Okay, that took a while. Sorry to anyone who was actually reading this story. I seem to be reentering a FanFiction stage so several of my works will be edited/posted/completed soon. Then I will veer off in a completely different direction for a while. Yay. Anyway, here is the completed "Broken"
I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin')
Unknown, Unknown.
An hour passed. Or maybe a moment. Perhaps just an eternity. Susan lost all notion of time and space as she rested in the light. His light.
The changes were small at first. A slight focusing of the light, shapes began to form. No, not shapes, shape. As Susan began to run toward the shape she became aware of the world around her for the first time. She was running over a grassy hill. The light had solidified into a great Lion. She was almost home.
Susan through her arms around The Lion's neck and she was home.
I'm barely holdin' on to you
Always, Home
"Go, my daughter, further up, further in."
At The Lions command she began to walk. The hill seemed to go on forever, past waterfalls and lakes, people she had never seen and the most famous of Narnians. She saw King Caspian X, standing beside Reepicheep and Trumpkin. She saw Mr. Tumnus and her courtiers. And when, at last, she reached the top of the hill, she beheld a walled garden and inside a King and Queen enthroned.
Three figures stepped into her line of sight. A man, tall and dark, with a silver crown upon his head, a young lady, bright and beautiful, and another man, who radiated home.
Susan ran to them, embraced them, to hold and never let go.
Well, I hope that was sort of worth the wait. Review if you enjoyed it. Or didn't, there is always room for improvement.