This is just a reply to lilica since this is the only way I can reply also just a small update on what I have planed for the second.
lilica: Omg. Your review got me thinking. I know I'm not the best and I don't know everything about transformers. But I enjoyed this story very much and thank you for pointing out the mistakes.
I knew Bruticus is Gestalt and the Combacticons form into Bruticus. That is just a small mistake and I will fix it later on to make it sound better. Both Brawl and Vortex didn't like the idea of having Pebbles at the base but in time Vortex saw Pebbles made the place a little better and started to like her. Brawll called him a back stabber because he told on him to Megatron and got into trouble.
Storm was once an autobot. I thought I said that in the story but I will look back and see lol He was there and he is the one that killed Starlight. When skywarp went to kill the other's Storm had already left so he missed him. And no they just killed her because they thought she didn't something wrong and killed her. "Different Pebble" Was the first thing that came to me when I first started the story and I didn't want to change it. So I tried my best to make it sound like she is a different pebbles that's all.
Alright you all have been begging to hear about the second story. All your idea's are awesome but I have a crazy idea I hope you all enjoy. I don't want to say anything until I post the first chapter up and you all will see what I have planned. But don't worry you may all throw in idea's and give me help while I type it and I really do hope you will like it. I want to say it but I want to keep it a surprise that's all.
But I can say this.
There will be twists, deaths, new friends, romance, hurt, humour and a different place.
That's all I will say. I will write it asap and make sure you all hang around to find out what it is.
But I will make one-shots about Pebbles, Landmine and flash backs with Starlight so I will start writing them soon as well.
Bye for now guys :)