And I return! It is time for le story to update! Reviewer response!
Alecofeqeuistria: How could I NOT use a simply awesome dragon OC? I'll make sure to read it. Also, if you need any help, I'm always here. Always. Because I check email on my smart phone, so I know who needs what. Elements shmelements. Swords FTW.
Beef Franklin: Depressing stuff? I have one chapter of an original story you must read to understand depressing. Punch Jordan eh', I should. But I won't stoop down to his level. (He constantly strikes me and is in denial.) happiness? Maybe. . .
ShiningShadow1965: trust is but a mindset. I trust nothing completely. Just saying,
Swikybrosky: GREEEEEEENNNNNN DDDAAAAYYYYYYYYY! guess what I listen to while writing! Sheet music is shit hard. But, years of playing the Viola has tought me to read it as if a book that is a bit complicated for me. Thanks for not criticizing me for being against dubstep. You seem to be one of the few who listen to it who aren't jerks or idiots. Also, my brother doesn't like Green Day. Just think. I HAVE TO LIVE WITH THIS. And Beef wonders why I write dark stuff.
Volt The Great: Le Invasion!
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I sat in a cave. This was the same cave I had slept in with a dragon. I trusted him with my life right now; I had nowhere else to go. We had run out of food. It disgusted me when the dragon made us a cooked chicken to eat. I only ate cause I was starving almost to death. I had been up here for days without food until that chicken.
I hate irony. I felt my sanity slipping. Maybe I need to change to go back to ponyville. Maybe singin could help. It always does.
It's empty in the valley of your heart
The sun, it rises slowly as you walk
Away from all the fears
And all the faults you've left behind
The harvest left no food for you to eat
You cannibal, you meat-eater, you see
But I have seen the same
I know the shame in your defeat
But I will hold on hope
And I won't let you choke
On the noose around your neck
And I'll find strength in pain
And I will change my ways
I'll know my name as it's called again
Cause I have other things to fill my time
You take what is yours and I'll take mine
Now let me at the truth
Which will refresh my broken mind
So tie me to a post and block my ears
I can see widows and orphans through my tears
I know my call despite my faults
And despite my growing fears
But I will hold on hope
And I won't let you choke
On the noose around your neck
And I'll find strength in pain
And I will change my ways
I'll know my name as it's called again
So come out of your cave walking on your hooves
And see the world hanging upside down
You can understand dependence
When you know the maker's land
So make your siren's call
And sing all you want
I will not hear what you have to say
Cause I need freedom now
And I need to know how
To live my life as it's meant to be
And I will hold on hope
And I won't let you choke
On the noose around your neck
And I'll find strength in pain
And I will change my ways
I'll know my name as it's called again
I stopped singing. The world might turn upside down soon, but mine already has.
. . .
"Landing now sir. Pads down, shields up. Intelligent life has been found. Species unknown," a women at a computer spat out piece after piece of information.
"Thank you," the captain said. He pushed a button on the side of his chair. "Attention. This is your captain speaking. We are minutes from landing on Earth Two. There is intelligent life. Get the guns. Be ready just in case. Fight with Glory, die with honor, survive with victory," he stopped pressing the button. They felt and heard a thump.
. . .
The elements of Harmony stood outside with many royal guards, princess Cadence, Celestia, and Luna, and Twilights brother, Shining Armor.
A Large disk stood in front of them. The disk was about as long as three of the larges mountains on it's side, and as tall as twenty large trees stacked. It opened and a pad went down. An old man walked down. They didn't recognize the species. They looked not surprised. The being walked down in front of the alicorn princess, Celestia. Many humans in uniforms walked out as well. They held odd pieces of machinery.
"Take us to your leader," It spoke. Celestia stood tall as everypony else let out a small gasp as it spoke.
"You are already with her," She spoke. Every human gasped as she spoke.
"Although we have yet to know each other, I have to ask a favor. It is for the sake of our race. Our home planet, Earth, has no space and too many toxins to inhabit. We ask of your permission to acquire some of your land," he spoke.
"Straight to the point. We must negotiate. Come with me to the royal palace of Canterlot. If we have any trouble between the races, we will not allow you any land. Understood?" Celestia asked.
"I thought we were going to the castle to negotiate," the captain said. After a quick light he appeared in a room. Celestia stood by him.
"Welcome to my castle," she said.
. . .
"Now, go dog. I must attend to work," he command a diamond dog.
"Yes master," it sputtered. It then left.
"The humans arrived on time. Now, to manipulate the mind. Which one shall fire? Hmm, no, I like this one. I don't like that one, maybe him, Ahh! Yes!" he said. There was a sniper in the window of the disk. Discord made him pull the trigger.
. . .
"So, if there are any arguments at all between the pony kind and us mankind, we will be forced away?" the captain asked.
"Yes,"
"But, it is in our nature to have pride come first. Before saftey, even. We wish to be known. To not be forgotten. We do not wish harm, just pride," he said. "And a space to create a village. We can help you advance in technology very quickly," Celestia though.
"Fine. I will not blame all the humans, just the one that harms. That one will be executed. Understood?" Celestia asked. He nodded.
"We have a deal, then," the captain spoke. They went to sign a tread.
. . .
"Damnit!" Discord screamed into the cave. "No, No, And No! Alright, the humans are gonna be good buddies ey'? I can't believe that sniper missed too! Alright, tie to bring in the fire alien demons!" Discord yelled.
Alrighty then! Next chapter to come soon. As in, tommorow. Hopefully. School starts soon. Like, in two weeks. It'll be hard for me to keep up the streak.