Okay, if you were actually reading this before, you already know that I posted all the chapters. But, I really wanted some feedback on this story because it's my first try at Supernatural. That's why I took down all the chapters and I'll post them one by one now. Sorry if I sound conceited. :(
{Chapter TWO}
Len took the box out of his pocket and opened it. It was just a rock. A pretty blue rock with wispy white patterns on it, but it was still a rock. Why did his mom want him to have a stupid rock? He picked it up to throw it onto the ground when he saw a note on the bottom of the box.
A stone of luck
A stone of dreams
You get one wish. Choose wisely.
Len knew one thing for sure; that definitely was not his mother's handwriting. He figured it was just a prank, but that didn't seem right. Why would someone deliver a rock to him just for a prank? The stone was really smooth. Len ran his fingers over the surface and blew out a breath.
"Well, are you going to use it, kid? Because there are some people who would love to have that stone."
Len whirled around and came face-to-face with a young-ish man with blue hair. He wore a long scarf, even though it was at least 60 degrees Fahrenheit. "Uh, my mom gave it to me, so I think I'll keep it."
The man frowned, not believing Len for a second. "Well, tell me what you're going to use it for."
"Um. Decoration purposes. Like, for my room. Yeah." Len mentally kicked himself for sounding so lame.
Blue-haired man wasn't impressed and he was losing his patience. "Look kid, I don't want to get violent so just give me the stone and I'll let you go."
"Nah. I mean, it's just a…" Len trailed off as the man smiled widely for him. It wasn't a friendly smile. No, it was probably to show off his teeth, er, fangs, his eyes flashing red for a moment. "…It's just some junk I found on the ground. You can have it, 'kaythanksbye." Len dropped the stone into the man's hand and sprinted all the way home.
He stopped in front of his house, panting. Was that man a vampire? No vampires didn't exist. But his eyes and his fangs…
Len froze. He felt someone watching him. Slowly, he looked to his left and he saw a flash of yellow eyes in the bush. Then it was gone. I'm just hallucinating, just hallucinating, he chanted in his head, opening the door to his house.
A very angry mother glared at him as soon as he walked inside. "Len Kagamine, you are five minutes late. What could you have been doing?"
"Sheesh Mom, it's only five minutes. There aren't a lot of things I can do in five minutes. Besides-"
"Excuses, excuses! All you ever give me are excuses! I just know you'll turn out like your father when you grow up." She stalked up to Len and slapped him. Hard. "You remind me so much of that filthy liar. You even look like him! I don't want to see your face until dinner! Go." She pointed in the direction of Len's room.
"Yes ma'am," Len muttered, his cheek stinging. It wasn't until he had gotten to his room did he remember to ask his mother about the stone that she had supposedly given to him. He thought about it, and decided not to tell her.
His mom would never give him anything, he was sure of it.