**Review of Chapter 2**
Eddie: "Mhm, ever since the first time I saw you get lost in your lyrics." Smiling "Loren Tate, I have so many feelings for you that I can't even understand you are what I've wanted for so long and every time I tried to tell you how I felt I couldn't get the right words out. I can't believe you don't know what your sweet smile does to me. I have never felt so much for one person in my life and now that I am able to tell you this I want to tell you everything I'm not going to hold back anymore I need to tell you what's been on my heart for so long."
Eddie took a deep breath getting ready to spill out all his feelings everything he has been wanting, needing, and desiring to tell her for so long. With tears in her eyes and a simple nod from Loren, Eddie continued.
Eddie: "Loren you mean the world to me, you inspire my music, you inspire me to be a better person, and a better friend because you are the most amazing friend anyone could ask for, and there are no words to describe how much I've been wanting to tell you this so I'm just going to say it, Loren Tate I…
Chapter 3- It all feels like a fairytale.
"LOREN…LO ARE YOU HOME?!" Loren' Mom (Nora) called out to her.
Both Eddie and Loren let out an annoyed sigh as they got out of their chair and walked back inside.
Loren: Trying to hide her aggravation "Yes Mom?!"
Nora: Smiling "Oh there you are… Hi Eddie!"
Eddie: With his best fake smile. "Hey Nora"
Nora walked over to where Loren and Eddie were standing giving each a hug. As she stepped back she noticed both of their disappointed faces.
Nora: Questioning "Did I interrupt something?"
Eddie and Loren quickly glance to one another and in unison respond: "Nope"
Nora: Let out a quiet yawn "Ok well I'm exhausted I'm going to head to bed"
Loren: Hugging her Mom once more. "Ok good night Mom"
Nora: "And it's late Eddie you should be heading home!"
Eddie: "Yup I was just leaving"
Nora: "Ok good, have a safe trip home. Good night guys love you both"
Together: "Night love you to!"
Nora's POV
Something is totally up! Do they really think I'm that stupid? Hopefully they finally told each other how they feel. They both have liked one another for as long as I can remember, why is it so hard for them, I mean seriously. They are almost always together and flirting I don't get why they don't just take the next step. I give my full blessing, I love Eddie like he's my own, and I think he's just perfect for my Loren not only are they both musically in sink, but he's the one who has always been there for her when she needed someone to talk to or hug her, and when I haven't been able to be the Mom she deserves. He takes care of her and protects her like a man should and I know with all my heart he would never leave her like Trent left me. They will end up together eventually; I just don't know why they're taking so long.
Lorens POV
Loren: Upset "Do you really have to go?"
Eddie: "Yeah I told my parents I'd be home at a reasonable time and considering its" he looked at his watch "almost 3 it's definitely time to go."
Loren: letting out a soft sigh "Wow I didn't even know it was that late but ok will I see you tomorrow?"
Eddie: "I know right time really does fly by when you're with someone you like. And I hope I will."
He gave her his best smile that he knew always made her happy, and this time was no exception she perked up at the sight of it and let out a little giggle.
Loren: "Me to"
Eddie gently cupped her face with his hands and pulled her into a light kiss. They both pulled away with huge smiles on their faces.
Loren: "After that you expect me to let you go?"
Eddie: Honestly "Believe me I don't want to!"
Loren: "Then don't."
Eddie: "I have to"
This time Loren took control grabbing Eddie' face and pulling him down into her lips.
Loren: In between kisses "Ugh" … "fine"… "If you have to!"
They both took a deep breath as they pulled apart for the last time. They headed for the door and Loren opened it slowly, as they walked out hand in hand Loren stopped on the porch and Eddie gave her one last sweet kiss on the cheek.
Eddie: "Bye Beautiful"
Loren: Smiling "See ya later Rock star"
He made his way to the car but turned around when he heard Loren call his name.
Loren: "Eddie! Wait!" Loren ran over to him. "What were you going to tell me before my Mom came home?"
Eddie: Smiling as he remembered "I can't tell you now it's not romantic enough."
Loren: Confused "Romantic? Why does it have to be romantic? ...Can't you just tell me now please?!"
Eddie: Letting out a little chuckle "Nope not gonna happen Mrs. Tate."
Eddie gave her another soft kiss on the cheek and headed to the door of his black SUV he waved good bye before he got in and drove away. Loren turned around and made her way in the house and to her bedroom. She plopped on her bed and started to rewind all that had happened. While thinking an idea for a song popped in her head, she grabbed her notebook and pen and the lyrics quickly came flowing out of her head and onto the once blank piece of paper.
"Today was a Fairytale"
Today was a fairytale
You were the prince
I used to be a damsel in distress
You took me by the hand
And you picked me up at six
Today was a fairytale
Today was a fairytale
Today was a fairytale
I wore a dress
You wore a dark grey T-shirt
You told me I was pretty
When I looked like a mess
Today was a fairytale
Time slows down
Whenever you're around
But can you feel this magic in the air?
It must have been the way you kissed me
Fell in love when I saw you standin' there
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
Today was a fairytale
You've got a smile
That takes me to another planet
Every move you make
Everything you say is right
Today was a fairytale
Today was a fairytale
All that I can say
Is now it's getting so much clearer
Nothing made sense
Till the time I saw your face
Today was a fairytale
Time slows down
Whenever you're around, yeah
But can you feel this magic in the air?
It must have been the way you kissed me
Fell in love when I saw you standin' there
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
Time slows down
Whenever you're around
I can feel my heart
It's beating in my chest
Did you feel it?
I can't put this down
But can you feel this magic in the air?
It must have been the way you kissed me
Fell in love when I saw you standin' there
It must have been the way
But can you feel this magic in the air?
It must have been the way you kissed me
Fell in love when I saw you standin' there
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
It must have been the way
Today was a fairytale
Oh, oh, yeah, oh
Today was a fairytale
Loren' thoughts
I just finished the best song I've ever written, all because of Eddie. Every word I wrote is true, it all feels like a fairytale. He is so amazing I can't believe he even likes me; out of all the girls in the world he chose me… I wonder why! I don't deserve him he's too perfect, Well other then all his flaws but hey I'm willing to look past them if he can get passed mine, but in a way he is perfect, he's perfect for me. I wonder what he wanted to tell me. Whatever it was he needs to tell me during something romantic, why? What is so important that he needs to tell me on a special occasion? Maybe… No he wouldn't! Would he? Would he actually tell me that? There is no way not now, but what if he was going to say it, would I be able to say it back? …Yeah of course I would, right it's not that hard all I have to do is say is 3 simple words. But what if I get nervous would I be able to?
Aw Eddie' such a sweet guy lol I hope you guys liked this chapter as much as I did writing it. If you have any suggestions, questions, or just want to tell me you liked/hated my story please write it in the reviews haha I know you're probably like "Why would you want to know if someone hated it." Well that's easy I want to know so I can fix it to their liking. I always consider everyone's input so please let me know how you want the story to go. Alright well I'm probably writing some more chapters soon so yeah get ready.
XOXO
Faithifer20
