Brittanys POV
i could tell jeanette that ellie was in the hospital too and that jean had been ina coma for a week. You see when jeanette was in a coma me and ellie were hanging out with the boys and something bad happened.
It all started when we were outside..
*flashback*
"Come on Ellie i will race you!" Yelled alvin, " Loser has to..Smell Theos Butt after he farts!"
"Alvin thats not fair!" ellie whined.
"Are you chicken? Come on You baby!" Alvin smirked as he said that knowing he would win.
"F-FINE! i will do it.." ellie responded seeming very nervous..
"On your mark.." ellie was close to tears, "Get set...GO!" they ran off to the treehouse.
The tree house was very far from whre they were...almost for a human and really far for us. I was watching ellie then i noticed something. She was breathing funny..then she cluthced her chest..and fell.
"ALVIN..DAVE..SOMEONE CALL 911!" i burst into tears..not her too.
*end of flashback*
i walked over jeanette and thought about it for a moment.
"jeanie i need to tell you something." she looked at me and shook her head so i went on. i gasped for air and said, " Jeanette, Eleanor has Pneumonia."
i know its short but its getting good..right? review and tell me what you think.