Anyway chapter 2 is this...well something story,no reviews yet so no idea what effect this is going to have,Maybe becuase it was on the first page for about a hour before it got moved down to the second page,bit of a problem there becuase not many people will have time to read it:(.Anyway the unknown pony will be revealed this chapter.
I do know that I have bad grammer and spelling,hopefully this will not interfere with the main plot,any reviews on whats wrong with the overall basis of this story will be appreacited.
Also is it hooves or hooves?This can also mean a song
Let the chapter begin!

SLEEPOVER:Raritys house,6hours before hearts and hooves =Rarity,Twlight,Rainbow.
The glamerous house that was Raritys was turned into a wazone as the battle of the pillows raged three sides seeked victory over one another,but the flying missles of fluffyness was runing everyones aim.
Rarity in particular was being a deadshot that day,her every thrown pillow was deadly and precise.
Twlight used her magic to block pillows but her aim was as bad as Spike trying to hit on the white designer. Rainbows was hard and fast,like a guided missle her offensive pillows were the best of the three while her wings allowed her to collect the most.

The free for all battle was starting to enter its final stage,the pillows were drawn to each faction and the fighting was intense.

After a hour of heavy bombardment and defensive struggles the doorbell rang,but nobody noticed it. Raritys sister,Sweetie bell went to the open the door.
Upon opening it,she found the largest pony she had ever seen,clad in red and black was coloured in white where his armour didnt show and his mane was blue.
To her,the pony was familer yet she had never seen this one before.
"Good evening"He remarked,bowing his head,"I trust Rarity and Twlight sparkle is here?".
"Yesssss...they are busy having a pillow fight".Sweetie bell commented nervously,the sheer size of this pony was freaking her out.
"A pillow fight eh?,never knew Rarity to be one for such things...maybe she has changed"His tough face relaxed for a second,walking through the open door,his enourmous horn came through first,followed by a pair of massive wings that didnt even look like they could fly.
A second pony followed in,she recongised him as Shining armour,captain of the royal guard,and he looked as scared as she did.

Sweetie bell dived into the bedroom which was now a warzone,ducking and sweeping through flying pillows,she crawled her way to Rarity.
"Hey whats up?"Rarity half asked,still concentrating on the battle ahead of her.
"Someone!,wants!to!see!you!"Her little sister shouted in seperate words.
"Tell them Im busy..".Rarity commented back quickly,just in time to dodge another one of Rainbow dashes super shots.

Sweetie bell returned to the waiting visitors."She said she is busy". Shining armour looked at the massive pony next to him and gulped."Maybe we should go,the princess dont like waiting when theres a special dinner to be held with the most important ponies".
"To hell with that,I want to see them you moron,and we need to invite those two aswell,they are important you know?"The captain got back-chatted very qucikly and he cowered in fear. For a moment the larger ponys crystal eyes turned red for a second.
He advanced into the bedroom and grinned."Havent been here for a while you know,looks a lot different".He remarked,cocking his head."Girls dont like to be inturrpted you know,I found that out "very"quickly"Shining armour mumered,following closely behind.

The massive pony entered the room,ducked his head and used a small spell to stop all the pillows in mid air.
"Good evening".He spoke softly,but there was not mistaking the iron tone in his voice. At the very second his spell was cast,a small bead of sweat popped out and sank into the floor.
Rarity of course did not like seeing him there,after having shouting at him,she was still slightly annoyed. She made a move to stop him,but was speachless for a second when he removed his massive helmet. Instantly recognising him,he was a ghost from her past,someone who was very close to her.
"YOU!"She found her voice and screamed,running towards the larger pony. Every other pony was largely confused at this,"Didnt Rarity hate this pony?"They all thought together.

The fashion designer lept up the military styled pony and...hugged him?."I have fucking missed you...you stupid colt!".She swore and started to weep a little.
"Yeah...sorry about that,I was caught up on things,you know like being the 3rd most powerful pony in the land!"He told her,slightly bragging but it was well deserved.
"Wow,Im just a fashion designer...I never you could keep yourself together with being angry all the time and that,let alone being so power and such a nice uniform!".Rarity squeaked excitedly,noticing that they coats did match and that the larger pony had a awesome uniform!.
"Well little sister,I suppose you wouldnt mind designing "my"armys new uniforms!"He chatted back."I miss you so much...big brother"The smaller pony smiled.

"Little sister?"Twilight commentated.
"Big brother?".Rainbow dash remaked.
"They are family?"Shining armour dared to speak.
"Didnt know I had a big..well MASSIVE brother".Sweetie bell giggeled.
Twlight and her brother took each other to one side. "They both look at same"Twlight whispered. "I know,how could I have not figured this out?,he seems rather peaceful and not the raging pony that I know".Her brother whispered back.
"I better ask Rarity who and what he is".
"When we are gone,by the way...you two are invited to a dinner at the mayors house,Celestia,Luna and all the most important ponys are there".

A HOUR LATER:Rarity and Twilight.
"That was some get-together Rarity,I didnt even know you had a big brother"Twlight asked Rarity,slightly exhuasted.
"Well...I love him and all that,but I think Im the only one that does,every other pony either hated him or was scared of his rage"Rarity admitted.
"Rage?"
"Rage".
You see,in ponyville a few years back.
Things were a little bit different,this house was my brothers.

He was in Ponyville college and just finishing,with top marks and all,I was the only one that really congratulated him.
His parents hated him,the teachers were scared and yet I never noticed.
Silver Sabre was his name and fighting was his game.

To me,he was the best.
I could dress him and play with him as much as I wanted.
The perfect brother.
Silver Sabre was his name and fighting was his game.

He was a role model,amazing and stunning.
He should have had the most beauftil and stunning mares flocking to him.
Yet they were all scared of him.

He had a rage like no other,powerful and terrifying.
It took seven Captains and 30 guards to put him down.
After that he was banned from this place and forced to go into the military.

Now look at him,leader of them all.
Strong,powerful and rivals the princesses in size.