This is my first story so plz give me ideas on areas that I can improve on. Thank you.
I don't own yugioh (but I wish I could) I only own myself and my homework.
Chapter 1.
As Serenity was watching Yugi and Yami duel she thought of what Seto had said to her 3 days ago.
"How can you be related to that mutt? You are nothing like him. But hey not everyone can choose their family."
"Hey I love my family how can you live when you can't even see your brother or do you just try and ignore him ."
"How dare you talk about Mokuba like that." He then walked up to her and slapped her.
" Don't you dare touch her Kaiba." Yami yelled as he ran up to her. "If you do you won't see the living day again."
"Whatever." He said as he walked off.
"You alright Serenity." Yami asked with concern.
"Yah I think I will be." She said with a crackly.
"Come on I will walk you home."
After that she avoided him and started hanging out with the gang.
"HEY SERENITY COME ON WE'RE LEAVING IT"S GETTING LATE" her brother yelled.
"Okay I'm comin' , I'm comin'" Serenity said.
At Yami's and Yugi's house!
"well night Yugi" Yami said with a yawn.
"You love Ren don't you?"
"Is it that obvious?"
"UMMM DUH" Yugi practically yelled.
"Yugi SHUT UP"
"sorry granps."
"Yah but I don't know how to tell her that.."
"That you're a half demon?"
"Yah that. She will be scared of me!"
"Tell her tomorrow and that you won't hurt her." Yugi stated
"Fine I will"
Okay now should I have him tell her or wait and tell her when she is in danger? PLz tell me