Here it is!

But I think it's sucks...

but hopefully it's somewhat good.

anyway, enjoy!


It was a bit of a cloudy day and yet so full of excitement in an outdoor mall where a miniatures convention was taking place.

"well, we're finally here!" Peach exclaimed happily. Zelda agreed"wow Peach, you were right when you said it would be this wonderful looking!"

Samus simply shrugged"I guess it's kinda nice, not what I thought it would be but at least it wasn't..."

Peach was in complete bliss at the moment but wasn't able to notice Samus wondering off.

Samus was just wondering around looking at all the dolls and doll houses being shown off and sold. Peach had told her to grabbed some money saying that she might need it in case she found something she really liked, and looking at the prices of all those little trinkets made the money she had with her seem like petty cash.

'geez... look at all these things... they look pretty I guess, but it's too girly for my taste...' She thought to herself. Out of nowhere her head started to ache. The sound of bells rang in her head. She couldn't bear it, she leaned towards the wall and stood still for a second. The bells Finally stopped ringing.

"what was that all about?" She asked herself. She started to walk again but soon bumped into someone. It was an woman in a gray dress.

"oh I'm sorry I-" Samus barely finished her sentence before the woman pulled her by the wrist and lead her though the crowd.

Samus was confused but followed without any arguments, but as soon as the woman let go, Samus still followed, she felt like following the stranger but didn't now why, she just felt that she had to, but it in the huge crowd she lost track of the woman but still she walked as if looking for something, like she was searching for something.

then she stopped, she found what she was looking for.


Zibby was setting up her table to display the doll house with the help of her friend Penny.

"You now Penny, you didn't have to come with me..." Zibby said.

"I know but I felt like it, I've had my share of scares with this thing and I'm more than glad to see it go!"

Zibby smiled."heh... well then if you don't mind I'm gonna go find my mom, do you mind finishing up for me?"

"of course not, but first you have to think of a price!"

Zibby thought for a while."285 dollars and 25 cents"

Penny was a little surprised "really? why so specific?"

Zibby just shrugged "I'm not sure myself but I guess it's cheap since others could cost thousands of dollars so I guess it's pretty fair" then she remember "Well I gotta go find my mom, see you in a few" and she left quickly.


Penny had finished setting the display up. As she was putting on the finishing touches she thought she saw something streak across the window in the doll house,'what in the world was that?' but she didn't want to make it seem like something so she shrugged it off.

as she was writing the price on a piece of paper there was suddenly a huge shadow above her. She looked up at who was causing the shadow.

It was a woman, a woman with long blond hair. She was staring at the doll house with mesmerized eyes, as if it were only her and the house. Penny attempted to speak but the woman's hand reached at her direction, not for her but for the price she finished writing down.

The woman looked at it "Is this the price?"she asked Penny.

Penny just nodded.

The woman searched her pockets. Penny saw the troubled look on her face,'why does she look so worried? aren't people who go to these things rich?' she thought to herself.

The woman's expression changed from a troubled one to a surprised one as she set the money on the table. Penny counted the money, and the woman had it in exact.

Penny looked up at the woman"alright then miss... it's yours!"

She watched as the woman's eyes lit up.

"uh... Penny?" Zibby walked to Penny while her eyes stayed on the woman.

"Zibby! I sold the doll house!"

Zibby looked at Penny with some surprise"really?"

"yup!"

"well... cool!"

"um... could I get some help?" the woman asked them both.

"o-oh, um, yes ma'am, I'll call a dolly up right away" Penny left to get a dolly for the woman.

Zibby looked at the woman." so um... you really like the doll house"

The woman kept her eyes on the doll house "yeah... it's really pretty..." she replied dreamily.

Zibby looked at the woman for a moment and noticed the her eyes. She suddenly felt like she's seen it before.

"um miss--"

"I'm back!" Zibby was interrupted by Penny coming with a dolly.

"Zibby could you help me here?" Penny asked as she put her hands to each side of the doll house.

Zibby went to the other side and helped place the doll house onto the dolly.

"here you go ma'am" Zibby told the woman.

"thank you" the woman said in a happy tone.

As Zibby and Penny looked at the woman walking away with the doll house Zibby began feeling a little light-headed. she began to hear bells. Her eyes widened in horror. Penny saw her expression. "Zibby whats wrong?"

Zibby place her hand on Penny's shoulder, and Penny began to hear it, the awful bell they thought they'd never hear again.

"oh no..."


here it is the next chapter!

I still think it sucks though...

I promise the next one is going to be more interesting!

please review

~Mell