A/N I would like to thank TimeFather64 & Monkey157 for reviewing the story, at first i just thought of deleting the story and just undo all of it then i got some encouragement for them so heres Chapter 2 Remember Its My First FanFic.
As the doors opened sunshine was quickly shone into my eyes temporarily stunning me. As my eyes adjusted to the new light I saw that we were in what looked like a small town filled with all types of ponies.
"Let me show you around town" Twilight said
"Sure why not" I said with eyes still burning a little from the sun
We stopped at what looked like to be a giant gingerbread house with the words, Sugercube Corner, drawn on the front with what looks like frosting. As we entered the building I saw a very energetic looking pony working the counter.
"Pinkie I want you to meet our new friends" Twilight said to the pink pony
As soon she caught a glimpse of Drake, and me she let off a big gasp and bolted into the kitchen.
"Was it something I said?" I said with a confused look on my face
"She does this all the time you'll find out why later" Twilight and Drake said in unison.
After a few minutes of walking (Trotting?) we ended up in front of a large white building with a sign that said, Carousel Boutique. After a light knock on the front door a voice came from the other side.
"I'll be right with you, one moment please"
A few moments of silence later a white pony with a curled purple mane and tail, opened the door.
"How may I- Oh hello twilight who's your stallion friends" the mare said as she quickly turned her attention to Drake and me.
"This is Noah and Drake, they're-"
"New to ponyville," I said cutting off Twilight "Twilight can I speak to you in private please?"
"Sure" Twilight said
We walked a few meters away so that the other ponies couldn't here us.
"It was very rude of you to cut me off mid-Sentence Noah" She said with a slightly annoyed look on her face.
"I know and i'm sorry, but I think if you went around telling people that we're from a different world, that might make mine and Drakes life here harder here don't you think?"
"I guess" she said
"Good"
As we returned to our friends Drake told me that rarity had to go make new dresses for the upcoming ball and she couldn't talk at the moment. As we headed to our next destination, which was a farm called Sweet apple acres; I saw a light blue blur heading straight towards us.
"GET DOWN" I screamed
Once I hit the floor I heard something fly above me then a loud –THUMP-. As I got up I looked around to find what was flying at us I saw Drake on the floor with a cyan furred, rainbow maned pony laying on top of him.
"RAINBOW DASH You have to watch where you're flying, you could have killed one of our new friends!" I heard twilight say
"Sorry, I was just practicing my new move I'm going to show the Wonderbolts" Rainbow said
"Drake, you okay man?" I said to the dazed pony
"Yeah I think so" he responded
As I pulled him back onto his hooves I saw rainbow fly off into the sky.
After our visit of Sweet apple acres Twilight said she had one more friend she wanted us to meet. We stopped in front of a little cottage. "Fluttershy open the door I want you to meet our new friends" Twilight said.
Once the door opened I don't know if it was the new pony in me or what but I was instantly attracted to the mare standing in the doorway. She was a yellow furred and had a pink mane and tail, but what really got my attention was her eyes. They were a deep aqua blue, they were also shaped differently then the other he's seen.
"oh…hello" Fluttershy said in a barley audible voice
"Fluttershy this is Noah and Drake" Twilight said
"Hi I'm Drake" Drake said
"And I'm N-" is all I could say before my tongue slipped out of my mouth. Once I got my tongue back in my mouth my face felt like it was on fire. I could here giggles from Twilight and Fluttershy. 'At least I made her laugh'.
"Well it's getting late, we're going to head to the library" Twilight said
"Oh…ok twilight, goodnight" Fluttershy said in the quiet and oh-so-cute voice I loved.
As we were walking back to town I heard Drake whisper into my ear. "You've got a crush on Fluttershy"
"Shut up Drake" I snapped at him
"Noah and Fluttershy sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G"
"SHUT IT DRAKE"
"First comes love, then comes marriage, then comes the baby in the baby carr-" I stuck my hoof out in front of him and he tripped and landed on his face.
"Stop it you two, we're here" Twilight said
When I stopped to look up at the library something look familiar about it.
"This tree, it looks familiar," I said trying to remember where I know the tree from.
"This is the library, it's also the place that you crashed into" twilight said
"Oh right, sorry about that"
"It's fine, my assistant spike was repairing the roof when you were in the hospital"
"Spike, who's that?" I said
"Spike's my assistant, he's also the only dragon in ponyville" she said
"DRAGON!"
"Don't worry Spikes still a baby he won't hurt you"
"Oh ok good" I said sighing
As Twilight opened the door to the library I noticed that it was pitch black.
"Don't you think that we should light a candle or open a window in here Twilight?" I said
"SURPRISE"
"OH SHIT" I said as the large group of ponies almost gave me a heart attack.
"Hii'-GASP-" pinkie said with a large smile on her face
"Thanks?" I said as I was barely able to get the gist of what she said.
"No thank yooooou, NOW LETS PARTY" pinkie suddenly was on the dance floor
'I will never figure out how she does that' As I was walking around I happen to bump into applejack we made small talk but then she brought up something I didn't think of yet.
"So Noah what's yer special talent?" applejack asked
"Special talent? What do you mean?" I replied
"Ya mean you still don't 'ave yer cutie mark?"
"Cutie what-now?"
"A cutie mark, the mark on every ponies flank that shows what their special talent is."
As I turned to look at my flank I noticed that is was blank, when I looked at Applejack's she had apples marked on her.
"Oh that's what those are, I thought those were just tattoos"
"Tattoos?"
"Never mind about that, I guess that I haven't found it yet. Excuse me I have to talk to my friend Drake"
I found drake at a table with two other mares, downing a shot of "Rainbow Vodka"
"Yo Drake I need to tell you something" I said
"Noah is-is that you *hic* didja know that they got old al-cho-hol down in equestria. It's amazing man," Drake said with a slight slur in his voice
"Erm never mind ill tell you in the morning"
"What ever you say old-buddy-old-pal"
As night drew near I began to get tired but the party was still going strong. As I was wondering the library for a quiet place to sleep I found Fluttershy in a corner by herself.
"Hey Fluttershy" I said
"oh hi Noah" she said in the voice I still found cute
"Why aren't you partying with your friends?"
"oh I don't want to ruin their fun"
"How could you ruin anyone's fun?" after realizing that I just complimented her I felt my face begin to blush.
"Thank you Noah," she said with her face slightly blushed
"WHY DON'T YOU TWO GET A ROOM" Drake yelled from across the room. You could tell he was still drunk because he started to do vulgar thrusts towards Fluttershy and me.
"Shut It Drake!" I yelled back
I looked back at Fluttershy who was now a deeper shade of red.
"Man, at the rate this party is going I won't get any sleep" I said to myself
"you can sleep at my house, I mean if you want…" Fluttershy said
"You would let me sleep at your house? Even though we barely know each other?"
"you seem like a nice person"
"Really! Thank you Fluttershy," I said as I wrapped my hooves around her to give her a big hug
"GET A ROOM"
"SHUT IT DRAKE"
Once we got back to Fluttershy's house she gave me some blankets and let me sleep on her couch.
"Thanks again Fluttershy" I said giving her another warm hug.
"Oh its no problem really" she said slightly blushing.
Once Fluttershy went up to her room I drifted off to sleep, wondering what tomorrow will bring.
BimBamBop Chapter 2 a little side note i might not be updateing as frequently as i am now due to unseen concequences. If you have any suggestions for the story pm me it
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