Well, i'm still not getting the reviews I would like, but it's not really my decision. I just would like to remind you all that just saying: great chapter. Took maybe five seconds. Do you really not have five seconds? I allow anonymous reviews! Just take the time, guys. I mean really, five seconds to make some dudes day. What else can you do in five seconds? I'm sure nothing too important. Unless you're defusing a bomb with five seconds left in which case you probably should not be reading this at the time. Anywho, I did get some new reviews. So, here we go.
Crimson Banner: Ponies? Yes, read it!
FireBreath5150: I'm sure you're talking about the already done aquatints with pinkie, or thought of that? Yes, I liked how I put that there. I hope you do too!
ShiningShadow1965: Thank you! I really don't like it too much when people ship lesbianism in stories. I don't think pinkie and Octavia will be together, but I have plans for things like shipping but not exactly.
Now, on to le show!
"SURPRISE!" I heard the yelling of many a pony. After the lights flashed on, the colours of many ponies overwhelmed the library. Everypony started talking to each other. I turned to see pinkie! She still smiled wide.
"I told you I would throw you a 'welcome back to ponyville' Party!" she exclaimed. Twilight sparkle came up to us.
"Wait, a welcome back to ponyville party? Night Waves was here in ponyville before? When?" she asked.
"Yes, Yes, and ten years ago!" pinkie answered. I nodded my head.
"I was a traveller, remember? I spent two weeks here in ponyville, and I had a great time with pinkie," I said. I noticed that more ponies came around me. One I recognized as applejack. Three others came up. One was white with a purple stylish mane and tale. She was an earth pony. The other two were both pegusi. One was butter yellow with bright pinkie mane and tale. She hid behind the white one. The last one was cyan with rainbow mane and tail.
"Pinkie and I had a fun adventure actually," I said. "So, who are your friends here, pinkie?" I asked.
"Everypony!" she answered.
"Ok, can you please introduce me to these three? I've already met Twilight and Applejack,"
"This is Rainbow Dash, the fastest flyer in equestria! She's the element of harmony loyalty and loves pranks," she pointed to the rainbow maned one. "She is undeniably cool! Now, this is Rarity," she gestured to the white one. "She owns the boutique in town and makes the best cloths in equestria! She is the element of generosity! And this is fluttershy! She's really shy, but always comes around! She loves and cares for animals and is the element of harmony Kindness! AJ is the element of honesty and Twilight is the lost element of magic!" she exclaimed.
"Pinkie, did you really have to tell him our elements?" Rainbow asked.
"He wanted to know!" she said. They looked to me.
"Well, ya, I did. You're like, my hero's!" I said. I was almost completely overwhelmed with excitement. But, I was good at holding it in.
"Wow, really? That's great! Guys, we're someponies hero's!" rainbow exclaimed.
"We're not all that great," Applejack said.
"Of course you are! Twice you defeated evil! Man I hated it when discord was around. He kept making my food jump away from my mouth when I tried to eat it," I said.
They all smiled. "So, whats your cutie mark? It looks like a violin," Twilight said.
"Close," I answered. "It's a viola. The big brother of the violin. Not many know of it because the popularity being at said violin, but there is only one difference. That is that the violin has one string higher and the viola has one lower," I said. "You can play the violin if you play viola. It has the same notes except one goes a lot higher," I answer. "although, I really think it should have been my voice for a cutie mark. But. . . my mom discouraged my voice. She told me let the mares sing. She says they deserve it for taking so much, and I quote, 'shit from dead beat colts and stallions that only want to take advantage of them. You'll be the same way, night waves, you'll be the same exact way,'" I said. All six of them looked at me with sad looks.
"Is there something about your mom you'd like to get out?" Twilight asked obviously noticing the connection I had between my mom and I.
"No!" I yelled. The looked at me with scared and apologetic looks. "I mean, it will only anger me. And, I have a problem with anger. If I get the slightest bit angry, I blow up. It's happens too much," I warned.
"What was the worst incident?" Rarity asked. I felt immediate quilt.
"I don't know if I can say it," I said. They looked at me and sighed.
"Oh well," pinkie tried to change the subject. "This is a party. So, let's Par-Tay!" pinkie said. I smiled. Awkward moment averted. For now.
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Well, most of the rest of the party went swimmingly! Hm, yes quite. Anywho, and what not, like I said, most of it went well. Most. The end has a different story. Like I said before, I have a temper. Even when just pushed a little, there is gonna be a problem.
I have had a nice time meeting many ponies around the party. But, when I was making small talk with a vinyl scratch, somepony comes up and interrupts us.
"So, he says to me, "I havn't eaten in days!' and he's holding and apple and chewing on something. Then he says, 'except for this. Hey, come on, I deserve something from you!' so I decide, yeah, you need a hoof sandwich! So I gave it to him!" I told vinyl. She cracked up. Just then, some brown coloured pony with ragged blue hair came up to me. He pushed me aside.
"What do you think you're doing?" He asked in a deep tone. The party went silent as ponies started to watch. Pinkie stood between AJ, Twilight, rainbow, rarity, and fluttershy.
"Uh oh! I hope he remembers how to fight," pinkie whispered to the other five. Then a light bulb appeared over her head.
"I'm talking with vinyl. Why?" I asked starting to get annoyed.
"I won't allow you speak to her! She's my mare!" and these are the ponies my mom spoke about. At least she was good for something.
"You can't own a mare! They have their rights," I said. Pinkie then intervened.
"Hey, ya know what? Lets go to the snack table, Night!" she said to me.
"You know this prick?" the brown turd asked. "Two of my women know that freak? Look at him! He's the colour of evil. Read and black. You're cutie mark is a violin? What a pussy!" he said.
"Knock it off, thunder!" rainbow dash stepped up in front of me and pinkie.
"Oh, look. Another one of my women! Man, I like you the most!" he went up to her and forcibly kissed her. Rainbows cheeks went red with embarrassment. After that, with anger. Mine did the same.
"I'm glad I'm better than you, you jerk!" she yelled. Pinkie tried to push me away, but I was gonna blow. Anger flowed through my vanes. Apparently he was now angry.
"Oh I see how it is," he went back to Rainbow dash. He pushed her onto the floor onto her back. He started stomping on ranbow dashes torso with much force. The crowd gasped as she gasped for air. I had enough I went up to him and kick him in the face. He flew back wards. His head hit the wall and he was knocked out. I went to rainbow and automatically changed to caring.
"Rainbow!" I would ask if she was ok, but obvious answer is obvious. She started coughing up blood.
"Get her to the hospital!" I yelled. A couple of nurses who where at the party did so. I turned my attention back to the guy. My anger turned from him hurting rainbow, to him hurting me. He opened his eyes and looked at me. For some reason, the elements besides rainbow stayed. I stared into his eyes, and he did so to mine.
"My first day in ponyville and you make me blow my fuse. Bad mistake. Day one, no fun. Day two, be warned. Don't mess with me unless you don't like living," I warned.
"You're just a selfish jerk. You want every mare for yourself! You're a man slut!" I kicked him in the mouth.
"You need to learn to shut your cake face, tough guy!" I said. I turned to see everypony staring at me I looked to the elements. I then, like always, felt even more quilt. I ran out the door.
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