Ok, thanks so much for the reviews. I expected a little bit more reviews but this is my first Maximum Ride story I am feeling great.

Can I get three or more reviews for this one so i can upate quicker?

Disclaimer: I own nothing. Patterson does

Short chapter but what are you gonna do (reviews always help) Here comes the Nudge

Chapter two

Max POV

So, we've been here for a week and I haven't been out once (because when I go out in sunlight my skin starts to shimmer...I am kidding. I'm just an unsociable teenager). Mum and Ella have gone and explored the town, gone shopping but not me. School starts in a week, but all my stuff is prepared. "Ding dong", the door is ringing. I get from the couch and straighten myself out. I answer the door assuming it's my family, I was wrong. I open the door to find a girl about my age. She has got a chocolaty skin tone (a bit like Beyonce's but a tad darker). She has long dark brown curly hair that stops at her shoulders (like when Taylor swifts' hair is curly but in dark brown). She has light brown eyes. She has a skinny but strong frame and a nice smile; she looks more like a model, like she doesn't belong here but on a runway. (I like comparing people to celebrities, its fun). Put on non-emotional kill you wall on.

"Who the hell are you?" I fold my arms across my chest. What? Pretty people make me angry.

"Hi, my name is Monique Thomas but everybody calls me Nudge. I don't know why people call me Nudge but I like it, it's got spunk, and I use it in fashion. I live a couple doors down from you. I have brother but he is such a jerk, he wouldn't come over. He thought you guys were going to be weird ugly people. OMG! You are really pretty, like really pretty. OM double G the boys are gonna love you but the girls... I like you even though I don't know your name. I met your mum and your sister but every time I came over you were always somewhere else. Ella seems really nice, she was right though you don't look alike at all but Ella and your mum does; they could be twins, Spanish twins, but their daughter and mother so no..."

I cut the girl off, I get why she is called Nudge though. I remember Ella talking to me about a new neighbour who is instantly likeable; I couldn't help but agree. Her confidence is frightening in a good way. Plus, she is telling the truth. Every time I heard someone was here I ran off to hide because of the unsociable teenager I am.

"Hi, my name is Maximum ride but for your safety call me Max. Would you like to come in?" l said opening the door, she obliged. Wait, did I just do that? Where is my non-emotional kill wall gone? We sat on the couch in the living room.

"I L-O-V-E your house it's huge like a mansion. Ella gave me a tour it was amaz...I brought you cookies; your mum said you loved cookies." She handed me, the cookies which I grabbed and started eating. Good cookies but not as good as my mum's. She continued speaking

"Not as good as your mum's; that was like heaven in my mouth but I have a feeling their probably better than your attempt!" She said jokingly

"Oh yeah!" I said through a mouthful of cookies

"I'm pretty sure!" She said

"Yeah, I burnt water!" We stared at each other before we burst out laughing. Soon enough Nudge's speeches became shorter and we had a conversation as if we were old friends, laughing nearly the whole time."Ding, Dong" The door is ringing. I went to get the door to find my mum and sister.

"You're back finally!" I said as I let them through the door, I was about to close it when Nudge said that she had to be going, but with a speech to go with it. I shall not bore you with the details. I said it was cool but made her promise to come round tomorrow which she agreed to. I liked Nudge, not what I was expecting but better.

Thats that. Please Review at least three reviews for the next chapter, I hope you liked this. Even if you didn't like it review. By the way this isn't going to be revolved around a typical high school love story, this is much bigger than. Its based on a true story.