Review by: SupernalGodzilla
Q: "Is this story what I think it is; is it a Duna X Main Character? (Oh I do hope so)"
A: "I'm not sure myself. I'm toying with the idea of having a love triangle between Duna, Nick, and Kayla. I'm not sure who will win out though. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but I'm still toying with the order and events that will occur."
I'll tell you what, if you guys PM me a character that you create, I will add it into the story. Please add a physical description, age, gender (Male/Female), and a bio. I also want to know what you want that character to be part of in the story. The more you guys feed me ideas, whether it be through a character of a plot device (Something to add to the story), then I will use it. Credit will be given, and reviews will be added in the section above, that is, unless you don't want me to. Just send me a PM if you don't want me to. Anyway, I bet you're tired of this boring old authors note. On with the story!
The light faded, and me ad Duna were in the middle of the island town center. Children were running around, and adults were shopping. Duna and I, being the only 16 year olds in the area, made me slightly awkward, but I pushed it aside. A man in his early thirties walked up to us, he was obviously an advertiser. "There's a new tournament coming up. If you win, you get a shot at the champion title!" he told us. "You decided to come back at the perfect time," said Duna. "I've always been lucky." I said, and flashed a toothy smile. I noticed my canine teeth were longer and sharper than normal. Must be another change. "You know, people are gonna figure out your identity if I keep calling you Nick. We'll have to call you a different name. How's Red?" she asked. "Fine with me. As long as I get to call you Blue!" I said back. She chuckled at this and said "Sure. Whatever you want, Red." she said, rolling her eyes. Suddenly, I got a text. "Hey, Nick! Was wondering if u could help me train 4 the battles that are coming up. I'm in the common room of the coliseum. Thx! :)" is what it said. It was from Kayla. "Hey Blue, you know the girl I told you about earlier? I told her I might help her train. Then I smoked her boyfriend, and he didn't want me helping her. I guess she got his permission, or snuck away for me to help. Should we? She's new. She doesn't know about 'me'." I said. "Sure. As long as you don't battle her boyfriend again, should he be there." Duna, or Blue replied. "Okay, let's go." I said.
One walk later...
"Where are you?" I texted Kayla, it was a bit weird considering that Duna was looking over my shoulder and reading my texts. "right infront of u" was her response.
(Yes, I know infront isn't actually a word. So I spelt it wrong purposely. It's actually spelt "In front")
I looked up and saw Kayla sitting on a bench smiling. She had been giving me directions on where she was this entire time. I looked at the parks name and my mouth dropped. This was where I found my . (At the beginning of the original fossil fighters, you dig up that Spinax from the one little digging area because that one person teaches you how to dig. That place.) "You could've just told us where you were. I told Kayla. "I know, but I like to play games." She said, and smiled. "Who's that? Your girlfriend?" She said, pointing to Duna. I turned to look at her, only to find her in her hologram human form. Before I could answer, Duna did it for me. "Yes, I am." She said, and smiled. Deciding to play along, I put my arm around her waste. "We've been together for three years now." I lied. Well, technically, it wasn't a lie, but it wasn't the truth. We have been together for three years, but not as boyfriend/girlfriend. "So, what do you want to learn?" Duna asked. "Well, my Miasaur only knows dainty punch. I don't know how to teach her different moves. After seeing you battle, I saw how vivosaur should fight, But Mia can barely punch correctly!" She told me in a half yell. "Calm down," I told her. "In order to make a vivosaur, you need to train it." I said. To prove my point, I placed my hand on my chest and then on the ground. Kashin materialized. It's long serpentine body was curled up like a rattlesnake. "This is Kashin. I have trained him extremely hard and long. Now, nothing can stand in his way. Kashin, stand down. Kayla, release Mia." I told her. She obeyed and tossed out the coin, which materialized into the pink hadrosaur that it was. "Now, Mia is a support vivos-" I started. "It is used to heal itself and it's allies. It has weak attacks, but can regenerate your allies health well." Duna interrupted. "Yes, what she said." I said, motioning to Duna. "By the way, I never got your name." Kayla said to Duna. "Just call me Blue." Duna said back. "Anyway, Kayla, I'm going to put Kashin on your side, and Lord is going to attack him. I want you to use a healing move on Kashin to heal him." I yelled to her from the other side of the field. "Alright, lets go!" She yelled back. I summoned Lord and sent him a message. "Okay, Lord, I want you to punch Kashin. His defense should keep him up, but we want Kayla to train her Miasaur." I told him telepathically. "Fine." The hulking lava colored animal replied. "Nick, you owe me big time." Said another voice. I recognized the accent easily. Before Kayla could react, Lord Rushed forward, and smashed his fist into Kashin's chest. Not only did it strike hard with a critical hit, Kashin was nearly out. Lord had been trained to never let up, and Kashin was struggling to get up. This would get very dangerous very fast. "Kayla! Heal Kashin!" Duna yelled from the sidelines. Kayla was struck with fear by Lord's might. My guess was that she was afraid that once Lord was done with Kashin, it would turn on her Mia, which would be luck to escape alive. " Lord! STOP!" I yelled. Luckily, the powerful fist stopped centimeters from Kashin's face. The blood red claws that protruded from Lords wrist were on either side of the sea monster's face. Upon realizing what he had nearly done, Lord pulled his fist away with great speed, and grabbed Kashin with his free hand, hoisting the serpent up so that it's flipper was on his back. In doing so, he provided support for his heavily injured friend. "I'm so, so sorry…" I heard Lord's voice say. "I'm fine, really." Came Kashin's. I smiled, knowing they were still on good terms. "I still can't believe that I nearly killed you." Lord said again. "I can't believe that Kayla didn't act to try to help you." I said telepathically to both of them. "Should I eat her?" Lord replied. "I don't think that'll get him anywhere but jail." Said Kashin. "True point." Lord said. They both faded and returned to me. "Wow Lord, you one hell of a powerhouse." I heard another, new voice, say. This one was female, like Omias. "How did you even see me?" I heard Lord say. "I saw through Nick's eyes. Just about all of us here did." I heard the voice say again. "Who is that?" I said. "Well, I'm dark brown, almost as big as lord, and I have been waiting to fight for a while now," It said. "Giga Allos?" I guessed. "Wrong. I'm Giga Spinax." Said the voice. "Okay then, if your gonna flirt with Lord, do it so me and everyone else cant hear it." I replied lamely. "Hmph." She said. I could've storm I felt her storm off… I turned my attention to Duna, who looked at me, and shook her head. "She heard us?" Came the Russian voice. "Yep. She heard us." I replied telepathically to Heracules. Duna winked at me and walked away. I don't know if it was me or not, but I swear she was trying to pull some curves on me, and more than usual. "Hey, Lord…" I said. "What?" He replied dryly. "I think I have the same problem as you…" I told him. "And what problem would that be?" He asked, with a hint of humor in his voice. "I think an evolved dinosaur loves me." Lord chuckled and his presence slowly faded from my mind. "I heard that!" I heard Duna yell from wherever she was going. The only thing I heard afterward was laughter from my "friends" in my head for the next minute or two. Once they finished, I turned back to the clearing where Kayla was supposed to be. "Alright, class dismi-" I started, but when I looked around, Kayla was gone. "Ssed…" I finished. I looked around, but could find her anywhere. I sighed. Nobody was around. Just me. Deciding I had nothing better to do, I ran in the general direction of Duna's path, only to end up in the center of town. She had completely gone. Which was surprising considering it's not hard to spot her normally. Then again, she was wearing her hologram disguise. "NOPE." I heard another voice in my head say. It earned a few chuckles. "Shut up." I told them. Not bothering to identify the jokester's identity. "Oh well, there's always tomorrow…" I muttered, and ventured back to the hotel.
Third person POV…
That night, Nick couldn't sleep again. He ventured down to the same park and looked out onto the water. There was always something special about Vivosaur Island. Everything seemed calm for a while, until there was a soft pitter-patter of steps. He turned around, but could find nothing. He had the sinking feeling something was near though. He pushed himself off the park's rail and began walking around the normally busy, but now dead silent shopping square. He turned the corner of the fossil, which server as the centerpiece of the square. And he slowly began to hear people talking. He couldn't get a clear view, but something about them gave him a bad feeling…
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