I asked, remembering how she said that Dez told her about Emmy. "I have a flair for it," she replied, smirking. I stuck my tongue out at her and laughed. "So.. Bye!" she said, waving. As she turned and left, I started repeating those two words, "Better together."
That was me and Ally.
Better together.