((Okay, I've waited about four days so... shall we get this thang started?? lol))
Gaara-frenzy
reason this is driving me insane.(this is NOT me saying i hate it. just me
saying how stupid gaara is being)
1st wtf romance training?!
2nd from naruto?! what the hell!! he doesn't even get it himself!
3rd i really wish i could smack gaara right now. this could possibly be the
worst plan he couldv'e come up with. leave while genma is there and say
something insensetive before going.
all in all a good chapter. i hope you update soon!!
((isn't it sad that Gaara has to turn to the one guy whom NO ONE BUT HINATA, the SHY girl who won't admit her feelings because of the embarrassment, likes?? but he kinda respects the guy... and at least he didn't go to Lee... that would have been funny as Hell... I'll probably have Lee help Naruto with the training for Gaara. Now I'm imagining Gaara in green spandex... that's scary. .))
xXTwilight-KunoichiXx
shes not strict just over protective lets put it this way...she doesnt know
english & if she sees words on the screen she would say who are you talking
too or if i say i'm reading she'll ask what are you reading...she is also like
that with my music...its rock so she thinks all of the songs are the devils
music...anyways Great chappie and that was funny dont fall inlove? whats w/
that and naruto? he more stupid than sai being good at emotions(mind you he's
not)
Anyways thanks for the chappie and too much work to write my full name
Ja ne, xXTwilyKunoXx
((Gaara is a guy with next to no good emotions... he knew he shouldn't've said that... but it was on his mind and he just had to say something. thus "Don't fall in love." As for Naruto... well, he's totally in tune with emotions of ALL kinds... plus, Gaara has a sort of "respect" for him... I think... I might have just read that somewhere... anyway! that's what I'm going with Gaara thinks of Naruto as a friend... kinda... now I'm wondering what Gaara's thinking having Naruto as his romance trainer lol))
Rin-Tsukihime13
YAY! A little victory of Chi!
I see it that way.
An appearance of Naruto-kun!
LOL.
((yes, Chi had to have some sort of good luck in this story... and so far, I've been giving her shit lol))
VampireGaaraCheesepuffs
"Even if it killed her"
Great plan .
Now all we have to do is chase down those little animals who play that
annoying "success" music (that SO gets on my nerves...)
VGC
Why do I have such a long PenName?
((Okay, we can lure them in by cheetos... and the reason for the name-- it's because those are the three things that everyone loves! lol))
Mrs. Neji Uchiha
Wow, can't believe Gaara said that. -Backs way- Don't bring that milk near
me, and I shall have nothing to do with the cow. I don't like cows. Update
soon!
((Okay, no curdled milk for Mrs. Neji Uchiha... lol ))
Lena Lupi
SLASHIE! i have crossed into the black abiss of darkness...hiss...lol anyway,
good chappie :3
((darkness is okay... slashie, not so much. thanks for the review))
((Okay, as for the next chapters, I've decided to focus mostly on Gaara's training because hey... it's funnier than what Chikage and Genma are gonna do anyway. a few dates, maybe, but it's basically unimportant... so onto Gaara's training!!))
Chapter 28: Gaara's Training, Day 0
Four days of travel and necessary stops, Gaara arrived at Konoha and, after stopping at the gates, searched for Naruto. He knew that there was only three places he could be-- the ramen shop, his house, or on a mission. Despite himself, he hoped that he wasn't away on business. That would mean more wasted time and more chances for that creep to try to steal away his Chikage. That's right... HIS Chikage. He was possessive about what was his because he didn't have a whole lot that he could claim as his own.
So when he arrived at the ramen stand, luck was on his side. Naruto was there, ten empty bowls were piled in front of him, and he was currently working on the eleventh. 'Still a glutton, I see... and it's all junk...' he thought with distain. He'd tried ramen once with Naruto and didn't like it much. It was flavored noodles in flavored water... there wasn't much to it so it didn't keep his interest.
Of course, when Gaara entered the establishment, all talking ceased. People stared just like the people on the streets had stared. Only Naruto was completely oblivious to what was going on. When the redhead stopped just behind Naruto, he did the only think that would probably bring him a small bit of amusement. "Don't you ever pay attention, slacker?" he asked with a voice that could scare death away.
And Naruto was in the air, his ramen splashing onto the floor on the other side of the counter and onto the owner's sandles. Since the water was pretty warm still, the ramen man jumped and yelled out his pain, then he muffled his swears and gave forced grins of pain and anguish.
When all was said and done, Gaara asked Naruto for help and Naruto agreed readily. Especially when he paid for all of the ramen.
Following Naruto to his house, Gaara stayed silent. He couldn't chance telling Naruto what sort of help he needed. Naruto tried to ask but Gaara insisted that it was a secret mission that he could only entrust with the blonde. And he knew he had him hook-line-and-sinker. Naruto was going on and on about how he was going to be the greatest hokage and he had to help Gaara with a secret mission that Kankuro and Temari weren't in on. He assumed way too much...
Gaara finally had the opportunity to see Naruto's house... and what a pit in the untidiest Hell was like. He tried in vain not to step on anything that probably had civilizations underneath. But even his superb ninja skills and sand manipulation couldn't save him from the crusty underwear and dirty clothes that littered the ground. "Naruto Uzumaki... are you sure you are the ONLY living thing in this house?" he asked with uncertainty.
"Pretty sure... don't step there!!" he said, eventually racing over and putting his hands up to push Gaara out of the way. Sand came out and threw Naruto to the side.
"Why shouldn't I?" he asked dully.
Naruto chuckled lightly. "It growled at me the other day... from under that shirt. Right there..."
Gaara stepped on it with viciousness. "Problem solved," he muttered. Then when he went to the blonde's side, a small whimper of pain came from there. "Get this place cleaned up and then I'll tell you the mission," he ordered, making it safely to a chair that was fairly clean.
Naruto whined, Gaara cracked the sand-whip, and Naruto was literally forced to clean his house. Mostly because Gaara encased the house with his sand and refused to let him out. Hours flew by and eventually, the blonde lay on a floor that was "clean-enough". As for the mission, Gaara had told him what it was and THAT was the reason Naruto was passed on the floor. He couldn't believe that Gaara was trying to fall in love and had actually thought to ask him for advice or training in that subject. It was, in his opinion, a miracle. Well, it was EVERYONE'S opinion. And even Gaara was sure that he'd made a fatal mistake in asking Naruto.
((too late for Gaara. If he asked for another person, Naruto would go out and tell all of his friends about the details since Gaara went to someone else. Even still, Naruto will gloat in his own special way about such a SECRET MISSION that only HE knew about. rate and review! it's a bit shorter than before sorry... lol... poor Gaara))