I'm really sorry I have to do this but I just don't have time to write anymore; I'm doing a full time course at university and have two part time jobs so I rarely have any spare time and that spare time is usually doing assignments. I don't want this story to stop though so if anyone wants to keep writing it for me or just use the idea send me a email and it is yours (I think that is how it works), I also have some ideas of where the story was going so you wouldn't get stuck for idea =) Sorry again for giving up.