Hey thanks to 'Cookie05' for the advice, I didn't mean it to sound like I was ignoring you on you're first review. I realized that if I put it in huge paragraphs it's harder to read so I'll try and break it down.
I unpacked my stuff and finished after about an hour. I looked around the room for something to do; I glanced at the radio sat on my desk. I grinned and switched it on. I fist pumped the air as my favourite song 'domino' by Jessie j came on.
I grabbed one of my hoodies, screwing it up and swinging it about while I danced around the room. "I'm feeling sexy and free" I sang along. I froze as I heard giggles coming from behind me, I turned around slowly and smiled nervously.
"nice moves" liam said with a smirk. I shrugged and continued dancing. Soon enough we were all doing
The Inbetweeners dance all together. The song ended and with all burst into fits of laugher. "what's going on up there?" Tracy yelled up. I rolled my eyes. Adults suck! "we're having a right party!" I yelled back so I changed the station and it came up with 'im sexy and I know it' we all screamed and started dancing again. I turned the radio to the loudest it went and Tracy came into my room- my fucking room, how rude!
I turned the radio off and everyone became silent. I strutted up to Tracy and I stopped when our faces became inches a part. "don't you knock?" I asked narrowing my eyes, almost glaring at her. She copied me actions. "don't try to act smart, Kathryn" she said with a hint of a smirk.
I clenched my fists so hard that it hurt. "don't, call, me KATHRYN!" I screamed making everyone jump. They all avoided my eye sight, looking around for something to focus on. Tracy's mouth dropped open and she remained speechless. "what's going on?" mike asked as he entered the room.
His face was priceless when he saw the mess. My clothes everywhere, everyone's shoes all over, my books on my bed and my make up scattered all over. "what happened in here?" he asked, as he ran his hand through the little hair he had.
"we maybe had a bit of a party" I said shrugging. "no big deal" his face became red with anger. I sighed "fine I'll clean It up" I said as I started to push people out. "same time next week, right guys?" I said sarcastically just to annoy them. They all agreed and left.
I started to pick up some of my clothes but froze I felt a presence behind me. I spun round and groaned "what?" I asked. She sat on my bed. "Kathy, you don't need to show off in front of everyone you know" my mouth literally dropped open. I let out a laugh. "you'd know all about showing off wouldn't you Tracy!" I replied as I threw my hoodie into my wardrobe.
"why are you always so aggressive?" she asked with an annoying calm voice. "because she's 'ard init" liam said as he walked past my room. I held in fits of laughter as Tracy rolled her eyes. She looked at me for an answered. "I really don't know, now….get out of my room" I replied with a mocking smile. Her face hardened. "will you stop with the attitude, I'm trying to be nice and you throw it back in my face" she said as she stood up from the bed.
I held in urges to punch her in the nose. "I don't need your pity!" I yelled at her. She stepped back in surprise but just rolled her eyes in response. "you know what, I give up, I was only trying to help" she snapped and slammed the door behind her.
That's it. I got my phone out and diled the number. Tracy beaker has to go!