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So next chapter we see two new faces and one familiar one.
The Pak.
It was just one of those days at a park. Tak and Zim just being there to get away from GIR. Mimi
at a pet shop trying to get away from GIR. And Helena and Dib stalking Zim and Tak. Tak was busy
playing with a leaf. It's not really childish, but in late Autumn and a planet you've been on for 2 ½ years
you have to wonder why the leaves fall off a tree. But on Irk there was a plan about to set into motion.
On Irk 300 degrees ( Roughly 11:45 AM)
Krii Tisvana
I was lounging in my chair. "So have you finished checking the prisoners and.......Her?" I asked.
The guards brought in a sad looking Quinn. She looked up. "Hello Tis I see you decided to bring me
out am I on parole yet?" She asked gleaming."Scum like you don't deserve parole." I hissed. She had
by then left my glance. She stared out into the dark amount of space. I was no fool, she could make
mirror matter kill us all.....But that would kill her too. "Guards put a Vortian guard on her" I ordered.
"You have got to be kidding me, you think this can stop me?" She laughed. I glared, "We have cut off
your supply of Antimony and Xenon." I hissed. "Oh Woe is me, you think I'm a friggin' Addie" She
said sarcastically. "You use it to drug yourself up and like a human get high, you get more powerful
you overuse it and ignore it's potential deadly power." I informed her. "There isn't a damn thing wrong
with that stuff!" She struck out. "It's not just because you're in a rehab thing, I want to also protect you.
Because I think there's hope" I hissed. I'd never try and hurt someone. "Hope? There is no hope, when
I get freed I'll Kill all of you! I want my Empire I so rightfully deserve!" She laughed insanely. I stared.
"I'm sorry you get me in that damn pitch black cell so long I can't pick myself up." She excused. I
shook my head and summoned her away.
"No one deserves you though"
(A/N: I realize how bad this line can sound. She meant it Like No one deserves abuse)
In the Park
Helena
"He's planning something Helena!" Dib hissed. "Dib, no he isn't stop being so paranoid" I said
boredly. I go on a simple trip to the park with my boyfriend and he's busy hunting my friends. I don't
care if they're aliens and the male is trying to take over the world when he has time, he's so
incompetent that it doesn't matter. I decided to get up and say hi. "Helena what're you doing?!" Dib
asked. I sighed and continued my path towards them. I grinned at Tak's pulling of a leaf. " Hi Tak, Hi
Zim" I greeted. "Hi Helena" They said busy. I noticed Zim was carving the Irken symbol into the tree.
"Old habits die hard eh Zim?" I asked. He ignored me. "What are you doing Tak?" I asked. "Why do
the leaves of the trees change colors?" She asked. "...You're from an advanced alien species and you
don't know that?" I asked. "Irk doesn't have trees." She explained. I decided they didn't want me around
so naturally I stayed and talked about stuff no one wants hear. "So anyway Courtney said that Dan
said-" I continued. Tak was starting to look annoyed and Zim had a twitch. "That in a parallel universe
if an equinox especially a galactic one were to randomly happen then the qualities of the phenomenon
of life would surely disappear" Tak set down her leaf and Zim stopped carving. "What?" They asked.
"I don't know. I have no clue what I said." I said shrugging. Something about balance. "Where's
Mimi?" I asked. They shrugged. "I think she hangs out around the pet shop" Tak said shrugging. "So
are you two going out?" I asked. I most likely knew the answer, being a modest genius and all that, but
I was curious. "No! We're just friends!" They both said too quickly. I nodded. They had to admit they
were more sooner or later. Preferably sooner, the quicker I could get the word out the quicker kids
would stop flirting with Zim. Like, Zita, Britanny (That Bitch doesn't deserve him), and....Me.
I had no intentions of cheating on Dib, but old crushes die hard. In my case my crush on Zim will die
so hard it's relative to falling off a building after a gun to my head. "Okay" I said. I observed the two.
Every once and a while their hands would accidentally touch, so I know there's hope in them. Despite
my genius, I'm in to all that Drama. "Well now that I think of it Dib, maybe I should tell the
government about Tak and Zim, it would be a breakthrough to Science! And who knows what miracles
in science they could have been with holding! But they are my friends...Yes this is perplexing..." I
shouted at them. They ran like Mom did from Dad. I sighed and held my locket.
"Of course you ran. You couldn't accept dad, and you couldn't accept me."
Meet Mini M! (AKA Meow!)
Mimi
I sighed as I looked through the Window. It was sad that I was eternally stuck in this Cat suit. My
stupid zipper was stuck. I only had one perk. I was cute. "Well I guess I should be going" I muttered as
I walked back to the base. "Meow!" I heard a kitten cry. I looked down. "Aw...a Kitten!" I blurted. I
looked up. "But Zim and Tak would never permit it." I sighed and walked along. Maybe the Cat could
hide. Or Zim would ignore it. Yeah perhaps Zim would be his ignorant, idiotic, oblivious self and
ignore it. "Heh I didn't even know I was a breed."
Quinn Escapes
Narrator
Meanwhile on Irk Private Keltic and Nik were guarding the Cell of Irk's most revered villain. Every
moment the Green eyed Nik would turn to his Amber eyed co-guard and try to start some conversation.
Keltic was a revered female Irken. She was Bisexual, so it didn't bother Nik. She had fought in a war
on Meekrob, and when The Tallest were cornered she saved them...Considering the fact Zim was with
her, it didn't pass too well, that she was still baby-sitting soldiers and felons. But her favorite was Zim.
She got to play with him for a while. Boy was he fun to tick off. A simple talk of the Tallest sent him in
to panic. But she was now guarding Quinn. A prisoner she couldn't afford to even allowed to breathe
the air without probable death. Keltic sighed as she heard movement inside the cell.
Quinn Escapes
Keltic
"What's her problem?" Nik asked me. My little senses of my.....Problems tingled from two directions.
I was a revered solider Dammit! I'm supposed to guard not talk! "I don't know Private" I hissed. I
grabbed my antennae and started to curl them. "Let me out! I can't take it! I need air!" I heard Quinn
called. "Ouch poor lady." Nik said, I rolled my eyes. "Might I remind you that we're guards not care
-takers?" I asked. Her tone got seductive. "Wait are you two....Males?" She asked. "I'm a female, but
might as well be male. I have no interest in them if you know what I mean" I hissed to her. I wasn't
ashamed of myself. I saved the Tallest! "Oh, I am so Lonely in here! I hath wronged you two! But if
my Addiction did one thing it gave a great body..." She cried seductively. Nik's antennae perked up.
"Private, don't even think about it." I hissed. My eyes shifted towards her cell. "And, I've been wanting
a.........Partner" She said her voice getting into a full deep seductive voice. "You, uh know she does
sound a little lonely..." Nik said sweating. My antennae were slightly perked up. I'm a cold female so
if I'm just now getting the message, then Nik must be like a kid in a toy commercial. "I mean, I'm
starved here. You two don't think I look like a killing machine do you?" She asked. I know she doesn't
look it, but I know she is. I worked under the bitch. When those smeets crashed through the wall I
called it off for her. That weird glasses wearing girl stabbed me and jumped off. I was unconscious for
the rest of the fight, but when I woke up......I gasped. That prisoner. He had come back and had taken
Quinn down. In all honesty I liked him for that. Probably the only other boy besides Nik I've ever cared
about.
"I'm going to check on her." Nik announced. I rolled my eyes. He walked in, leaving me to think
about that prisoner who saved my life. In a way. "Wait!" I yelled trying to grab him. I heard screaming
from within. I looked at my tazer. I tried that trick once, and that got me electrocuted. She walked out.
"Hello my dear Keltic" She hissed. "Where's Nik?" I asked. She pointed inside the cell. I gasped. She
had killed him. "Yes I killed him, but dear, I can't afford to let you live either." She laughed and pulled
out a gun. "This is the same gun I killed my mother with. And the Rest of the Vort Scientists with." she
laughed. I backed up as she pulled the trigger. My arm had been scratched. I wasn't going to let her kill
me. "Hold still dearie. It'll only sting for a second." She requested. She stabbed me instead. I fainted.
Back at the Base
Mimi.
"Stay! You aren't wanted here!" I hissed to the Kitten. It followed me without a clue as to what's going
on, then again it's an earth cat. "Hi Mimi!" I heard GIR call. "Hi GIR, where's Zim and Mistress?" I
asked. He shrugged. "They's gone walkin'! I's want to walk too!" GIR said. I rolled my eyes. "Maybe
later GIR I have to-" "MEOW!" I heard the Cat cry. "I also have a kitten to get rid of." I hissed. "Aw I
wanna keep it!" GIR cried. "Are you kidding? Zim will dismantle both of us!" I cried. "But you said
Mastah was weak!" GIR yelled. I cringed. "Did she?" I heard Zim's voice behind me. "Well I'll fix
that" He hissed. Of course his voice had Helena outsmarting him AGAIN written all over it. "Well I'm
sorry that Helena is smarter than you, but you still owe me for the disguise." I said nervously. "I owe
you? The thing makes me look stiff and with only two facial expressions! I look like I'm from that
game that Bethesda keeps renaming!" He said. I grinned, if he actually had a personality he would
realize that what he said was hilarious in a way. "Zim let it go." Mistress said rolling her eyes. He
glared at her and forgot about it. Amazing what his crush can make him do, although I think he's still
too oblivious to realize it. "So are you going to keep the kitten?" Mistress asked. I blinked and turned
to GIR. The cat obviously meant more to him. "It looks just like you." Mistress laughed. Difference
between her and Zim? She has a personality. Difference between me and the cat? I can friggin' speak.
"Aw it likes me!" GIR said with the kitten asleep on his head.
Alright, sorry I stole a comment from Yahtzee on Oblivion, but I just had to. I've drawn Zim's
disguise and he's hot to me. Now the Cat does have purpose in the story, and I plan to review how
Keltic does here. If Keltic becomes a normal name among FF like Lon, or Zoal, then I plan to start a
Fiction Press series about Keltic, a Soldier in a war. And yes I used Friggin' too much. I was a little ticked off this chapter, and my Co-Creator is mad at my lack of punctuation. Of course since that's her
job to fix I believe that it's helping this story Go somewhere If Yahtzee reviewed FF stories he would be
so harsh on this one about how it never Goes somewhere that It would discourage me to continue, but
I digress, I planned to introduce Quinn into the Story later, but since this is Keltic's debut, she needs a
story.
So before you go to my house and set it on fire throwing printed out pages of my stories, please remember, That my spacing HAS to be a glitch. I've checked it. And It passes in word document, and
everything else, it's a glitch.