Hey everybody! Koolaid Dude is here, eating stuff from your fridge.
Sorry this is taking too long. But you all would understand about me being a senior in High School, dealing with the end of first trimester. So far, I had been grounded for poor grades. I was barely able to scratch a B in a few classes (With some grace from Fate.) Life isn't pretty. You take special events, add four days worth of the flu, then mix it with the last 9 remaining days of the trimester ending at November 4th, add nervousness about the future and what you're going to do next outside of high school. Stir like Satan is threatening to kill you if you don't stir. You've gotta take a few things in quickly, just like taking notes during lectures where the teacher isn't going to repeat anything. Can't tell you the hours I spent trying and fighting for a decent grade… And my dad's quote for the "Greatest key to success" doesn't help either. Especially when he keeps repeating them over and over, "Always be better than you need to be." Surprisingly, that is the greatest key to success. ('_')
Anyway, thanks for seeing the chapters. I'd really like some feedback. Gives me a few points about how to improve anything or change stuff. Call it a nervous conscience getting in the way if you want. I have other stories I simply vomited out and still working on that last chapter. You'll see it as soon as I can get some time over on the weekends, WHICH DOESN'T COME SOON ENOUGH! XC
You all will, I swear this on my grave, get to see the last chapter. I am also declaring to throw out a few details that should have gone in, but since I couldn't modify anymore I could do nothing. You can call them Deleted scenes if you all want. Either way, there will be some details. (I might try and take some of the chapters and throw in the missing details.) Who knows? It might work, might not. Oh, hey. I have a nifty sort of… Machine, Word document sort of… Thing. It's called a Neo AlphaSmart… I think. It's sort of like the modern version of a typewriter. I heard that it's for people with social or writing disorders… I bought it anyway. 211.2+ pages is the maximum space in this little sucker. That's more than enough to store my top story :D. What's rly cool is that it's got its own spell-check. (The words it contains needs some help and modifying. _) So, yeah. I just spent 10-20 dollars on a typewriter that has spell-check, I don't know the admin password on this damn thing, and I spent some of my life trying to get grades and figure out what to do next.