((Okay, sorry it's been so long... late nights workin' and thunderstorms last night... along with the late night. But since those don't really apply to your lives (or maybe they do), I might as well get this show on the road! For chapter 20, I've recieved... dramatic music 7 reviews!!))
VampireGaaraCheesepuffs:
NO! CLIFFHANGER SHOULD BE ILLEGALIZED!
Oh, and S-O-R-R-Y for not leavin a review for chap 19 (I FINALLY got on the
comp, and I'm SPEED readin before I get KICKED off XD)
But I'm takin time to review now so YAY! .
Gaara would be a hot goth. (to reply to UR reply on for chap 18 XD)
Though he has the emo guyliner XD JK
I have run out of sweets, so here tis a BANANA! BAN ANA! Lol
(No, I have nothing against ana's)
VampireGaaraCheesepuffs
Off imagining Gaara as a goth sigh
((yes... although, he's a hot Gaara... I'm not sure what category we could put him in except for psycho... and he's a hot one of those too! btw, it's cool. I don't mind if people don't review EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER.. so long as they review one of them and tell me what they think about the chapters that they had read.))
NeferNeferi:
I can finally review! I went away on a trip for a couple of days, and brought
you something hands you a lovely Las Vegas spoon for some pudin You asked me
for a spoon, and though it's a little late, this one is for you to keep.
Well, I liked all chapters that I've read; it's nice to see that Chikage can
be herself around Gaara. And that he's kind of willing to let her show him
what love is. But, I wonder whhat you'll give to us for next chapter? Please
update soon!
((yay for souvenier spoons!! and I finally getta eat that pudding from way back when! thanks!! I'm glad that you liked my chapters!))
Kina:
OMG SMUT shreeks to the heavens like the perverted gaaraXoc fangirl i am
LEMON!1 YES DOITDOITDOITDOIT!!
((I should... but then again, I don't think I should.))
Dragon of Twilight:
...well, i think he gets it now! lopsided leer Go Gaara!
((a new reviewer! or at least, one that I don't remember reviewing my stuff before... at any rate, GO GAARA!! lol thanks Dragon of Twilight for reviewing!))
LadyAmazon:
Woah Woah Woah! Now this got my warped perverted mind working into overtime!
Lemon better be promised or i'll never talk...review again...okay that's a
lie. But please add hot steamy lemon and good lemon, not that kissy half naked
stuff and they decide to stop at the last minute
(( I wouldn't do that... or would I? maybe I would... I think I did in my Bloody Acquaintance story... but they KNEW they were gonna do it later... it was just to get a FEEL of what was to come. But they also knew that they weren't gonna do it right in her room upon their second meeting... so yeah, my reason, my excuse for stretching out the lemon on that story))
xXTwilight-KunoichiXx:
EK! They Kissed Brb...(Runs around the house jumping for joy) ok back that
was great but ya seriously need to make your chappies longer and your cliffies
away i'm seriously dying inside...Oh yeah Twilight you can go now he kissed
her..."Ow man"said the OOC...and walks away Thank You! Gracias!! Arigato! For
the chappie!
-Ja ne, xXTwilight-KunoichiXx
((takes xXTwilight-KunoichiXx's sugar away I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to make the chapters longer... and the purpose of cliffies ARE to kill you on the inside... but I'll try... no guarentees :3 btw, Twilight, if I don't give you guys good stuffs to read, you may attack me. I'm not as good as Gaara but hey, in times of emergency, ya gotta do what ya gotta do, right?))
Gaara-frenzy:
aw poor raccoon. well chikage got him to kiss her thats good. hm interesting
tactics. it makes me laugh a bit. cant wait for the next chapter XD
((yes... as we speak, Gaara is conversing with the other members of the original raccoon family to take revenge for this heinous action. they say their gonna mess up that car but good... lol. They can do it too. ))
((Okay, now I'm gonna try to make this a longer chapter... I hate not having a page count... I'll try to do a word count though... all of the other chapters have been 1000 to 2000 words each so... yeah... lmfao))
Chapter 21: The Fight For Control
Chikage clung to Gaara in surprise. He had kissed her... HE HAD KISSED HER! Her heart nearly exploded with the rush of emotion flooding throughout her body and she knew that she could die happy right then and there. But then... Gaara would be alone again. As she kissed him back, she vowed that she would not leave him. If she did, that would be only too cruel to him. He had been alone his whole life, the people who were supposed to love him feared him or treated him worse than their own enemies. And his uncle... had hated him while being kind to him. A betrayal that could never be forgiven.
Their bodies were being crushed softly together by his sand, she could feel him so easily despite their clothing... or her lack of clothing. But something hung in the back of her mind. Something that didn't quite sit right with her. It left a bitter taste in her mouth and she was glad that Gaara had not taken to exploring her mouth or he would be able to taste it too.
But as the kiss went on, that was all it was. He took no liberties, he didn't try to feel her up... and frankly, it was a surprise to her. Such a surprise that she broke the kiss and looked at him in confusion.
Gaara looked at her with predatory eyes. His breathing was harsh and uneven, unused to the feelings that she stirred in his groin.
"What?" he asked, trying to get ahold of himself.
She asked back, "Why aren't you touching me?"
"I am... my arms are around you..."
"No... I mean... why aren't you touching me like a boy would? The other girls would boast to me how their boyfriends would touch them intimately..."
"But we're not that way," Gaara replied honestly.
The blunt force of that sentance was enough to draw blood and she bit her lip to keep the tears back. Instead, red tears of pain dribbled from her teeth and dripped from her chin slowly. And the red-headed sand god's attention went to the blood at once. The crimson life-liquid taunted him cruelly and slid down her neck after dripping onto her collarbone. She had paid no heed to it nor did she try to cover it up. So he figured that it was fair game and lowered his head to her spotted collarbone and lapped at the blood. He heard a soft noise come from her. It sounded like a cross between a moan and a whimper but he didn't care. The taste of blood was upon his tongue and never was there a sweeter taste.
"Gaara-san... stop... please..." Chikage begged brokenly. Inside, she felt like she was dying. On the outside, she was certain that she had spontaneously combusted. Her body felt so hot, so achy. But she couldn't let herself do this... could she? They weren't boyfriend and girlfriend and all she really knew was that she confused him. He may have kissed her.. but that was all thanks to her pressure. He didn't love her.
He didn't listen. He couldn't listen. All his thoughts were clouded, he wasn't sure what he was doing beyond the fact that he was licking up honey-sweet blood. He took his tongue and licked at the line that divided her neck in two.
The girl gave a staggering breath as her head tilted backwards of it's own accord. 'He doesn't love me, he doesn't love me...!' she chanted in her mind. But even with those words echoing throughout the confines of her mind, her body was clearly in control. She held no power as her form worked against her will, moving even closer and tossing her head back in wanton. "Gaara-san... we need... stop... too late..." she pleaded, her eyes shutting against the feelings that threatened to flood her over.
Gaara gave out a chuckle, sinister and deliberate. "Chikage, you should have known... that even without Shukaku... it was already too late."
((Okay... short, yes but hey, I had to set the stage for the lemon. Yes, I could have had the lemon this chapter but that made it seem pointless. At least now, I've established two facts-- Gaara apparently doesn't love her and Chikage knows that what she is doing is taboo, but her body's actions are a display of what she wants to do. Mentally and physically. Yes, she wants to do it, even in her mind but she knows she shouldn't. Review for the lemon... REVIEW LIKE THE EVIL RACCOON MAFIA IS ON YOUR CAR'S BACK BUMPER!!))