Me: im sick of no one reviewing I mean the story is said to be good someone tell me what's wrong with it and I can change it I know you people are reading so review and I'll be happy
May: you're wired
Drew: you just notes
May: no but she's a nice wired well to girls to boy's there dead
Me: I don't like the way they think they're better than us
Dawn: good point
Me: it is
Paul: India and Lydia rocks don't own pokemon and will not change the screen name treatybirdcage
Me: thanks READ ON!
May's vampire story
"DREW!" Everyone shouted
"Drew don't you dare hurt May" Dawn said
"Yer or we will hurt you" Misty said
"Guy-"I tried to say but got cut off (me: I like cutting people off ok)
"Drew you don't need to hurt May you can just walk away now and It will all be ok" Ash said
"Guys-"I was about to say but got cut off again
"Do what you want I don't care" Paul said
"Hey that's mean!" Dawn shouted hitting Paul on the back of his head and that started off a grope grumble
"Guys… guys… GUYS!" I shouted they all stopped "Thank you Drew is not here to hurt me he came to apologise for what he did and he's ok for now" I said
"Oh" everyone said
"Well it's good to see my brother still alive" Amy said running to hug her brother
"It's good to see you to" Drew said with a smirk messing up her hair
"Anyway what should we do this Saturday" Dawn asked
"Well us girls can go perfect are song for Sunday" I said
"YER!" Misty Dawn and Amy said
"You guys want to come" I asked the boy's
"We have football training but we might come later" Ash said
"Even you Max" I asked my little brother
"Well the guys helped me get a spot of mid field in the year 7s A team" Max said
"That's great you always did love football" I said messing up my own brother's hair
"What is it with the messing with are hair" Max and Amy said
"Cause your younger then us so we can" Me and Drew said (me: that's what happens to me being the youngest sucks)
"Come on May we better get going you have the key" Dawn asked
"Yep" I said getting the key "let's go"
"K bye guys" Misty said
"Bye" all the boy's said as we all went out the room
At church dawn's POV
"May can this place get any darker" I said
"Well think about it vampires are the only things that come in her so it's going to be dark" May said
"Hey im not a thing" Amy said
"You know what I mean" May said
"But we have to do something about this" Misty said
"Yer we can get some new white covers for the seats and cushions and oh get some nice bright colours in here" I said
"That's what I want to do and I already thought of it" May said as she did someone knocked on the doors
"Hello I have some delivers for May maple" The man said
"Yep that's me can you bring them in" May said the man nodded and some people brought in the stuff
"Thanks here you go and keep the change" May said handing the man the money
"Have a good time" The man said walking out
"Right we have a lot of work to do in a day" I said
"Yer" Amy moaned
"Come on it will be worth it" I said
"Yer let's get this place a place you want to be in" May said as she got some of the white sheets and some paints "Im doing chairs" May said
"Dibbs on painting walls" I said getting the red, yellow and green paint buckets
"I'll do dusting and hoovering then" Misty said
"And I'll make drapes and do up the alter" Amy said
"LET'S DO IT" I shouted
"YER" All the girls shouted getting to work
With the boy's Drew's POV
"GIVE ME A 'D' GIVE ME AN 'R' GIVE ME AN 'E' GIVE ME A 'W' WHAT'S THAT SPELL DREW! GO DREW
"God im only doing do drills" I said
"I bet you would like it if May was one of them cheer leaders" Ash said running passed me
"And I bet you would like it if Misty was cheering you r name Ketchum" I said passing the ball to him
"Shut it Hayden" Ash said passing me the ball back
"Hey Ash look at Max go" I said looking over at the year 7s
"Wow he's really good" Ash said
"HEY ASH HEY DREW" Max shouted but as he did a big year 9 was about to trip him up
"MAX! WATCH OUT" Me and Ash shouted
Max didn't hear us but somehow knew he was there anyway and dogged ball still at his feet
"He's good" Paul said coming out of nowhere
"Yer the cheer leaders should make a cheer for him" I said
"TRAINNIG OVER" The sports teacher shouted
"Let's get out of here and help the girls out" Max said as he ran up to us
"Yer we should" ash said walking on his way to the church
At the church again Drew's POV
"Hey guys were here to help" I shouted
"Omg the great Drew wants to help the one that has his own cheer by the cheer leaders" May said stopping from her work
"Amy told you didn't she" I said
"Oh she told me a lot of stuff" May said now I was kind of scared
"Like what" I said trying to keep my cool
"Like you only stopped wetting the bed when you were 10" May said shit I knew Amy would tell her that for once in my life I couldn't keep my cool I was so embarrass I even let out a blush
"Aww Drew's embarrassed" Dawn said
"Can we just get on with the work" I said with my head down
"Ok can you go put the sheets with painting on the chairs they should be dry now" May said I did as told
"Hum Ash can you help Misty with the dusting please and Paul you can help Dawn with the painting on the walls not to morbid ok just listen to Dawn and Max Amy could use some help with Dra-" May was about to finish her sentence but a falling yellow sheet stopped her "aps"
"HAHAHA" We all laughed
"Just get on with the work" May said going back to her own work
We were done by 6:00 pm we looked on in awe at what we had done I mean the place was black went we started and now it was white, yellow, red and green the chairs had a white sheet over them with a small flower painting on it and each chair had a nice cushion on it the place was lighter thanks to Misty and Ash the alter was all nice and done up and the room had pillars in it and Amy and Max had painted them and the paintings on the walls where just as better with Dawn and Pauls help
"Wow" I was speechless
"Yer" May said
"Well now all that's left is for us girls to play one song" Dawn said
"Yep" May jumped with joy "let's do it"
The girls got there interments and dawn started to strum a soft tune
"When you hear the word church what do you think of first hard words and weird song there some suggestions?
But church isn't just boring chore it make you makes you think a little more on what you really want
Misty started a beat
Because-because are voice are lifted
Because-because we feel heard
Because-because we can be free we can be free
Amy starts thekeyboard
Church brings us all together as one we all pray together and we will all help each other
Back in home town home town we had a church for everyone- everyone you were welcome open arms cause we are all hear for forgiveness and anyone can repent their sins if they want to
Were all here all together were all searching for the same thing were all searching for heaven and too right we should" May sang amazing again
"Bravo amazing" Max said
"You play that and people will for sure come" Ash said
"Hump its ok" Paul said
"More than ok it was worthy of me to hear it" I said flicking my hair
"Whatever Drew" May said
Me: is it ok
May: it's fine
Me: good anyway review because it makes me happy
Drew: Bye