I'm going to give you the first chapter as well. I'll give you the next one. Feed back is always appresiated but flames will be used to lit little fires around the city( please don't feed my inner pyromane)
disclamer: sorry I forgot this from the prology. Everything you recognize belongs to mister Tolkien, the rest is mine.
I hadn't realized it was full moon. When I got to my pond the clouds gave way, letting the moon out. That was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. The moonlight reflected from the water causing the whole clearing to bath in an eerie silver light. I don't know how long I just sat there, watching.
My peace was interrupted when I heard something. I knew they were cries of help even though I couldn't understand the words. I looked around trying to find a source for the sound. I thought I saw something in the water. I don't know what drove me but jumped into the water trying to save the person I thought I had seen. I didn't get far. The water was freezing. It didn't take long before my body started to go into shock. I couldn't control my limbs any longer and the water pulled me down.