Hi, everybody! Sorry for taking so long, but here it is. I'd like to thank both Silenthunder and Awesome for reviewing. As always read, review and enjoy! And remember I take ALL reviews but I don't accept cussing in them.
Chapter Two-
Mudclaw, Brokenstar's insight to WindClan, had been apprehensive since the two ThunderClan cats had entered ShadowClan territory. Now on the border of WindClan and ShadowClan, Mudclaw was forced to listen to Blackfoot, Brokenstar's second-in-command, who irritated him terribly. Then again Blackfoot would irritate others because of his obnoxious attitude. Boasting every chance he gets that Brokenstar picked him to be second-in-command. I'm more important because I gather information on his enemies! The thoughts went through Mudclaw's head, directed at the pure white tom-cat with black paws. Even though Mudclaw supported Brokenstar, he didn't appreciate the fact that he had to treat Blackfoot (his equal) like his superior. Standing close enough that their pelts brushed, his former apprentice Webfoot trembled and stammered progress reports to Blackfoot. "W-we can't g-go ag-against Thunder-thunderClan! They'll kill us, they have greater odds in their favor!"
"I believe that you, Webfoot, are more concerned about ThunderClan then what Brokenstar, OR his superior have to be afraid of" Webfoot shrunk back whimpering, causing Mudclaw to roll his eyes.
"Mudclaw!"
"Blackfoot, yes?"
"I don't what to see that WindClan mange-pelt in my sight ever again. Do you understand?" Blackfoot growled.
"Of course Blackfoot." Mudclaw sarcastically replied. Then he shoved Webfoot over and growled at him to go home. Webfoot hared off like his life depended on it, which it probably did.
"Brokenstar is displeased with this interference of ThunderClan's; however he says to accelerate his plans. Move the captured patrol to the training area, guard them then mount the attack on ThunderClan." Mudclaw was flabbergasted, Brokenstar had ordered him to appear neutral, but this would mean coming out in the open. "Does this mean I can reveal myself?"
"That's what Brokenstar said." Blackfoot replied.
"What about the ThunderClan cats?"
"Dispose of them, either send out apprentices for battle practice, or your most trusted warriors for a warning."
"If Brokenstar insists." This caused Blackfoot to growl, but he padded back to his territory. Mudclaw turned back to his also, thinking of who to send out.
Bluestar something was going to happen the moment the ShadowClan patrol padded away. Immediately, she sprang to her paws in an attack crouch. She approvingly looked at Firepaw when he mirrored her movements at the same time. Together they scanned the sides of the hollow, still in their positions. After what seemed like moons, they decided that everything was safe. Bluestar sat up, flicking her tail for Firepaw to do the same. Wrapped in silence, the ThunderClan cats heard the approaching warriors with ease. "Incoming!" Bluestar hissed to Firepaw.
"Bluestar, we need to hide, they out number us greatly. Dive in the pool."
"What! We can't do that, it'll be suicide."
"No, the pool is shallow enough for us and our scent to be concealed. It's either the pool or face a truly suicidal attack." With that said Firepaw slunk into the pool. Bluestar hesitated, but followed her apprentice. Not a heartbeat later, Mudclaw's warriors padded into the hollow.
So, what'd you think? Ok so, I kind of need characters for Mudclaw's chosen cats, five would be the least and seven would be the max. Ok so please, tell me what you think, and send in cats.
P.S- I WON'T update until I get other reviewers besides Awesome and Silenthunder (even though your reviews are amazing!). Besides there is the character send-in, so that will count as a review.
