AUTHOR'S NOTE
Hello my dear readers! I hope you guys are enjoying the story.
Well as I was reading my reviews over and over again, I saw that there was a few confusing things about well everything and I just want to clear it all up.
#1) My Grammar
I am very sorry for those of you who are getting distracted because of my grammar and poor usage of words. I will try my very best to get better at it and I have a BETA reader. And she's going to help me further more with everything. So give me time as I learn from my mistakes.
#2) My character
Here are some facts about my OC Valerie.
Her name is really Vera but her Earth/cover name for right now is Valerie. You will see why her Earth name is Valerie later on in the story.
Her powers are flight, super strength, and she controls the element of fire. When I had her shooting 'lasers' out of her eyes, they actually were fire blasts since she controls the element of fire. And about the strength thing, where she comes from everyone has abnormal strength.
With her killing the bad guys, she is only doing it for justice not to avenge the lady that she wasn't able to save,
Personality wise she is very arrogant, cocky, hard-headed, she doesn't like to listen, doesn't know when to quit while she's ahead but, all in all she can be nice, kind, gentle, can listen, never quits/never backs down from a fight
BUT SHE IS ONLY LIKE THIS WHEN SHE WANTS TO BE. SHE IS A VERY COMPLICATED PERSON AND DOENST LIKE TO BE TOLD THAT HERSELF.
About her beating Superman and the other heroes, the only way of how to get Valerie to stand down is everyone has to attack her at once. Instead, Superman and the others attacked her one at a time. That's why she was able to defeat them.
She IS NOT I repeat NOT a Mary-sue although I'm pretty sure no one called her that, yet. But still just want to clear that up. She does have weaknesses which will appear in later chapters but I can reveal a few. Her #1 weakness is a person that she cares about deeply. #2 is her arrogance. #3 she is easily angered. #4 she never listens to anyone. There are few more but for right now this is enough.
#4) My improper English
I apologize again for my "bad" language. I just actually was sooo excited about getting my story out to the point that I wasn't paying very good attention to my grammar. BUT not to worry I will and shall get better at it.
Well I hope that I have cleared up your confusions and if not then just review again or pm me and I will clear up all your confusions. Very soon I will have the 7th and 8th chapters out soon just give me time to write them, read over them, and send them to my BETA reader. Also I do agree that my first chapters would have been better if my grammar wasn't off, again I apologize and hope that this story didn't leave a bad taster in your mouth.