I'm sorry only PART a new chapter, but there is some news here. We've all seen the petition going around about story removal, and I decided not to post that as a chapter. However, while reading a fic I can across this information. Here is information about the people that are helping delete are stories. I have checked out there forms and it really is them they have a forum that is called Clean Sweep (search CRITICS UNITED, then look for forum Clean Sweep once entered.) that list all the fic's they delete like a hit list. Some of them even list reasons why they deleted it such as it's a songfic,(they say NO SONGFIC!) its original work, its rated MA, or just because they don't like it (one post was "Ask? Kingdom Hearts Style! (story in question) - This is the one that got under Jewel's skin so let's give her a nice surprise and let her see it's gone by the time she gets back"). What they do is get others on their side and report it to the people of who I wonder even check the fic's they report or just delete hoping the information is correct. I most have to ask what gives this people the right to do what they do if they don't like fic then don't read it. They act like they are forced to read this fic's well I say we fight back I have found so far a few forums that wish to fight against this people so at the bottom check out these forums and sign on to help us against them. I also hope many of you get to read this as there is a chance people of Critics United might try to or have the stories I post this in deleted. Just to quote me but I urge all of you who read this also post in your stories or on your profiles or even email them to other authors or people you know.

Concerning those responsible, and those against story removal,
the source of the purge has been found. A group of regular FF users, Critics
United, will post any story they don't like on their forum. Then they have all
their members mass report it until the story is deleted. In their forum they
say they hope to cause another purge soon. They are not critics; they are bullies.
They do not offer constructive criticism; they flame and poke fun. They like to call
stories shit-fics, and call authors whose story they got deleted 'immature' and
'likely to bitch at them.' They often use heavy sarcasm and condescension in their supposed
'constructive criticism.' The head of Critics United has MA sex scenes in her stories. (she has even
"reposted them" to AFF because she wasn't takeing chances. WHY THEY HAVE PROBLEM
WITH THE STUFF THEY WRITE?

Copy and Paste
Spread the word, hurry!

(WARNING: THESE SITES HAVE NOT BEEN YET CHECKED BY LoaLP, THOUGH CRITICS UNITED (CU) WAS CHECKED AND IS THERE.) T^T

Forums against Critics United:
1. Helpful Critics
2. Writers against Critics United
3. Death to Critics United! (Death might be a bit over kill though)
4. Critics United rant Forum
5. Anti-Critics Union
7. Best em' best!
8. Serpent Alley
9. The Anti Tallz Rebellion
10. A&A

I hope you all can help out this forums and help us stop Critics United and anyone else that wishes to delete are fic's just cause they don't like them.

This is, admittedly a teaser. I hadn't planned on releasing this just yet, but I will so its not just an author's note. Thank you all for reading this. A few things; first, reviews. If you want more chapters, review more. It's what helps motivate me to get off my lazy, fanfic reading butt and update. Special thanks to IRAssult, he has reviewed on multiple chapters and I am extremely grateful. If you kill me for not updating sooner, I can't update any more and you get a DEAD story. Also, the day I own Bleach is the day I continue it and live a rich life in California.

Last time: Hichigo quickly takes control of Ichigo's unconscious body. Letting out a hollow's scream of victory, he managed to wake Rukia, who was extremely concerned.

"Is that… Ichigo?" she asked herself.

Rukia

"Is that… Ichigo?"

Ichigo, rather, the body that was once Ichigo, stood before her, in a frightening display. He stood over six feet tall, with a white body. His shikusho was ripped around his waist, and one arm. At his wrists and neck, clumps of what appeared to be red hair grew out. The chest was heavily muscled, as Rukia noticed it had an EIGHT pack. It had a relatively small hollow hole right in the middle of his chest. Four thick black stripes came out from the hollow hole, with two thinner ones coming out around his neck. He had large bull horns coming out from the sides of his head, which had black stripes along it. The most important thing in Rukia's mind was the waist long flowing orange hair coming from behind the mask. This hair is what confirmed to her that this was Ichigo, not some random hollow (1). Another odd thing she noticed in a detached part of her brain was that the hollow was human sized and humanoid. She knew from her hollow lessons that only a vasto lorde looked this human.

"Ichigo, what have you become?"

The reiatsu of the being crashed down on her, a mindless, unstoppable wave of fear, terror, pain, and other emotions that scared the living daylights out of her. So of course, it being Ichigo, there was only one way to bring him out of… whatever he was currently in.

She hit him on the head as hard as she could, while calling him an idiot loudly enough that Aizen wondered what had disturbed the peace in Soul Society.

Ichigo's head whipped around like lightening, ready to hit her, but stopped as soon as he saw her. He seemed to be in some kind of internal struggle, slowly bringing his hand to his mask and shattering it.

"Rukia? What just happened? The last thing I remember was that I was fighting in my inner world… wait, why are all these fukutaicho's here? Did I do that?" Ichigo stammered as he noticed the fukutaicho's lying on the ground, still unconscious from his reiatsu unleash, (though after Rukia screamed, many had begun to stir, wondering what had happened to knock them out, and who was calling idiot loud enough to wake a drunk Rangiku?)

"IDIOT!" SLAM! Rukia smashed Ichigo's head with suprising strength for someone as short as she was.

"OW! What was that for, midget?" Ichigo shouted.

"Well you asked for it, scaring me by hollowfing like that. AND I'M NOT A MIDGET! YOUR JUST TALL!" Rukia shouted back in reply

"What? Hollowfying? What do you mean?

"You became… this… hol-"

Out of nowhere, she was inturrupted by none other than Urahara Kuskuke. "I'll take it from here, Kuchiki-san. I have some knowledge in this area."

Out of surprise, Ichigo questioned why the man was there.

"didn't you give us some BS excuse about why you couldn't come?"

"Well, yes, but I was here the whole time. I had to take precautions against Aizen killing you and destroying Soul Society." Replied in an altogether childish manner. Growing serious, he told Ichigo that he had some friends who could help his problem.

'Ichigo, before you can leave and go with hat-and-clogs, you must go to the cave you learned Bankai in and come to your inner world. We have much to discuss.

This is Ichigo as he fights Ulquiorra in his hollow form. You can look up the picture and see it for yourself .