-Same disclaimer, I don't know if the rating should be a bit higher for the character death-
-Thank you to my reviewer, Vanedusk, for the great reviews, also the ending will be a surprise, I'm not going to be entirely true to the Disney movie-
Chapter 11- The Capture
Haldir's breathing quickly became erratic as he took in the scene before him; this mortal man was hand his arms around his intended bride, his hand clenched around his long, white knife, he gave a battle cry and sprung forwards startling Aragorn and Arwen apart 'Haldir!' Arwen gasped, Haldir knocked Aragorn to the ground and they started to wrestle.
Pippin had arrived and concealed himself behind a tree; he stared for a moment before notching an arrow in his bow.
'HALDIR STOP!' Arwen cried, she grabbed him around the shoulders in an attempt to pry him off, but was knocked away, Haldir now had his knife against Aragorn's throat, Aragorn was desperately trying to hold his arm back, but was slowing losing his grip, when suddenly an arrow flew out of nowhere and pierced Haldir's chest 'NO!' cried Arwen, but it was too late, Haldir fell, the water around was slowly turning red his with blood, pippin ran out still carrying his bow, Aragorn looked up 'Pippin?', Arwen turned abruptly 'You killed him!' she yelled hysterically at him 'I didn't mean, I-' pippin stuttered, the sound of the elven warriors were heading towards them 'pippin run' said Aragorn 'what about you?' he asked panicked, 'JUST RUN!' he yelled, pippin took off back into the forest just as the warriors arrive on the scene, Elrohir took one look at Haldir then at Aragorn 'grab him' he commanded pointing to Aragorn, Orophin and Legolas rushed forward to subdue him and they dragged him towards Rivendel. The others picked up Haldir and they all returned to the village, Rumil carried Haldir towards lord Elrond 'who did this?' he commanded, Orophin threw Aragorn forward 'your weapons are strong, but our anger is stronger' Elrond seethed pointing his knife to his throat 'at sunrise he will be the first to die' Arwen rushed forwards 'but father-''I told you to stay in the village, now because of your foolishness Haldir is dead' Elrond shouted at her 'but I only wanted to help' she said sadly, he shook his head 'take him away' he barked to Orophin, everyone left and Arwen sunk to her knee's 'Haldir was only coming to protect' she sobbed, Eowyn walked over to her 'Arwen, I sent Haldir after you, I was worried about you, I thought I was doing the right thing' Eowyn said guiltily 'all this happened because of me, and now I'll never see Aragorn again' Arwen said sadly. Eowyn bit her lip when suddenly a thought hit her, she grabbed Arwen's hand 'come with me' she said pulling her up and she led her to the talon Aragorn was being held 'Arwen wishes to look into the eyes of the man who killed Haldir' she said to Rumil who was standing guard 'be quick' he said opening the door, Arwen entered and saw Aragorn, head slumped and tied to a stake, she ran to him, bent down in front of him and lifted his head 'Arwen' said a surprised Aragorn 'I'm so sorry' said Arwen throwing her arms around him 'what for this, don't worry I've gotten out of worse scrapes' 'this would never of happened if we'd never met' said Arwen 'Arwen look at me I'd rather die tomorrow than not knowing you' he said firmly 'Arwen' Eowyn called 'I can't leave you' she whispered to him 'I never will' he whispered back, Arwen gave him a peck on the cheek and slipped out of the talon with Eowyn.
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-I had trouble with the death scene, I really didn't want to kill Haldir because he was killed off in the movie :( -
