Ok so I'm changing the way I write my chapters a little bit, instead of being in a different point of view all the time I'm going to go back and forth from the characters point of views. If you don't like the way this chapter is written let me know and I can change back.

And also I saw a couple different stories doing a Song Recommendation, Shout-Out, and Dedication, I thought the idea was cool so I'm stealing it, shout-outs will be decided from the best review, suggestion, PM, or my favorite story of that day.

Oh and someone pointed out that Ian is Australian and not British, I am so sorry I got that wrong! It's too late to switch now but just know that I am really sorry I got them mixed up, hope you guys can forgive me!

Well here's the new chapter let me know what you think.

Song recommendation: When I was your man by Bruno Mars (My absolute favorite song right now)

Shout-Out: Reyes208 for giving the best review on my last chapter and for just being sweet like she is;)

Dedication: To my amazing best friend Abby for always proof reading my stories to make sure they don't totally suck and being the coolest girl I know!:)

***Review of Chapter 7***

Eddie questionably followed her out and was completely surprised by Loren who jumped into his arms knocking him to the ground.

Loren: Giggling of embarrassed "That's not how it usually ends up in the movies."

Eddie: Smiling at the girl who's laying on top of him "I don't think any of the guys in those movies have ever attempted to catch the girl after a kiss like that."

Loren leaned in and kissed him sweetly on the lips but pulled away a lot sooner than Eddie would've liked, he didn't know why until he opened his eyes and saw a girl hovering over both of them.

Chapter 8- The absolute hottest thing I've ever seen you do.

Lorens POV

I'm laying here on top of Eddie who I just smashed into the cement sidewalk, you would think that I'd be uncomfortable and embarrassed but as soon as I looked into those perfect brown eyes and his very muscular arms were securing my body, I felt just right.

When I sensed a tap on my shoulder I stopped our heated kiss and lifted my gaze, as I looked up I saw an unexpected and unwanted guest with her piercing blue eyes staring at us. Once Eddie tried to pull me back into his embrace, I knew he still hadn't noticed that the reason I didn't continue was because someone was there and I unfortunately had to decline his grabbing hands whispering "Eddie stop." When his eyes fluttered open blinking a few times to get used to the shinning sunlight he turned to see the girl he's been trying to avoid for months now. He hopped up fast and hard forgetting I was on top of him, making me fall to the ground, I let out a little gasp from the siring pain as my hand hit the cement. I could already feel a brose coming on but held back the tears and stood on my feet with Eddies helping hand.

He gave me an apologetic look and I gave him a smile and nod letting him know I'd be ok. He then turned his focus back on the ignorant, self-centered, stalker in front of us and with force said "What the hell do you want?"

Ian's POV

I watched as the lovely girl in front of me contemplated all the pros and cons of becoming my girlfriend, I know she will have many questions for me and I'm ready... I think.

I'm torn from my thoughts when I hear a deep sigh, I turned my head to see that Melissa had her mouth opened intending to let words out but failing to, So instead I spoke up hopefully making her mind at ease "Love, you don't need to answer now if you're not ready, it's ok."

She looked at me sadly and hesitantly said "Ian I… well I… I don't know." She took a deep breath and looked at me for some sort of response but all I could give her was a slight nod, unfortunately she continued to tear me apart when she said "I like you Ian more then you will ever know, but I feel like if we rush into this it's going to end up like all the other relationships you've had; I'm left with a broken heart and you go off to the next available girl."

I put my hand on my chest feeling like I've just been stabbed in the heart, that one hurt and it hurt like hell. I know she didn't mean to upset me from the way her eyes shot to the ground by my reaction, but in the back of my mind I know that she's right; I have left girls broken hearted for no reason, every time I dated someone it lasted no longer then a couple months and then I'd move on to the next not even thinking about the pain I caused.

Melissa looked at me apologetically and I shook my head finally responding "No its fine, I know I hurt those girls and I am just now realizing how wrong I was and I am really sorry for the way I treated them." She smiled at my answer but I didn't let her say anything because I had to get the rest out "But you should know Melissa that you are not like the other girls, you mean so much more to me than everyone else combined and it's ok that you don't want to jump into this I understand why you want to take it slow and that's no big deal as long as we are together I don't really care."

She smiled once again and turned her body towards me wrapping her arms around my neck, I quickly draped my hands around her tight figure and I felt something new; it was feeling that was so perfect, so true, so right like this is where I am supposed to be, with Melissa right there in my arms.

As we pulled away our eyes locked for the first time since we came up to this hill-top. Her beautiful eyes showing some fear and uncertainty but also a sort of love and innocence, as were mine most likely.

She twisted back to her original spot breaking our intimate stare, I did the same but scooted closer to her in the process, she looked at me letting out a sweet little giggle. I then turned my attention to her lonely hand considering whether or not to take it, I'm guessing she noticed because she moved it towards mine intertwining them together.

Eddie POV

Every time I am out this girl is right there waiting for me it's like she's intentionally following me, nope scratch that she is. I feel like I can't go anywhere without this nagging brat by my side. I mean yes I dated her once like 2 years ago; worst decision of my life, and now for some reason she can't get over me and move on, she's attractive I don't get why she has to beg for someone like me to go out with her. She has nice blonde hair, and ocean blue eyes, with a good framed figure, it's not like I'm the only guy who saw her as good looking,

So why is she always after me?

Seriously last week she was parked in front of my house and when I pulled up she drove away, like who does that?

And now she just had to break up the intense moment Loren and I were having, really? C'mon girl, stop ruining my life and go get your own!

As I got up I didn't even realize that Loren was still on top of me till she fell to the floor, when she shrieked in pain I immediately stuck my hand out for her and helped her up giving her the most sorry face I could, she smiled letting me know she was fine so I turned my attention back to the unwelcomed female standing next to me. "What the hell do you want?" I said with complete annoyance, she looked at me and back at Loren searching for some sort of remorse but I know she found none.

So again I said "What do you want Chloe?"

Lorens POV

I watched as the very aggravated Eddie tried to get an explanation out of Chloe as to why she interrupted our kiss, when she didn't answer him I saw anger fill his eyes he said it again this time with more force. She finally answered in an overly bratty and whinny voice "I was coming to get coffee and found you two blocking the door as you practically sucked each other's faces off." Amused at her comment I laughed and in return she shot daggers back "What are you laughing at you boyfriend stealer?"

I couldn't help but laugh again Eddie joining me this time I simply questioned her "boyfriend stealer?" she retorted with "Yeah boyfriend stealer one day he's with me and the next with a slut like you." This time I did not let out a single sign of amusement, I am not the slut around here she is and if she thinks she can talk to me and about me like that she has another thing coming, I instantly responded saying

"Oh right I'm the slut? Let's get a couple things straight here, first Eddie has and never will be yours you know why? Because he likes me not you so get over it and when did stalking a guy mean he was your boyfriend? Honestly I don't think it does. Secondly if you ever call me something like that again I will rip those twigs for so called arms off your body. And last but certainly not least we aren't in front of the door you could've easily walked in so try some dumb excuse somewhere else because I'm not buying it, obviously all you wanted to do was break up the incredibly hot and intense make-out session my boyfriend and I were very much enjoying and I'd really like to get back to that so will you please just scoot your sorry ass back to wherever you came from and stop following Eddie around? Thanks a ton, k bye." Both Eddie and Chloe looked at me with shock, she quickly ran in the door not trying to compete with that.

When Eddie didn't stop staring at me for a while I started to get really irritated and practically yelled in his ear "Are you done staring at me like that yet or what?" he shook his head a few times coming back to reality and then turned his eyes back at me. I looked up hoping this time he will tell me what's up but again nothing came out.

Thinking he was mad I regretfully said "I'm sorry Eddie I know I probably overstepped my boundaries on that one calling you my boyfriend and saying you liked me and not her but I just-" he stopped my rambling by pushing me against the café wall and giving me a very passionate kiss.

We pulled away breathlessly and I finally opened my eyes seeing his lips not in a straight unmoved line anymore but a smile from ear to ear. I questioned him saying "So you're not mad?" he answered with a simple shake of his head and a peck on the lips, surprised I questioned him again "Then why did you stare at me like that?" His smile never leaving as he replied with "Because that was the absolute hottest thing I've ever seen you do."

What will Lorens response be? Will Ian ask Melissa out again or just let it go? You tell me!

Aw ok I really like this chapter lol I hope you guys do to! Let me know what you thought, I appreciate all feedback you have. And also let me know if you liked the new way I am writing or if you'd rather me write the other way. Until next time my pretties

XOXO

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