Sorry for leaving you guys like that.....
Here's chapter 9.............
This chapter has a lot of detail in and this is the first time I have wrote anything like this so tell me if it's any good.................
It's dark, too dark.....Chris thinks as he appears in a dark cave
"Lumos," Chris whispers and he watches as the darkened cave has some light so that he can see. Chris scans the cave he sees scorch marks on the walls and looks up and down at the trailing vines of dead leaves.
"Max," he whispers, feeling his presence, Chris looks around this time searching more eagerly. He begins to walk further into the cave and as Chris looks up he sees Max chained tightly to the wall.
"Max," he shouts, rushing to the wall and takes a deep breath flicking his wrists making the come undo and a battered and bruised Max falls to the ground.
"Max?" he asks, Chris looks over his torn clothing and kneels down next to Max so he can give him a little shake, but Max doesn't move, but Chris' grimace fades slightly as Max' eyes flutter a little.
"Well, look at this hiss knight in shining armour rescuing him," a voice crackles from behind Chris' back. Chris turns to see Mr Lopez with a fireball in his hand.
He's a demon!......Chris thinks
Chris orbs them back to the Manor as the fireball speeds at them.
"Heal him!" Chris orders as soon as Max and his forms appear on the attic floor.
"What happened?" Piper asks worriedly, as Paige rushes to Max, Chris watches her never letting go of Max, Paige holds her hand over Max waiting for the familiar glow to appear, but it never does.
It's not working...Paige thinks worriedly
"No, Please make it work, Auntie Paige," Chris rambles with tears in his eyes, Chris grips Max' arm more tightly praying that it works.
"Chris he's..." Paige trails off gently.
"NO!" Chris shouts, pulling at Max's arm again.
It can't be true auntie Paige, he can't, I mean, It's Max, I....Chris thinks with tears streaming down his face, the rest of his family watch on frozen with sadness.
"Chris?" Paige asks bringing his eyes up to meet hers, Paige gestures to his hands that are now both gripping at Max' arms, as they have began to glow.
"I'm healing," Chris whispers as the glow comes to an end and Max' eyes flutter, Max opens his eyes.
"You're okay," Chris gushes and pulls Max into a tight hug.
I'm fine, you?....Max thinks
Don't ever do that to me again......Chris thinks back, as he hugs him even tighter. The three elder witches stand with smiles on their faces and Phoebe with tears streaming down her cheeks, she wipes them away as she is standing close to Piper and doesn't want her to see how the couple is affecting her.
"Oh look what did I split the love birds up," a voice sneers, the group turn to see Lee in the corner of the room; fireball in hand. Chris and Max look with a guilty expression towards each other as they spring apart, however Piper quickly extends her exploding him.
"You were dating a demon?" Piper asks; Max looks down.
"It's okay, we've all done it," She jokes, making him smile, max looks over at Chris and smirks, who smiles back, chuckling inside his head.
"So that's it?" Max asks, now fully recovered from having his demon boyfriend blew up.
"Ye, Thank God," Chris says with a sigh.
I can get back to my date...he thinks
"What's that?" Max whispers pointing behind Chris as a vortex has formed on the wall. Max begins to walk in a dreamlike state towards it.
"Max?" Chris asks and tries in vain to grab Max's arm and get him to stop.
"Max!" They all shout, as Piper tries to freeze him, as Phoebe and Paige try to grab him, but he continues to walk towards the vortex, however in the commotion of getting Max to stop, the Charmed Ones didn't notice Chris turning to the vortex in his own dreamlike state and follows Max. The Charmed Ones try again to stop Chris following, but again they cannot and Chris and Max disappear into the vortex.
"What are we gonna do now?" Piper asks towards her sisters.
"Where the hell are we?" Max asks scratching his head as he and Chris stand in the middle of a field.
"How the hell do I know, I followed you," Chris snaps back. Chris looks around seeing the vase amount of open space, all that grass, he sees a forest to his left and right surround it, the sun is beaming down on to them scorching them.
"Come, at least let's get outta the sun," Chris says shielding his eyes and dragging Max to the nearest tree.
"Okay so I figure we're in the past, maybe early 17th century, but until we found out why we were brought here I have no idea what to do," Chris explains, leaning his back against a tree as Max does the same with the one opposite.
"The past, Okay that's not freaky," Max mutters.
"You're a witch, anything is possible now," Chris enthuses quoting Phoebe with a laugh.
"This happens to everyone at some point," Chris explains as he sees Max going pale.
Don't worry we'll be okay...Chris thinks, rubbing his shoulder as he now stands in front of Max, as he crouches.
How do you know that...Max thinks, he stands up straight pushing Chris off him, as he begins to walk further into the forest.
"Max?" Chris asks surprised, he runs in front of Max and sees him in a dreamlike state again, Max continues to walk and Chris doesn't have any option but to follow. Chris follows closely through the winding trees as the ground goes thicker with mud; covering his converse, Chris shivers as his thin Jacket is not keeping him warm, Chris watches as Max comes to a stop and looks around wildly.
"Chris?" Max asks.
"Chris!" Max shouts more loudly, Chris runs out from his hiding place.
"What the hell happened?" Chris asks. Max still looks a bit dazed; Chris steadies him by holding on to his wrist.
"Your just went into a trance and walked here, I followed in case anything happened," Chris explains, waving his arms around to show Max that they have now moved from their original positions. Max looks around seeing the denser forest area and looks over at Chris, who just shrugs.
"Well, finally," A calm voice breaks the silence. Chris whips around and stands in front of Max, although he can still see over his head; a tall young man about eighteen with sandy coloured hair and blue eyes like Max'.
"Who are you?" Chris whispers threateningly, taking a step forward, however Max grips his arm; pulling him back.
"It's okay, Chris we knew you were coming, we just didn't know when, I've been waiting here for hours," The young man says.
"Come on," He says calling them over and as he treads away, his boots leaving heavy footprints in the mud. Chris and Max stare at each, before following.
You sure...Max asks from behind, Chris turns giving him a reassuring smile as they follow.
Max and Chris look in awe as they enter a cave filled with three of people, a big cauldron, alter and another cave leading off that Chris notices that looks like a bedroom.
"Okay, so now we're here, what have we gotta do?" Chris asks still a bit cautious of the new people. Chris watches as the other people look at him and Max in awe.
Why are they...Max thinks, Chris shrugs a respond confused, he watches the young man from before talk in hushed whispers with one of the girls before they hurry off.
"We don't have a lot of time, my name is James, this is Hannah, Ruby and Michael, you guys need to get changed quickly then we will explain," James explains as the blonde; Hannah returns with folded clothes, she blushes as she hands Chris' his and hurries off.
She so wanted you...Max teases
Glad I'm gay...Chris thinks back, as he raises an eyebrow at his new attire, boots, trousers, a loose white shirt and a loose waist coat. Chris laughs at Max as he sees his outfit, but then realises that he looks exactly the same, so Chris pouts.
Don't worry kid, it looks cute...Max thinks as he gives Chris a little push towards the now awaiting crowd. Chris grumble slightly as they make their way make to the group.
"So what's up?" Chris asks, he watches as a look of confusion crosses each other their faces.
"What the ass means is what are we doing here?" Max says rolling his eyes at the slightly shorter boy.
What was that for...Chris thinks
For being stupid, you're the one that said we were in the 17th century so talk like it...Max thinks back
Oh right sorry...Chris apologies
"Oh, well Dylan saw you coming and we were told you can rescue him," James replies simply.
"So, where's Dylan?" Chris asks, looking at James, Hannah grips Michael's hand tighter at the question.
"He got captured by the evil Lord Harrison, who is a demon, he wants to take away Dylan's power and have it himself..." James continues but gets cut off by Max saying,
"Wait, you're witches!"
"Yes, But Dylan is the only one with an active power, he can see the future and teleport himself for a short period of time that's how we knew you two were coming, the trance was a spell that Dylan taught us, it helped you to find your correct path," James continues,
"But why us, I mean we aren't overly powerful, Max doesn't have that much control over his power yet and I only use my Cryokinesis when I can," Chris explains.
"All has been explain to us, but you two are destined to be great beings of Good and to do great things with all of you powers, we may not have any active powers, but we taught Dylan how to use his and that's what we are going to do with the two of you, we are going to teach you how to use every ounce of magic you have and then you will be able to do..." James gats cut off by Michael jabbing him in the side.
"Right sorry get a bit carried away, let's start with you two need to take these," he instructs as his hands them a potion bottle each filled with a deep red liquid.
"What's this?" Chris asks with a raised eyebrow as him and Max inspect the bottle.
"It's to release your dormant powers," Michael explains, still glaring at James.
"But Piper always says that you powers will grow s you grow and learn about magic and the craft," Chris says, Max raises an eyebrow at him at saying his mother's name, but Max releases he does that sometimes so just nods his head agreeing with Chris.
"This is and will always be the way that your powers activate Christopher, all of your powers, now we don't have a lot of time so take the potion," James says snapping at the end getting annoyed at the boy.
I don't think we should drink it...Max thinks worriedly
I don't think we have much choice...Chris thinks, he takes one long look at the bottle as quickly opens it up and downs it.
Whatever you say whitelighter, if you don't die I'll drink....Max thinks as he watches Chris swallow the potion, Max sees bright greens sparks around Chris.
"Well I'm not dead," Chris says turn to max, he smiles at him.
It tastes like shit, but I'm not dead and I don't feel funny....Chris thinks willing Max to drink it.
Always cautious aren't we.....Chris thinks again
I thought that was you....Max thinks back, as he slowly brings the bottle to his lips and downs in like Chris.
"So what did that do, I don't feel any different shouldn't power boost make you feel different?" Chris asks the three standing near the alter. Chris suddenly takes a step back, holding his head.
"No! What did you do?" he asks the three.
"This is what is supposed happen," Chris hears a voice say.
"Why is it hurting him?" Max asks as he places a hand on Chris to steady him.
"Chris, can you hear me?" Max asks worriedly watches as the teenager leans against him.
"NO! Snap out of this! Chris you're stronger that this, fight it, Come on Chris, talk to me," Max says, Max lies Chris down as he can't take his weight, he looks over at the three Hannah looks worried, but the boys look more amused than anything else.
"Don't just stand there, help me," Max shouts at them, Hannah goes to move, but Michael pulls her back.
"Only you can save him," James says. Max turns back to Chris who is lying still on the ground in front of him; Max kneels down beside him and places his hands on either shoulder,
"Chris," Max whispers, gently shaking him.
Come on kid you gotta be okay, I don't think I could stay here on my own with those crazy people....Max Thinks, he looks down at Chris for a respond, but there is none, Max sighs feeling so lost.
How do I do this, how do I save you...Max thinks
Connect...Max hears a voice think, He looks around and sees Hannah sheepishly looking at him and then adverts his glance elsewhere. Max slowly places his hands on Chris' temples and closes his eyes thinking of only Chris.
Max opens his eyes again and sees Chris crouched in a dark corner, Max looks around seeing four dark walls and he tentatively walks over to Chris.
"Chris?" he asks out quietly, Max watches as Chris shakes his head as he holds it in his hands.
"No! You're not here, too many voices all talking no room for me," Chris mutters to himself.
"Chris," Max asks again, crouching down in front of him and slowly extending his hand to touch Chris' back.
"Hey," Max says, Chris slowly lifts his eyes to meet Max', then tries to back away,
"No! Get away, it's hurting, too much hurt," Chris whines.
"Chris, listen to me, I wanna help you," Max says softly pulling him back in place with a firm hand, now on his shoulder.
"How can you help me when you can't help yourself," Chris assures back, still not meeting his eyes, Max sighs.
"Chris, I need you to snap out whatever the hell this is cos' I think you'll like to go home," Max tries again
"Home, too many voices, can't leave," Chris mumbles.
"Chris, it's like a light switch remember just flick them off," Max reminds him, however this seems to confuse Chris as he starts to shake his head. Max grips his shoulders tightly and begins to make circles with the pad of his thumb, which seems to sooth Chris also immediately, Chris begins to relax, Max moves his hands up to either side of Chris' neck, slowly moving over the pressure points, he feels his heartbeat quicken just for a second before it goes back to its normal rate.
"Chris, listen to me, just listen to my voice, no others, just mine, Chris," Max sooths, he continues to rub circles over his pulse points, calming the younger boy,
"Chris just like a light switch, just flick them off, one by one, Chris I'm here, Just keep thinking that and I always will be," Max continues. Max watches as Chris' hands grip his arms and begin to rub back.
"You mean it?" he asks in a whispers.
"As long as you'll have me," Max whispers as Chris finally looks up, Max sees his tired eyes begin to sparkle as he presses their foreheads together.
"I'll never leave you too," Chris whispers again, Max sighs as he feels Chris breath on his face. Max pulls Chris into stand position.
"How do I get out of your head?" Max worriedly asks now that Chris is okay, Chris looks up at Max through his lashes, he pulls him closer and captures his lips in a small kiss.
Max opens his eyes again to see Chris' emerald eyes sparkling up at him.
"Hey," Max whispers, he removes his hands from Chris' temple, as they move into standing position.
What was that all about...Max thinks
"You two are now connected," James says wisely, Chris and Max look at him with confusion on their faces.
"Try it, Max," Hannah encourages. Max looks at her and Chris in confusion.
Telekinesis....Chris thinks
"How do I.." Max trails off, Chris smirks at him.
Just raise your hand....Chris thinks, as Max flicks his hand and causing the objects on the alter to fly into the wall.
"Wow!" they both exclaim. Chris then smirks to himself and flicks his wrist causing the air around them to pick up and makes the men's waist cost and moves them a meet.
"Wow!" Chris exclaims again excitedly, which makes Max laugh a little.
"So that's it, we can use each other's powers?" Chris asks, thinking that it was too simple.
"Max helped you believe in yourself again and for you two there is no greater love," Michael says, biting his lip.
"But that can't be that simple," Chris argues.
"Christopher it is done and what is done can never be undo," James says again with a wise look on his face. Chris huffs in respond and looks at Max who has an equal look of confusion on his face.
"Let's go!" Michael cheers, Chris and Max watch as they load up an apples, putting on a talisman each and each getting broom from the alter.
"Go where?" Max asks.
"You two will rescue, Dylan, as it is written," James says, smiling at them as Chris and Max still look confused.
"Here, take these," Michael asks putting a necklace on each of them.
"These will protect you and allow you to pass into the house unnoticed," James explains, as he leads them out of the cave and into now darkening the forest.
"How are we gonna rescue him?" Chris asks annoyed as they walk through the forest, James stops and turns to them forming a circle in the forest grounds.
"You will sneak past the guards and then up towards the tower to Dylan's room, use your magic to get in and get Dylan out to where Hannah and Michael will be waiting," James instructs.
"Okay," Chris says thinking of all the things that could go wrong.
Which is a lot.....Chris thinks gravely
Ye, we better be careful...Max thinks back gripping Chris' wrist to pull him along to keep up with James, Michael and Hannah. The group of five walk through the muddy undergrowth it winds around a little stream that can be heard as they walk, Chris looks around seeing the little light that shines through the trees, it high lights Max' blonde hair making it glitter. Chris gives Max' hand a squeeze as Chris almost slips on a stray left on the ground, Max holds on tighter and pulls Chris along with him.
Careful....Max thinks
Chris looks up as the sun setting begins to blind him, they have come to a clearing the trees have spread more wide and they can see a house in the distance on the hill. Chris looks around and sees the meadow they were in when they arrived and for the first time notices that there is a gravel path leading off to the right. The group of five follow the path. They shortly arrive at a small village, where Chris can now see the house even closer; it's beautiful with the large gothic style windows dark wooden outside, it has a big arched doorway that is covering in climbing flowers that have turned golden in the autumn sun. Chris looks up as he hears James' thought, he sees a high tower coming out the right side of the house as if it was just built there for height, he sees a couple of windows; the one right at the top with its curtains drew; looking dark and lonely. Chris sweeps his eyes down falling on the grassy verge and old wooden posts that line the ground around it.
Weird...Chris thinks
"So why can't I just orb up there?" Chris asks, James turns back with a laugh saying "As if it would be that simple," Chris huffs and slows down as they enter the village with is full of people, however with the talismans on it as if the people see right through them as they walk past, like something you see if the corner of your eye but you never look again to check to see if it is really there. They continue to move through the thick crowds that are standing around talking and enjoying each other's company.
That never happens in our time....Chris thinks cheekily and smirks as Max gives a little chuckle knowing he heard it. They come to a standstill or rather Chris bumps into Max as he stops; they are standing in front of the huge wooden blocks that lead up to the house. Chris and Max watch as the three begin to sweep with the brooms that have been until now covered; from east to west. They watch fascinated has the magic begins to seep through and blue sparks.
"Quickly," Michael says urging James, Chris and Max through the gate way that the magic provided, Chris and Max quickly follow James through as he leads them up towards the right side of the house. They silently creep up to the side door; James raises his hand and tells the two to stop. They watch as two muscular guards standing just inside the open door.
Okay, now you two use your powers.....James thinks
Chris and Max glance at each other; Chris smirks at Max and holds his hand out a stream of ice flows out freezing the two guards.
"Show off," Max mutters, as the three simply glide past the now frozen guards, they make their way into a small passage way, Max turns to James with a puzzled look on his face.
"Why didn't we just walk straight past?" Max asks confused, Chris looks the same.
"They have powers, the necklace wouldn't of worked on them, or anyone else in this house, so we must be carefully," James advises, and bobs his head telling them to follow him again, they slowly creep along the small passage way to a set of stairs, they quickly and silently ascend the to the second floor, where guards are standing by the passage way straight ahead leaving the left and right passage way unguarded, they freeze and quickly go to turn back down to stairs, however they hear more footsteps coming up them, James quickly dashes right into a little alcove; Chris quickly sees the guards coming towards them from the hallway straight in front of them, Chris grabs Max' sleeve and pulls him to the left quickly and through a door a far down the passageway. The door slams lightly behind them, Max leans against the now closed door.
"That was close," Max sighs.
"Ye," Chris sighs back, he looks around the room and sees it is a bedroom with a large queen sized four poster bed decorated with red velvet curtains, Chris raises his eyebrows at the red silk sheets, Chris wonders over to the window and looks out over at the darkened village apart from the fire lit torches from the villagers that are around outside the house grounds.
So beautiful.....Chris thinks taking a deep breath, he turns and sees Max still leaning against door.
"Well come on, we've had a nice rest but they are probably gone now, so let's go back outside," Chris instructs turning back to the door, Max turns around and puts his hand on the handle and slowly turns it, he pulls it but it doesn't open.
"It's stuck," Max says in disbelief, Chris quickly makes his way over to the door and pushes Max out of the way.
"Let me do it," Chris moans, trying to open the door with a big pull, Chris pulls hard on the handle and with one big pull, he shoots backwards falling into Max, holding the door handle in his hands.
"OOOWWWWW!" Chris moans, Max pushes Chris off him and looks annoyed at Chris.
"Look what you've done now!" Max says annoyedly, he stands and points from Chris and the door handle to the door.
"Well I'm so sorry I was trying to help," Chris snaps back, standing too and glaring at Max.
"Well, now we can't get out!" Max snaps back, glaring back at Chris and storming up in his face.
"I just don't believe you, sometimes I can't believe it, you're just a kid," Max says anger taking its toll; Chris glares back as his anger increases too.
"Why do you have to be sure a child?" Max asks with a sneer.
"I'm not the one shouting at someone just because I tried to get us out of this room," Chris growls back, pushing Max up against the closed door and plunges his lips on his, pushing his tongue in Max' mouth; they battle for dominance as Chris grips Max' blonde hair pulling him closer and sucking his lower lip, Max moans and grabbing Chris' waist and slipping his hand up his back. Chris moves his lips down to Max' neck, he nips over his pulse point and Max holds on tighter to Chris, Max runs his hands up and down Chris' back making him shiver and groan, Chris moves his hand from Max' hair and down his arm, sliding it up the front of his shirt feeling his stomach. Max pushes Chris backwards; Chris opens his eyes looking confused, Max smirks at Chris pulling his waist coat and shirt off pulling Chris closer attacking Chris' chest with small kisses. Chris pulls at Max' shirt and waist coat quickly pushing them to the floor and feeling Max' skin beneath his fingers. Max begins to grind against Chris as Max pushes him on to the red silk sheets of the bed. Max' lips kiss and suck his way down Chris' chest he stops at his nipple sucking on it and making Chris' head fall back on to the sheets. Max gripped at Chris pulling his closer as they grind their hips together. Max makes quick work of getting rid of their trousers that end up next to their boots that came off earlier. Max' hands wonder down to rub Chris' thighs as Max takes his boxers off and reveal his hardened member. Max kisses Chris' tip and slowly he slowly begins to suck on him.
"Max," Chris moans digging his finger nails into Max' shoulders, Chris pulls Max' head off himself with a small pop. Max kisses his way back up to Chris' lips and kisses him passionately.
"I want you, now," Chris groans, pushing Max' boxers down and taking hold of him and rubbing his hand up and down his hardened body part, Max sticks his index finger and next two in Chris mouth making them wet. Max shifts Chris more on to the bed propping Chris up a bit so he can insert a finger, Chris gasps and shuts his eyes in pain; Max quickly enters a second finger moving him around widening his entrance and making Chris grip at Max more tightly. Max slowly leans over Chris preparing both of them; Max enters Chris slowly at first until he hears Chris thoughts and begins to thrust faster into him, Chris is soon screaming into Max' shoulder, Chris bites down hard making Max suck on his neck harder as he clutches at the red silk sheets. Max rides Chris faster until his erection is almost spilling over on to Max, Chris begins to pant as he reaches his end and cums all over Max' stomach, after another few thrusts Max spills himself into Chris. Max collapses on top of Chris; he pulls himself out of Chris and rolling himself on to his back pulling Chris along with him. Chris rests his now sweaty forehead on to Max chest.
"Chris! Max! Where are you!" a voice calls. Chris' head shoots up and they both jump apart, Chris painfully groans as he tries to quickly puts on his clothes, Max shoots him a look of sympathy.
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