yaayyy!! Ive finally updated again! :D Happy Valentines day-i dedicate this chapter to all those dateless people out there on Fanfiction-that includes me! :) well I hope you enjoy the new chapter and the LAST EVER EVER EVER chapter of Who done it might be up today or tomorrow-depending on how quick I type! don't forget to review!
Brown walked back to camp with an officer to accompany, very few words were said between the two of them as they walked. When they were almost back in the camp grounds, a thought struck Brown:
"Where did you find Shane?" he asked the officer, the officer gave a sad look and said,
"He was a couple of yards away from the body…he said he had been trying to find Nate himself, he was the one to show us the body…"
Brown nodded sadly, thinking of how that must of effected Shane seeing his best friend dead…
"Oh I forgot to ask do you know who this belongs to?" The officer lifted up a small evidence bag that contained a small gold necklace, which had a little pendant that was the letter "P"
"I can only think of one person right now…I'll take you to them now…"
So Brown and the officer continued their way back to Camp.
Meanwhile the news about Nate's death had travelled around the Camp, when Caitlyn finally heard the news she let a distraught scream.
"He told me everything was gonna' be ok! He said it would be Ok as long as we were together! Why did he have to go WHY?!?!" and she fell to her knees, sobbing over a weeks worth of tears. Meghan just stood there, still in shock from finding the news out from Shane, who thought it best that Caitlyn was told by him. "Shane…I'm so sorry…I mean you've lost so much in such a short amount of time…I'm so sorry!" and she burst into tears, Shane brought her into an awkward hug…after all they hardly knew each other. Suddenly there was a pain filled scream coming from outside the cabin. Meghan broke away from the hug and ran outside to see what was going on, Shane followed her. What they found was Ella on her hands and knees throwing up…blood, Peggy was kneeling down beside her, her face a ghostly white colour.
Just then Brown came running towards the group of teens from hearing Ella's scream, he quickly knelt beside Ella and said to Peggy:
"How long has she been throwing up blood for?" he said, in a calm voice obviously to try and keep everyone else calm.
Peggy was jittery and stuttered out:
"Well…she stared throwing up like 20 minutes ago, but she started to throw up blood about five minutes ago! I don't know what's wrong with her!"
By this point Ella was shaking madly and blood was gushing out through her mouth, her arms couldn't support her any longer and they gave way, letting her head and chest hit the floor, she gurgled out through the blood:
"Oh my God, it hurts…its hurts!" and she coughed even harder, making more blood gush out onto the ground.
"I know Ella…but just stay with us ok? You're going to be fine!"
She nodded but then she gasped in pain and her eyes rolled back into her head and she was motionless.
"Ella…Ella…come on stay with us!" Brown insisted, but he knew it was a lost because…she was dead.
The group was silent as Brown shakily checked for a pulse…but there was none, he shook his head sadly and said
"I'm sorry…she didn't make it…" tears started to fall from everyone's eyes.
The officer came up to the group and said "Are any of you called Peggy?"
Peggy shakily stood up and nodded. Then the police officer turned Peggy around and put handcuffs on her wrists and said "Margret Dupree, I'm arresting you with the murders of Mitchie Torres, Tess Tyler, Jason Redhouse (A/N: I made up Jason and Nate's last names) and Nate Meyer…" he carried on reading out her rights while she shook her head in disbelief and shock. Just as she was getting walked away to the police cruiser that the Officer had driven in, a loud bang filled the camp and Peggy gave a gasp in pain as she fell to the floor, the officer knelt down next to her and saw that she had been shot and was now dead (A/N: another death in the space of only a few minutes…wow that's a record of my evilness! :D) He looked up to see where the shot had come from and to his shock he saw the person holding the gun was…
Well wouldn't it just be so evil of me to finish the chapter on a massive cliff-hanger like that :D
Just when you're about to find out who the killer is :D Well as you all probably know by now I'm a very evil Author…I mean killing off Mitchie…and then Tess and then…Ok why are you still reading this?! Scroll down a little to read the rest of the story!! :D
The person holding the gun was Shane, the rest of the campers turned to see him and gasps of shock ran through the crowd. The officer slowly stood up with his hands raised to show Shane that he wasn't armed and said in a slow calm voice:
"Shane, just put the gun down…down on the floor away from you…" and he took a slow step towards Shane, but Shane aimed the gun at the officer and said in a slightly panicked voice:
"Don't come anywhere near me! If anyone moves I'll shoot!"
Meghan who was closest to Shane said in a calming voice:
"Shane…please put the gun down…do it for Mitchie…" and she made the mistake of taking a step towards him, next thing she knew she was lying on the floor and a scorching pain was filling her mind, she had been shot in the stomach, but she was still alive.
Shane looked in horror at what he had done, he had just shot one of Nate's best friends..."I'm a monster!" he thought to himself in horror, and with that he dropped the gun from his now numb hands and he ran towards the forest.
He ran and ran and ran, wanting to get away from the memories that invaded his mind:
Mitchie had just got into her cabin and Shane slowly followed her. Through the window he saw her with her guitar on her lap, she was strumming it and singing some words quietly. Shane heard some of the words and at first he thought they were about him but then he remembered something that he had seen the day before it was Nate and Mitchie…together…alone, they were laughing and then Mitchie…hugged Nate before she left…the song was for…Nate? A sudden surge of hatred flowed through Shane's veins at the thought of Mitchie cheating on him and he got out of his pocket the black fabric mask they had been using in one of the drama workshops that day, and put it over his head. He took a deep breath and slammed through the door, he saw Mitchie's guitar drop to the floor and she stuttered out "What do you want?" but Shane's adrenaline and anger levels were high and he picked up her guitar and brought it down over her head, her scream filled the room as she fell to the floor, but Shane was to focused on getting his revenge that he didn't stop and think about what he was about to do as he brought down a Kitchen knife down into Mitchie's chest. She had screamed a pain filled scream, which brought Shane to his senses and he looked down in horror at what he had done to his girlfriend, who was now motionless starring into space.
When he had heard Tess Tyler call Mitchie a bitch the familiar hatred ran through his veins and he quietly followed Tess who was walking towards the forest. "Perfect" he thought to himself, he quickly made a detour to Tess' cabin and picked up a hot pink stiletto shoe that belonged to Peggy and ran back to where Tess was. She was now leaning up against a tree deep in thought, she looked up at Shane and snickered
"Why have you got that shoe?" she asked, raising a perfectly plucked eyebrow at him. He simply grabbed her by the shoulder and pulled her up to her feet.
"What do you think you-" but she didn't finish because Shane rammed the heel of the shoe right into her chest, she gave a scream in pain, and shakily looked down at her chest, and then looked back up at Shane giving him a dazed and confused look, before falling back to the floor…
Shane was walking, trying to clear his head after the funeral, when he came across Meghan and Nate sat together on the edge of the dock. He saw Nate hug Meghan and then they both stood up and walked towards Meghan's cabin. "That little rat! First Mitchie and now Meghan! I'm going to make him pay!" Shane thought to himself as he got out his fabric mask and waited for Nate to walk past him and grabbed him from behind. Unfortunately Nate bit down hard on his hand and Shane was forced to let go, but as Nate started to run away Shane pounced on him sending them both to the ground, he grabbed a nearby rock and whacked Nate over the head with it. While Nate was disorientated from the blow of the rock, he started to drag him over to the lake. When they finally got to the dock, Shane grabbed a fistful of Nate's hair and plunged his head into the water. Nate put up a fight but it didn't last long and soon he went limp Shane's arms, Shane thinking he was dead left him…
The next day Shane was sat on his bed looking at a picture of him and Mitchie, he now regretted what he had done to her and all he wanted to do was bring her back…he would do anything to bring her back! He vaguely heard Jason talking to him…something about moving on…How could he move on when the voice he had heard in his head for the whole of summer the previous year was now dead? At that moment he wanted Jason to know what it was like to loose someone that you love…or even better…if he would just shut up…permanently. Shane knew that there must be something wrong with him if he wanted one of his best friends dead, but at the time that's all he wanted…So a few minutes after Jason had left the cabin, Shane left too and took a shortcut to the workshop that Jason was headed to, he placed a gun inside the bird house and set a timer on the trigger so it would go of when Jason was there, he then scribbled a note on a scrap piece of paper and then ran the long way back to his cabin to tell Nate about the note. When he and Nate got back to the workshop, they saw Jason examining the bird house, he must of spotted the gun because he looked closer to the hole and then "BANG!" the gun went off into Jason's head. Shane saw Jason fall to the floor with a patch of blood on his forehead, Nate had run over to Jason and held him in his arms sobbing loudly saying for him to come back, that was when the reality hit Shane: He had just killed one of his best friends…
When Nate had run away Shane had gone looking for Nate, he found him sitting in the middle of the forest crying. Shane then remembered why he had tried to kill Nate in the first place and ran over to him and grabbed him. Nate was caught off guard and he didn't struggle when Shane grabbed his leg and snapped it by holding it up at an angle and then stomping his foot down on Nate's knee. Nate screamed in agony and looked up to see it was Shane, but Shane wasn't done there; he was going to vent all his anger and emotions on Nate, and so he broke all of Nate's bones, Nate was slowly loosing consciousness when Shane turned him over onto his front and then jumped up and down on his back until a loud, sickening "Snap" came from it. Shane then picked Nate up, who was limp now, not being able to move anything, he then grabbed a rope and tied one end tightly around Nate's ankle and then hoisted him up and tied the other end to the thick branch of a tree. Nate looked at Shane through half closed eyes and whispered "Why?" Shane simply walked away leaving his best friend to die alone…
Shane had reached the edge of the forest where there was a small cliff that went down into the lake. After reliving all those memories Shane was disgusted with himself. He stepped closer to the edge and closed his eyes, he was going to kill himself, he didn't want to live anymore, not after all he had done. So Shane leaned forward slightly and was took off balance meaning that he started to fall…with his eyes closed all he could hear was the "whoosh" of the air as he fell, all he could see was the darkness of his eyelids. But then the weirdest thing happened, he suddenly couldn't hear the wind in his ears, but it still felt like he was falling down, then he heard the voice he never thought he would hear again: Mitchie.
"Shane! Oh my God Shane! PLEASE! SOMEONE HELP HIM! SHANE DON'T GO PLEASE! I NEED YOU!"
gasp! who guessed that Shane would be the killer??-I sure didn't :D
