Protector of SPR

Chapter 5 rewrite

Ok so this is the rewrite of chapter five that I put up a few days ago. I read through it and I'm extremely sorry for the people that had to go through the traumatic experience of reading it. But thanks to sumi20 for reviewing it but I am going to get rid of it. it will be sort of the same but less cliché and if I get good reviews on this rewrite the this chapter will be replacing the original. PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK!

What I saw before my eyes would have stopped my heart if mine were still beating. Before me stood Gene. The twin of the man I loved. And also of the man that had broken my heart by turning down my confession, when we had found said twin's body. After we had discovered him and Naru had taken him back to England, I had one final dream with him in it. We had said our good byes and left knowing we would never see each other again.

"Gene. What are you doing here?" I asked. My confusion had hit new heights and I was sure that if Naru were here to see my face he would have made a snide remark about my stupidity and the Lin and Madoka would have sat there and watched us in amusement as we bickered.

He just smiled at me and started to walk towards me. His smile was sincere and he looked truly happy. "Mai. How have you been?" he asked looking me over. I had changed from the last time I saw him. My hair was now in the middle of my back and my facial feature were more defined and I was starting to look more like a women then a scrummy teenage girl.

"I've been great. Of course your brother was driving me up the wall in the first couple of months that he had returned but I got back into the routine. Everyone else is fine to. But I guess you now the reason I'm here. Wherever here is." I replied, still waiting for my answer from the first question.

"Ya he can get pretty bad with his demands. Though I would have thought that he would have changed after he found me." He said looking around. His smile was still there and had moved so he was now about two feet away from me. "And to answer your question as to why I'm here. I'm here to guide you again Mai."

Guide me? What was he talking about? I'm dead. And I'm pretty sure I could walk myself to ere ever it was I was going to be going. But the thought of having Gene accompany me made me happy. He really was the sweeter one of the two twins. "So what your saying is that you're here to take to my resting place?"

"Umm no. I'm here to guide you so you can develop your powers."

"My powers?" ok now I was really confused.

"Yes your powers. You see Mai, there was a reason that you died at an early age. There was in fact a reason you fell off that roof. You needed to get rid of your body in order to develop your powers farther with out destroying your sole and everyone else's with in range of you. So fate took its toll and helped you out. This was your destiny from the beginning. Your parents never told this so you wouldn't count down the days till your death. Of course they never new when you would end up going so they took their secret with them to the grave. But the problem now is that when you were killed by that spirit your ability or what little you had of it down was erased from your memory, and now you need to re-learn how to use them again. But this time you need to learn to use them tot here full capacity.

I looked at him like was crazy. He had to be. I mean I'm dead. Unless I'm in a dream/coma world thing, I was pretty sure I was supposed to be walking in a field of grass right now with my parents. "What are you talking about Gene?"

He sighed. "What I'm saying Mai is that you still have a purpose on this earth. You still have unfinished business to attend to."

So that was why I was here instead of with my parents. "I see. So what is this purpose that I'm supposed to accomplish before I can move on?"

"You need to protect everyone Mai. You have been chosen to be their… how should I put this… guardian angel if you will. You will be learning how to use your PK and ESP to the fullest. You will also be learning how to use these powers so you can contact everyone and talk to them. As well as interact with them. Of course that will take a little while longer then you would like. But I'm sure you can figure it out."

He smile at the scowl that was now that was now on my face. but it was soon replaced with a smile when I realized what was going on. I was going to be able to talk and see everyone again! Monk and Ayako, and Lin and Madoka. The two couples that were the closest things I had to parents. And Yasu, John and, Masako! And as much as I hated to admit it I was excited to see Naru as well. Even though I had loved him after the first day back at the office I had realized that my love for him had disappeared when he left me. We had been friends since then. Of course I still liked him but I don't think I would ever love him again. But there was always the chance that I would once again fall for him. But if that time did com I wouldn't tell him because I would be afraid that he would reject me again and that it would ruin the fragile friendship we had now.

"So what do have to do first Gene" I asked now eager to go and tell my friends that I was here to stay.

"Well because you wont be able to talk to them like you did the first time you'll have to learn to communicate by changing temperatures and doing the simple poltergeist things to let them know your there. But you'll need to get used to the feel of being a spirit and of course you will be very weak when you first start so it will take a lot out of you."

I nodded at him. This was going to be hard. Not being able to talk to them or even have them know that I am still there. Oh well I guess that just means I get to have some time to think about what prank I could pull on them this time in order to get there attention.

Alright let me know what you think. And I'm pretty sure this chapter will be replacing the last one. Please R&R and thanks for reading! ^.^