One Piece: The Darkness Saga
Here's Chapter 2 everyone! I think that it starts off slow, but tell me what you think, please.
Chapter 2 Taken
We were walking back to town after one of our training sessions. We decided to stop by the falls. It was one of our favorite place to go when we were younger. While there, we saw three strange men watching the falls. And man, were they huge! Two them looked like they belonged to the army or something, since they wore weird and similar uniforms, with white coats acting like capes. The other was exactly the opposite. He was just as tall, but he looked filthy. He had a short, scruffy beard, and he was missing several teeth. Like the others he was wearing his coat like a cape, but it was black.
""Hey Garp, isn't this interesting?" Sengoku asked. "Garp? GARP!" He then punched the one that I quickly figured out was Garp, who was sleeping standing up.
"Argh! Sengoku, why would you do that!" Garp screamed.
"You fell asleep again!" said Sengoku.
"You old farts are boring" said the one wearing the black coat. "Why can't we just go find the brat and go back to Marineford."
"Once we locate him, Blackbeard." said Sengoku calmly.
"Well I'm getting bored. I think that I might have some fun." said Blackbeard.
We didn't know what they were talking about. We didn't try to listen to their conversation, but we couldn't help it. Then all of a sudden, the one known as Blackbeard looked at us. He smiled, as if he knew us and started running towards us. When he punched at us, we easily dodged him.
"Hey, what's your problem, jack-ass?" I screamed.
"Blackbeard! What are you doing?" screamed both Sengoku and Garp, as they ran to restrain the man.
"Are you so enticed by that measly waterfall that you can't tell that this is the boy we've been looking for, Sengoku?" said Blackbeard, pointing at me.
"What are you talking about? I said.
"Why did he attack my cousin?" asked Brett.
"Let me show you…" said Blackbeard, "Kurouzu!" His hand was then covered in a black smoke and I then felt a pulling sensation and then I was flying towards his hand. As if by instinct, I used a move that I created.
"Black Spear!" I screamed my hand glowed in the dark aura that I have become quite accustomed to. The aura formed a rod and I shoved it into Blackbeard's stomach before he grabbed me.
"Argh!" he screamed in pain. He still had a hold of me, and I realized that my powers weren't working. He then smiled and smashed me against the ground. As soon as I hit the ground, Kyle and Brett drew their swords and attacked Blackbeard, yet Sengoku and Garp grabbed the blades. When they let go Kyle and Brett tried to attack them to get to me. Blackbeard was watching the fight, knowing that his allies were toying with my cousins. I then noticed that he had let go of me. I then pulled my powers into my legs and then kicked him in his stomach. Once he was far enough away, I got up to help my family. Brett and Kyle looked like they were in shock
"Hey, old bastards!" I yelled. "I thought you wanted me!"
"We were just talking to your family, Caeruleus. They're very skilled swordsman, yet are very amateur in skill." said Sengoku.
"Caeruleus? What is that?" I asked.
"It means 'Dark One' in our world." said Garp in a kind, grandfatherly manner.
"Dark One? What do you mean?" I asked.
"Your powers are dangerous, that's what I mean." explained Sengoku. He walked passed me and Garp followed. "It is our mission to capture and send you to Impel Down, the greatest prison in the world."
"What did I do?" I asked.
"Like I said, your power is too dangerous. You must come with us." said Sengoku.
"Really? I don't think so." I said. I focused my power and said, "Black Oblivi-" Then, the world became dark.
So how did you guys like it? Do you think it was a bit short? I kinda did, but I really couldn't figure out how to stretch it. The next chapter is when the One Piece plot line really gets kicked into in.