SORRY PPL! JUST A A/N!
1st of all, sooo sorry for not being able to update before I leave my cruise. Yesterday I had many things to do and I couldn't finish typing it. BUT I will keep on writing on the cruise because…well because I like writing…a lot :D!
Now, on to a sad issue. Today I received my 1st flame from Avatarfanx2 . I was sad because your flame wasn't just a normal one but a very detailed one. Now you should be proud of yourself that you sent me on my cruise a bit sad! BUT! I WILL NOT BE PUT DOWN BY IT! I have received 350 other reviews that say that ppl love my story AND I THANK ALL OF THOSE PEOPLE FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART! Yes I do take all of my reader's reviews very seriously and try to make everyone happy. But my friend…yours was crap. Let me comment :
Your "plot" is WAY too overused, the "characters" (more like their evil twins
the way you portray them!) are BEYOND out of character and there is almost no
semblance between Rick Riordan's masterpiece that we call "Percy Jackson and
the Olympians" and the atrocity that this! Honestly, you should be ashamed to
have the audacity to call this a fanfiction!
Dude, which plot isn't way too overused? I mean, I read a lot of fan fictions and many of them have a happy ending, resulting in Percy and Annabeth getting married and a big wedding with everyone happy! That is the plot we all want our heros to end up with!
Annabeth is NOT some wench who constantly needs a strong guy by her side
all the time to keep her safe. She does that well enough on her own. Remember
all of the times that SHE had to save PERCY'S sorry ** from monsters? And she
is the greatest strategist and architect of her day! I could go on but I will
not.
In MY story, Annabeth was hurt very bad! That brought her down very much and it changed her! I did say that Annabeth changed for the worse but with Percy around, she got better! And in MY story, they met at 17 years old, not 12!
2. Percy is NOT some sappy idiot who only thinks about his girlfriend 24/7! He
has to save the world, hello! He really can not afford to! And then there's
the fact that he's the most sarcastic and satirical character in the entire
series! Agai, there are a million things wrong with this but I will stop for
now.
We all know that he isn't some sappy idiot. BUT REMEMBER THAT I DIDN'T MENTION ANY PROPHECIES IN MY STORY! HELLO! THAT'S WHAT ALTERNATE UNIVERSE MEANS!
Nico and Thalia are NOT saps!
What the hell? Just because I add a bit of softness to their character doesn't make them saps! And dude, if you hate this chapter, wait till you read the next…if you will :P
4. Bianca is probably the most down-to-earth girl in the a
series! She would NOT care about gossi AT ALL!
How do you know she's very down to earth? She may be in Rick's books, but have you seen her in a highschool environment? To my eyes, she would be one of those girls who likes to hear a lot of gossip BUT doesn't start ones herself. She just likes to be updated with the school's gossip.
5. Poseidon and Athena would NOT try to destroy their children's relationship
with each other due to their feud because they both love their children and
ONLY want their happiness! Also, Athena is the goddess omd wisdom which would
make her know that she cannot be a wise goddess if she does not evenlet her
own daughter pursue her happiness!
In my story, they're the clueless parents! Get on with it! The other plot I mentioned had the things you said, about Poseidon and Athena agreeing that they're children's happiness are the most important thing of all…but it would be boring and straight forward. Can you blame me for trying to spice up my story? Geez!
6. Luke would NEVER rape Annabeth because he ALWAYS loved her like a SISTER!
Also, if Luke had raped her (in the real nooks, not the perverted version that
you have right here hat quite honestly is a piece of trash) WHY THE HELL would
Annabeth have stood by him until the end even in the Final Battle?
DUDE! YOU YOUSELF TOLD ME TO ADD TO MY STORY SUMMARY THAT IT IS ALTERNATE UNIVERSE! THERE IS NO FINAL BATTLE, LUKE DIDN'T MEET ANNABETH WHEN THEY WERE 6 [I think she was 6 I forgot]. In MY story, Luke was her 1st crush and boyfriend who took advantage of her and raped her!
7. Honestly, the list could go on and on but I will stop here for many
reasons. But, it is pretty obvious that you are a teenage, hormone-crazed
fangirl who is obsessed with Twilightand is waiting for her "knight in shining
armour" to come and takeher off into the sunset onhisnoble steed
Ehh…1st of all I am a fanboy thank you very much. Yes I love the Twilight saga BUT it makes me puke with all the love and sappiness in it. Seriously. I love it…but it's too much. I'm more obsessed with PJO and Harry Potter :D!...and some Lord Of The Rings :D
Now…with all that being said…I am going to go and enjoy my cruise. I just wish I could've talked to you face to face. I would've wasted less time typing XD I know I forgot to mention something in my remarks…but I can't put a finger on it :P oh well.
See You all in 1 week :D!